Dragon Clan: Lu Mingfei Returns from Riqing

The plot is so outrageous that it has nothing to do with the title. It just wants to open a harem but I don't have the ability to control the new plot. It's not like a fan book that normal people can read.

Strengthen your awareness of lightning protection. If you always give benefits to other men, you should definitely accept them from women.

Actually, the image of the completely unloved bad guy in the original Dragon Trilogy is outrageous, Moreover, Jiangnan's "encounter-sacrifice-regret" template ruined many characters, and characters who did not fit this template were marginalized or abandoned: Caesar and Susie were obviously written badly. Nowadays, it is rare to have a story about loving everyone and being loved by everyone, which can heal a youth poisoned by old thieves. It is not good. The harem is acceptable. Fans must dare to write and correct things. So far, things are going well. Asasi has never been a problem. The problem is not taking care of things when they happen (a big failure at the end of Long San).

Update quickly, update quickly, update quickly! ! !

The harem seems to be okay, but I can still make a living. As for the combat power and the description of the operation of the power structure, there are many problems. Especially after starting the main plot, it is impossible to even think about the relationship between the Japanese branch, Kassel, and Eri.

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Yes, Lu Mingfei is not worthy😰😰 But, as you know, I am a noble reader and a noble and compassionate genuine subscriber, so I am worthy🥵🥵 Also, I I want to see the harem😎😎 To sum up, I give Lu Mingfei the right to snatch Xia Mi😡😡 This time, let's call it a road right reading😋😋 What does senior brother say? Senior brother, I have no objection🤗🤗

Nowadays, too many fanfics don't write about Nono as the heroine, but I think some readers may not like Nono, but Lu Mingfei will definitely choose Nono. No one can replace Nono's weight in Lu Mingfei's heart, no matter how many times Lu Mingfei goes through it again No matter what, he would never be indifferent to Nono like many people in the fandom, and he would not regret risking his life to save Nono. Even some of the supporting characters in the article can be chosen by the fandom to become the heroine. Why can't Nuonuo, who Lu Mingfei sacrificed half his life for, not be able to? In the original text, the problem with Nono has been avoided, and it has been moved into the fan fiction. After being portrayed as powerful and excellent, why should we avoid it? Looking at it this way, you are still that bastard kid. If he, Caesar, is not married for a day, you will have a chance. Chu Zihang in the original article supports you, but you can't keep up with your colleagues? Jiangnan writes about love but not being able to get it, and fellow Good Guy fans simply surrendered and gave up.

Finally someone understands The essence of dragons is romance You are one of the rare authors who discovers new creations

The beginning was good, but when Eri came to China and couldn't find anyone, it really disgusted me. It's very poisonous. You came back from Nikgaru, not living in Nikgaru. And no matter how big the basketball court is, a mixed race can't run for five minutes. It's really disgusting.

Lu Mingfei is not worthy of snatching away his senior brother Xia Mi.

The author is really good, with 1.87 Million words, he hasn't even reached Kassel College yet, and is still writing about high school or even freshman year.

Nuonuo can risk his life for Lu Mingfei. Although this is not love or anything, although 3/4 of his life is because of Nono, no matter what kind of emotion it is, it is a true emotion. And Chen Wenwen... In the beginning, Chen Wenwen knew that Lu Mingfei liked her, and she followed Zhao Menghua's group of pickpockets to tease him; in Long Er, Zhao Menghua cheated on Liu Miaomiao, and Miss Chen cried like a goldfish. Lu Mingfei came forward and Zhao Menghua said that he would not pay the bills and was invisible. Then not long after Zhao Menghua was involved in the Nibelungen, Lu Mingfei became Miss Chen's reliable tool at the critical moment, finding her ex-boyfriend for her; and the senior brother asked Lu Mingfei to deliver something on his birthday, but he closed the door after getting it... Lu Mingfei never regarded Chen Wenwen as a piece of paper that could be picked up casually; but Chen Wenwen really always regarded Lu Mingfei as a tissue that could be easily drawn and used.

Yours is the third one among the dozens of Dragon Clan fanfics I have read that details Liu Miaomiao. Please give me more Lu Liutang.

It's actually pretty good-looking, but why did you choose such a terrible way to start a harem? Lu Mingfei's approach was completely to coerce Liu Miaomiao into accepting his harem... It would be really hard to keep kissing him without agreeing.

Let me tell you, I am really afraid that there will be an Urban Dragon King trick later. Liu's mother looks down on Lu Mingfei and forcibly changes Liu's program. She waits for a long time and then fails to solve the problem and starts the Nibelung line again. Is it the little devil who won't help? In the original novel, whenever I want to pick up girls, I remember that the little devil will send out assists like crazy? And solving the problem after a long delay is probably not as good as solving it immediately. And there won't be a chance that Su's father will look down on her later, right? I know there are foreshadowings ahead, but I'm afraid that it will really follow the Dragon King's routine, which is to crazily belittle and look down upon and then obstruct it. During this period, various branch plots will be divided into different perspectives, and then it will be resolved after a long time.

