You Say You Run an Amusement Park, but You Hire Monsters as Employees

In the second chapter, when you see Shituoling at the foot of Lingshan Mountain, you will know the author's identity. When writing about Journey to the West, you don't read Journey to the West, so you just like to read marketing accounts, right? Shentuoling Mountain is at the foot of Lingshan Mountain. Read Chapter 74 to Chapter 98 and see how many countries, regions and monsters are separated in between.

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Anyway, I watched it without thinking, so it doesn't matter. But there is one thing I agree with, and that is turtle crawling. One hundred chapters have passed and the opening is still far away. With such a turtle crawling speed, I have to remind the author that it is difficult for a turtle to live a long life. After all, you can't have it both ways.

It's not enough to get it from the introduction. There is a book about traveling and traveling to the West on the site. The one who will be interested at first sight when seeing the title will know how to show off after just thinking about it. How to write the response of the online audience Then I browsed the table of contents and part of the content and found that the author can I feel that the amusement park part is difficult to write, otherwise I wouldn't have been writing other things. The pace is very slow and I have been writing about daily things. But I chose the theme of Journey to the West just to see the collision of magic and reality. It is not so much about the theme of running an amusement park as it is about writing about the subject. It feels like playing house with small animals There is no goal. For example, if the favorability level is full or certain conditions are fulfilled, you will get an attraction. Then you can open the maps one by one and tell stories. It is a copy mode of hidden points, but there is no such thing, so the reason is The progress of things is basically a turtle The performance of the monsters is really difficult to explain in one sentence. The story as a whole is very childish. I am not biased towards a dark interpretation. Having watched the TV series Journey to the West, I know that there are not many good people in it. The author writes it like the protagonist and the monsters are playing house. If the author is not the story Freehand writing, even if the author doesn't know much about it, it feels like I haven't watched the TV series Journey to the West, which is such a classic. The words at the beginning are also very difficult to understand. It would be better to directly have both parents die and the grandfather's last wish to give the protagonist a sense of purpose and urgency. This correlation is already used To a bad start, like giving a legacy if you take it easy, these make me feel that the author's ideas are even more inappropriate, involving other people's company management, etc., And the writing style is too childish and has no basis (system) and is offensive Most amusement parks mainly write about horror houses Weird direction, because it is easier to write, otherwise conventional projects cannot be written. Real amusement park theme, the model of Gancheng Brilliant Amusement Park in Japanese comics can be used for reference, the overall story is directed by Shao Tongzhi, specific stories are arranged with new maps and new characters, there are pirates in the water, There are dragons and adventures in the cave. Each specific character runs a special project, music, shooting, etc. The author can take a look. According to your writing method, it is more suitable for themes such as Pokémon to be integrated. At least the ability can be integrated by simply checking. The threshold is terrifyingly low.

Why do you think the title and introduction of the book are all about business. It's been a hundred chapters and I haven't opened an amusement park yet. I'm so speechless. I suggest you read I Have an Adventure House and Start with a Script Killing Shop.

I knew that when Miao wrote about management, it would definitely focus on amusement parks. I wanted to make all the performances and facilities luxurious, but the amusement park didn't open yet, so I didn't even know what the theme was. Really take a look at how other people write business articles. Amusement parks are classic. You open up amusement projects and then slowly add them one by one. This is a business article, okay? I have been working on Journey to the West for a long time, and it has been so deep and has some features (for example, the three monsters of Shituoling, the Great Demon King, and a thousand times concentrated cigar will not have a fart effect•ᴗ•💧) These are actually nothing, because it is based on reality, so Journey to the West is really nothing. But when I keep writing about Journey to the West, no one has that much patience. It could be better, but in the end I had to write without a main plot (｡•ˇ‸ˇ•｡) Unfortunately, I kept waiting for the amusement park to start, and it ended up being cut off 🥴ahhhhhh (⋟⋞) I'm going to complain. . . (⋟⋞)

Leaving aside the previous discussion, let's use the gunpowder from fireworks as a bomb. A hunter who can beat the monkeys in Huaguo Mountain until they are unable to fight back would be afraid of the gunpowder from these fireworks? No matter how weak it is, it is still primitive. By about fifty chapters, I can no longer imagine 20 egg-sized gems. The author took it for granted. If he had written it, he would have thought that I was fine.

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