At the Beginning of Naruto's Game, the Celestial Master Abandoned His Disciples and Came to the God King.

This thing about Minazuki, it all comes from the dregs of previous fandoms. After all, no one was very strict in the past. There was only the Snow clan in Kirigakure Village, and there was no Minazuki at all.

The writing is okay, but the plot is very messy, a little hard to understand, and the logic is inconsistent. I am 5 years old, I have killed jounin, and I don't train hard, so I just carry out this kind of death mission. I don't quite understand it. Also, aren't they acting as bait when performing the mission? Why did they go to Hinata's side? There is also the point of conflict. Doesn't Hinata have a white eye and won't be exposed? Even if he is not exposed, won't the genjutsu be exposed? Then he kills people directly, so what's the use of pretending?

The writing is quite good, but the title and the content seem to be two different things. Let me go.

Don't dare to kill Tobirama, just lower your head when you see someone else, be cowardly, let Izuna take the lead, and you, Fenghou Qimen Bailian, know that you are going to die, but you still go, the key is to let people set up the formation.

The male protagonist has a very high starting point, but ends up feeling very depressed and without any sense of enjoyment. As a result, the male protagonist is also a headless fly with no charisma.

The writing in the previous life was too awesome, and it seems that the protagonist is a bit tired now.

I didn't read the main text, but it was strange to read the introduction. It's Taoist, it's Hades, it's ninja. Is this kind of fusion really worth watching?

Author, there is no Sui Wuyue in the Snow Clan. Is this surname good? Shui Wu Yue Bai, does that mean he takes his father's surname?

Even though he is not strong enough, he still spreads the golden light curse to poison people. I am curious how many people withdrew after seeing this.

Then at the end, I found out that I was lost in the interior scene, and my body in reality was exhausted.

Chapter 50 of the main article is not fun at all. Keep pressing.

"Naruto", "The Abandoned Disciple of the Heavenly Master" and "The God King"

Being so aggrieved, people bullied me to the point of being bullied. I don't even dare to kill for fear of ruining the plot. It seems that the protagonist is awesome, but in fact he is always failing. Abuse of the main text, right? I'm leaving, goodbye.

The title of this book is very confusing. God King, Celestial Master, Naruto, God King of Greece, Celestial Master of China, and Naruto of Japan. You can mix them up. I can only say that the title of the book is very confusing.

It's Uchiha again... I'll take it easy... For the time being, I think "if the protagonist is an Uchiha, I'll die from an alien." The number of blood eyes of the Uchiha protagonist at the beginning has caught up with the entire Uchiha family in the original novel. Not to mention they all evolved into Samsara Eyes. In addition, nine out of ten books are Konoha conspiracy theories (after all, they are naturally opposed to the village senior officials)

The novels of the Warring States Period are good to read but difficult to write. There is a lot of room for imagination, and it is difficult to grasp the characterization and plot progression. Come on, author.

There was a ghostly special jounin in the ninja era

It's getting more and more abusive, and I don't feel any better.

Uchiha Madara's Fist Holding Ceremony There are also some scriptures that the protagonist talks about. Many of these scriptures contain stories of historical celebrities. Sometimes a simple sentence contains the historical deeds of ancient sages. How can you ask a native of the ninja world who does not understand Chinese history to understand? A person who does not understand Chinese culture and history will never understand the meaning of idioms and allusions.

The more I write, the worse I get 🙂

It's a bit boring. The ninja world of the Warring States Period was cruel and dark. Everyone has known about this for a long time. It's obvious that the protagonist has cheats, but it still lacks highlights.

I feel like the writing is unclear, especially the combat part.

Has the author become stupid recently or the protagonist has become stupid?

The protagonist is like a lone star, and no one around him has an easy time. I guess Ban or Quan Na in the main world may die alone.

It's interesting to find another way, you can follow it.

I finished reading it in three days, and there were so many other abilities that it was said that it was useless in the end.

The two brothers have cultivated to the point that the past, future and present in endless time and space, and different parallel world lines are all the same brothers. In terms of realm, it is almost the same as Daluo or the other side. Except that it does not have the power to "open the sky", it is basically the same. Really, they are the most awesome Six Paths brothers in fan fiction. Just to prevent Liu Dao from "losing" early and there is still a plot to write, what's the point of strengthening it like this? ? ?

By the way, the protagonist doesn't know how to use both hands? The interrogation actually uses a spiritual weapon

The title of this book sounds like a novel. Change Tianshi Abandoned Disciple to Tang Sect Abandoned Disciple.

Damn, I'm so frustrated that I can turn into a kaleidoscope of anger 😡😡😡😡😡