Douluo: Heaven Rewards Diligence, Tang San Was Broken by Liver Defense

If it was Dou Po who traveled through time, I might say he was downgrading to solidify his foundation. . If the person who traveled through time was Perfect, I would say that he was leveling up to break through the extreme realm. . . But he traveled through Douluo, so if he leveled up, I would just call him a stupid dog.

Nt, the soul-reviving power is illusory. You are already in Douluo and still care about the soul power. In the later stage, just use the Poseidon's Light and everything will be fine.

I feel sick when I see the protagonist using a hatchet all the time. Wuhun is not good at practicing bows, but prefers to practice swordsmanship. Why don't Wuhun write a sword?

It's really hard to show off, but it makes me feel disgusted. Hatch knife! ! ! The author doesn't think that the male protagonist is a master when holding a hatchet. He thinks he is very cool and powerful! I didn't feel that he was an expert, and he didn't have the air of pretentiousness. From your novel, I can tell that the male protagonist doesn't seem to be very smart, and his brain is not very bright. Exalt style is not suitable for children. I feel like your writing style is a bit out of control.

When I saw Chapter 6, I suddenly came up with a domineering attitude... You might as well write it with intuition or heart-eye, which won't cause drama if you write it. God rewards those who work hard, and you made me think about it... Then why should I add a soul ring? Directly cultivate immortality, refine essence into Qi, refine Qi into God

①: There is no direct conflict of interest with Xiao Zha San in the early stage, but it is a bit targeted at Xiao Zha San (after all, he still has a father, Tang Ritian, who is watching over him) ② The experience in the Great Soul Fighting Arena in the early stage was a bit too flamboyant! ③: Regarding Xiao Wu, I don't understand why the protagonist is so nosy. Moreover, the protagonist underestimates the charm of a hundred thousand year soul ring. Xiao Wu is so close to the protagonist and can even go out to hunt for souls with the protagonist. How big of a heart does Tang Ritian have to tolerate the protagonist to live to this day! ! ! In the original work, Xiao Wu and Tang San just left and didn't bother! ! If we are not close now, do you think Tang Ritian is a fool? ? ? Summary: There are poisonous points! ! But it's acceptable (the only thing is that Xiao Wu is a bit too poisonous), and it's quite satisfactory (routine sadism), so you can watch it.

I didn't want to join Tianshui Academy when I saw it. What was your initial belief? I was eaten by you and laughed to death. I even said hypocritically that I wouldn't join before, just to join Tianshui. It's just as hypocritical as Tang San.

Just by looking at the title, you can tell how poisonous this book is. It was mass-produced by a studio...

There are too many poisonous points, and many places are extremely poisonous. I want to complain but don't know where to start.

Pressed down, things are robbed, I can't even fart, fantasy sewers, it's also worthy, the soul power is empty, the development of martial arts is not thought about, and I still think about Dou Yi's immortal grass, I have to lock myself in, such a fart world view

No matter what it is, it will become rubbish once it reaches Douluo Continent A third-rate skill, Xuan Tian Gong can become a magical skill, let's not talk about it

That's ridiculous. Everyone comes to see Douluo to see Wuhun. The author is awesome. After writing about Wuhun for a long time, Wuhun's appearance rate is not as high as that of Chaitao. Then why don't you just arrange the protagonist Wuhun Chaitao?

Lackey, forcefully suppress the strength. If you don't want the protagonist to become stronger, you don't have to write the chance to be so strong. It's written so NB. I thought there was going to be a big one, but I didn't expect it to be a big one 🤭😏

After reading Chapter 34, I couldn't stand it anymore after joining Tianshui Academy. The plot is too disgusting. Everything is for plot service. I didn't see the excitement of leveling. The data panel has a low sense of presence.

