The Mystery of Rebirth: Maric's Bizarre Adventure

The portrayal of the protagonist's character is very unnatural and uncoordinated. The soul of an adult is actually very lacking in love. Since he is treated unfairly due to lack of love, he does not feel aggrieved, but carries out psychological activities like a fun-loving person. This is outrageous.

Everything has two sides, let me tell you what I think is good and bad Good: The plot of this book is quite creative and the ideas are quite interesting. Those who are used to nanny stories can give it a try. Bad: To be honest, the protagonist does not look like a modern person at all. Any modern person who has received nine years of compulsory education and can think independently cannot accept this situation if he travels to the past. I have read about twenty chapters so far and will continue to read. People often say that the mysterious nanny fan fiction protagonist is in charge of everything and is very holy. But compared with this one, I think it is still acceptable. Why? Because the nanny novel is just a magically modified plot, but the protagonist of this book is a kind of virgin in terms of personality. In the first few chapters, the angel bumps into the protagonist's head, and the "old zombie" elder of the protagonist does not look like a qualified character at all. Really, it is better to call this book a Japanese light novel with a mysterious theme. For other fans, the plot may be unacceptable, but in this book, the protagonist's character is unacceptable. It doesn't look like a modern person at all, but more like the male protagonist in a Nikgaru novel who time travels to the Lord of Mysteries. To be honest, I couldn't accept the character's failure more than the plot. I didn't mean it to be ironic, but after reading it, I felt that all the main characters were childish.

Has anyone read this topic? I'm new here, please give me some advice~

Many book friends have mentioned the pacing problem and compared it with other books. I would like to say that if I wanted to write a large-scale nanny story, I would not choose this time point, nor would I choose the Southern Continent, which is not much mentioned in the original work, nor would I choose the prisoner path. I don't have to think about an original plot at all. I can write a big enough plot to save trouble, and then follow the original timeline and use the original events to magically change it. The results will definitely be better than this one. This is a non-serious fanfic. To borrow a sentence, "Xiao Ke is the child of Squid, and the protagonist in my novel is my child." Looking at Xiao Ke's popularity, you can tell that he is already perfect, and there is no need for me to add various auras to him. Anyway, this book has already been released. Various statistics are very poor among fans. I don't have any pressure. No one will read me and I write like this. It's not a full-time job. As the first book, I just write what I want to write. If there are any big plot holes, I will change it. But if you feel that you can't accept my setting and can't read it, you can give it up.         ，，，，，，，， I have said so much without realizing it, and I want to give a clear answer to the readers who have been commenting on my books: I just want to write a growth story of a small character, and the protagonist cannot be as great and upright as Xiao Ke, which is not in line with his approach and the setting of the original work. Some setting pictures are from Tieba friends. It is more intuitive to borrow them. If the original author sees it and needs to indicate the source, please contact me, thank you!

It looks very disgusting, it feels like you know your situation, know what you should do, don't change what you are doing, and then selectively forget it, it doesn't look very smart.

The pace is a bit slow, and the protagonist seems not very smart, but everything else is pretty good.

Family members, who knows? After flipping through the original book, Fu Zhixin clicked into the questionnaire and chose from his heart... I turned out to be the cassava version of "chopping board fish"! Who else (spreading hands, leaning back tactically)

Just a marginalized person. Now that Maric is powerful and flirty, he has Sharon under control.

I haven't read Suhuan, and it doesn't involve Suhuan... Don't ask me about the content in Suhuan, I don't know, the contents that are not in the original work of Mystery belong to me ooc, don't worry about it... I was just about to open a new map today and when I searched it, I found that the teacher had already written part of the map I wanted to write, but I haven't read it, I wrote it according to my own ideas. If you see inconsistent or even conflicting content in this part, please throw away your mind and read it again...

I've finished reading the chapters so far, and I feel pretty good, but I'm promoted a little too quickly I hope the emotional line will be a single female protagonist.

When can the protagonist escape from this family?

I just read the first few chapters and I want to ask if the author plans to cheat the protagonist? After all, the end of the Temperance sect before the plot started was not good. If you follow the Temperance sect, the potion promotion will be very slow.

Some settings about the cheats that can be used at low sequences: 1. In essence, everyone knows that it must be "Essence level", with high status, anti-divination, can be used to suppress, and can resist pollution 2. The source of the curse, exempt from the curse 3. Has a strong sense of malice and danger, this ability will increase as the sequence increases 4. The only active skill at this stage is Provide materials to make spells, and borrow materials to directly curse 5. Personal items can be brought into the world, but if left for a long time, they will be contaminated with curses, but living objects cannot. 6. It can help believers resist "pollution", similar to "I pollute you first, and others will not be able to pollute you." 7. The Lord of Alien is more difficult to express, maybe it can be more effective mainly against irrational monsters? Others are to be developed, maybe you can give me some suggestions? Because the power of Cassava in the Southern Continent is strong, most gods do not focus their main energy here. The protagonist is too powerful, and the power itself is relatively weak. Too many active skills can easily leave traces on the door. Once they are found, there is no way to escape except "Deus Ex Machina". The Prisoner Channel itself does not lack the ability to fight head-on. The main reason is that the "curse" and the "contamination" of cassava are more serious. Being passive can at least let you go and cause trouble. Soon the plot will start about being a bounty hunter in the Southern Continent. If you have any ideas, can you give me some suggestions? I haven't written it according to my own ideas.

I've been raising it for a long time, does any book friend know what the main character's order is now?