This book is the author's first online article. The author has no relevant writing experience before. When writing this book, he mainly wanted to gain experience. After writing it, he found that the results were good, so he kept writing. Although this is my first time writing online articles, it is also not my first year reading online articles. The author's reading volume of online articles is quite considerable. Before writing this book, I also read some other excellent dragon fan fiction in advance, and gained experience by standing on the shoulders of giants. I have also communicated with other authors in the author group, so I have made sufficient preparations. However, many problems cannot be anticipated in the preparation stage; rather, after creation, through feedback from readers and the resistance encountered during the creation, we can understand the problems of this book bit by bit. Of course this book is not perfect, it is far from excellent, and the author's writing power is also limited. This book does have the problems mentioned by many readers in the comment section. The author is not unable to accept opinions, and has actually received feedback from readers well. However, due to the particularity of the recommendation mechanism, negative reviews are generally not retained in the author's comment area. The author is trying to find ways to improve things that can be improved, such as Lu Mingfei's enthusiasm, and feeling that there are too few battles, so he also added plots related to Kassel Academy. But for example, I feel that the first few chapters are too slow, because the book has already written more than one million words, and it is inconvenient to delete the previous chapters. If I change them, it will be painful and inconsistent. Readers who find the first few chapters boring may wish to skip a few chapters. If you still feel that the free chapters in the middle are not to your liking, thank you for reading. I will learn from the experience of this book and your opinions, and strive to write a book that satisfies you next time. This book goes back to the first year of high school. Starting from the first year of high school, the heroines are still far away from the year 2009 when the original story started. So the main plot of this book is also different from most dragon fan fiction. The focus of storytelling is different. The main plot in the early stage mainly focused on daily love. After all, it was Lu Mingfei who had returned from Riqing. First, let Lu Mingfei rely on Asasi's power to open a harem, and in the middle and later stages, he will gradually return to the original story line.

Traveling through three worlds, where has TM grown?

Lu Mingfei returns from various Japanese love light novels. The content of Chapter 120 has not even finished the first quest line for the female character Liu Miaomiao. In terms of numerical values: Liu Miaomiao is about 60%. The little goddess is probably in her early fifties. Chen Wenwen is about ten percent. Teacher Daye is about 30%. Eriyi is about 20%. The main line of the Dragon Clan does not leave Novice Village. The readers who came here for this book all wanted to read Lu Mingfei's love story. But the dragon background still has to be the main story, right? Otherwise, how can Eriyi and the others advance their content? But the content of one hundred chapters is just after I entered high school. I'm afraid it will take at least 400 chapters to advance to Eri. After all, if you want to balance the three high school girls with the later female characters, you must add some plot to them. At the current plot advancement speed, more than 400 chapters may not be enough to plot the plot of Li Yi.

My personal opinion is that since you, the author, have set up Lu Mingfei's experience, including experiencing the death of Eri Yi and traveling around the world of Nikkei, there should be corresponding changes in status. Why is this performance? It feels that it is not as mature as the original Lu Mingfei. At first, Liu Miaomiao was stunned when he started talking to her. Later, she was flattered and so on. She accepted it. The underworld lady treats you as if you have experienced the whole world. Why do you have such a low psychological attitude after going through a circle? Later, he suddenly turned into a dull Japanese young male protagonist. I sincerely suggest that the author should describe less about the psychological state and psychological activities of the protagonist, as it is too setting-heavy.

But I felt sick to my stomach and felt like vomiting.

What's so bad about Liu Miaomiao, a purely passerby supporting character who has basically no role 😅

After reading a few chapters, I feel that this is one of the most outrageous novels I have read in time travel and rebirth. I feel that the experience of growing up and traveling for more than ten decades is completely different. After reading a few chapters, I immediately persuaded you to give up. What exactly did you do when you were reborn in time travel?

I suddenly looked at the cover today and realized that it was already 2.2 Million words long, and the plot of Long Yi was not even included. Author, you are really amazing👍🏻

No one in the Dragon Clan is clearly written, and this one is even more intellectually depressing. I feel like the protagonist has been through so much and is still not as mature as before.

In the end, he was still incompetent and furious, unable to deal with things calmly. Besides, Chu Zihang's father knew him very well. Was he so angry?

Still dead? . . It's a pity that the timeline seems to be a little far away from the beginning of the original work 😵

666, I have written so much that I won't write anymore.

At least give me a chapter-length letter from a reader.

In the end, there were only three brides prepared by the little devil for Lu Mingfei: Su Xiaoqiang, Ling, and Hui Liyi. Having too many harems is annoying and difficult to write about. Three is enough. It would be really irritating to bring in irrelevant people to watch.