Douluo Peerless: Light of Creation

By the second part, if you don't have a golden finger or the golden finger is not strong, Tang San will end up on his own!

I have only read a dozen chapters, but as a fifteen-year-old bookworm, I saw too many problems. The author is 100% new. The author has just started writing online articles. He really wants to have his own setting and foreshadowing. The plot transitions, character descriptions, and main character descriptions are all poorly written. It can even be said to be very poor. They are all old-fashioned little routines interspersed with link contexts. In addition, the author's writing style is not good and there are many typos. It is difficult to keep reading. The author asks readers to use their brains at the beginning of the first chapter, but I really want to say: I read it without thinking at the beginning and didn't finish reading it. Practice more, come on

Trash is worried about this and that all day long, so how can you live a better life if you don't give him a golden-fingered protagonist?

With two protagonists and multiple heroines, can you, the author, stand up to it?

I'm really sorry for all the readers. I really want to take care of typos, but time is really limited, and it's difficult to maintain the frequency of updates. High school students write essays and seek death out of pure innocence (இωஇ ) I'm really sorry.

Shennong is here. Let me talk about the shortcomings first. First, there are too many typos. After all, the author is a high school student. If the update speed is guaranteed, the quality will be difficult to achieve. Secondly, the progress of the plot is relatively slow, but it was already said at the beginning that it is slow. Overall it's acceptable. Third, at the beginning of the introduction, I already mentioned that I have many talents. From what I've read here, I feel like the author's composition is quite complicated. (ΩДΩ) But they are all quite interesting and relatively reasonable. The overall combat power has been improved a lot, but every character in the original work has also been affected. Fourth, Tang San has also strengthened his supervision, and his supervision has become very strict. The overall difficulty of reflection has been increased a lot. Although there are cheats, these cheats are big or small. They have little impact on the early stage. The difficulty of reflection is very high, but this cheat should be very strong later on. Okay, let's talk about the advantages. First, the plot is quite imaginative. This idea is indeed something that has never been seen in any fan fiction before. Of course, this also echoes a shortcoming, that is, the protagonist was suppressed a bit miserably by the Tang Shenwang in the early stage. But I heard that the protagonist will solve this problem in later chapters. Second, it is not the kind that treats Tang San as a fool, and the overall increase in combat power also brings Tang Shenwang with him. This is the first time so far. However, the stronger the enemy, the more intelligent it is, and the more powerful it shows that the protagonist is stronger. Thirdly, the author has a good attitude and will change what he says. After all, he is a new author. Okay, here are some suggestions that you might want to read and learn about on your own. However, the author is revising the article, so we need to pay attention to this.

Many people who like to watch Yu Hao can't find it. They should change it to Yu Hao, the God of Creation.

What is the name of the main character in the first chapter? Lu Nuo, Lu Nuo, Luna. How come there are so many names for one main character? Please change it.

Is there Wang Dong'er? If Tang San continues to flirt with her, is his original wife gone?

When did the Tianmeng Iceworm die? She was sent by Tang San, or she turned into a female.

Little Huo Niang

What the hell? Chapter 5 jumps directly to Chapter 20?

The writing is as clever and thoughtful as a god, and the words are as round as pearls. The wonderful writing is full of flowers and the literary talent is outstanding. 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

Listen to Lan Shou, most of the hydrology is really annoying.

Author, do you know why I'm here? It's because of the Terraria disaster. It can be said that there are basically no people using this theme in this project. And I am also a loyal Terraria fan, so I am very much looking forward to what the author writes.