Looking at so many Douluo fanfics, I can't say how good his writing is, but so far I can still read it. Unlike some fanfics, there are all kinds of saucy manipulations in the early stage, blatantly treating Tang Hao as a fool, and some being cold-hearted. Taboo, even those who are fragrant and smelly, like Ning Rongrong, Hu Liena, Bibi Dong, etc., Accept the white-eyed wolves. The three views follow the facial features. There are so many good-looking women in Douluo. You have to choose these bad characters. This is not how love is done in the mainland, right?

After reading Chapter 60, I can see that the protagonist has no fucking strength, but he dances very happily.

See the table of contents for the plot 😁

It is very good for those who have just read Douluo fanfic. It is a bit boring for those of us who have read more than a hundred books. You can read it.

I am looking for the power of thinking, seeing and hearing colors, right?

I feel like there's nothing new, it's just like Douluo fans.

Sure enough, you still have to believe in Shennong! Chapter 6 is outrageously poisonous

"A boy from this world, a cruel dark corpse king appeared in the elf world. He sat on a luxurious toilet made of gold. He often robbed the elves on the way and asked them: Do you think I look like a human being? If the answer is yes, he will sit back on the toilet with satisfaction. If If you answer no, he will become furious and send out his minions to destroy everything. The beautiful elven world is suffering from a great crisis. Please sign a contract with us and become an invincible warrior to resist the Dark Corpse Emperor! " A cute blue bird-shaped elf in the subspace shouted. "I will give you love and tolerance!" A brown and green fat little elf said, blinking his mung bean eyes. "I will give you courage and strength!" A red elf with two horns on his head said, waving his cute little sword. "I will give you happiness and patience!" A purple elf said, swinging his crab hands and tentacles. "And I will give you wisdom and magic!" The cute blue bird-shaped elf stretched out his colorful wings and said. "Who do you want to choose for the contract?" "As a child, I can't tell. I want to try them one by one!" The bald boy said eagerly. As a result, the bald boy named Walkerma von Hindenstein gained unparalleled piety and power. His love was so strong that he claimed to be the spiritual descendant of the God-Emperor and a living saint. He even made up rumors that he was a descendant of the God-Emperor's illegitimate son... His courage was so strong that he would ride into the battlefield in a chariot, shouting spells while wielding a hammer to kill any dirty scum who dared to touch his luxurious carriage with dirty hands. His happiness is so simple. Apart from whipping himself every day, you don't know what he did to the statue of the God Emperor while hiding in his room... His wisdom is so outstanding. He reads ancient scrolls and scripture files in the Imperial Library every day, and from the treasure house of forbidden knowledge, he understands a great truth: justice will defeat evil, otherwise it will be defeated by evil. "After so many years, what is your choice?" The four elves asked in the dark. "Only children make choices, and I, the greatest gentleman in the empire, the invincible pastor, the light of civilization, the holy Archbishop Walkerma, want them all!" The bald middle-aged man stretched out his big hand and shook it tightly. As a result, his body turned into a skeleton, and he was forced to put on the Bone King's armor and the crown of witchcraft. He cut off his right hand and forcibly attached it to a bone melon. His body was repeatedly pierced inside and outside by the black tentacles ejected until it was completely wrapped. Became Nagash, the Corpse King. "What a greedy guy. I've run out of ideas. Let's find the next person to seduce." The four elves named Nurgle, Khorne, Slaanesh, and Tzeentch discussed this. "Young man from this world, a brutal dark corpse emperor has appeared in the elf world..." Before the cute blue bird-shaped elf finished speaking, the bard who was stopped said: "Lovely elf, have you heard of Cathay?" "Um..." The bird-shaped elf seemed to have a strange association, and replied tremblingly: "The medieval one?" "Exactly, I have a long narrative poem of 600,000 words. Please give me some time and listen to me in detail."

Let me go, my nickname is Xiao Quan, I looked at it and suddenly a Xiao Quan appeared inside, and the good guy suddenly acted out

Yes, it's good-looking. The male protagonist is neither brainless nor dark, nor is he a virgin. It's more to my liking. I've already ordered it.