Naruto: Uchiha's Guide to Clearing the Game

The writing was so intense that I only read seven chapters and was poisoned to death. 1. The chapter of rescuing Uchiha Hikari really makes the readers look like fools. The emotional scenes are so awkward, it's more like giving them away for free 2. A three-magatama Uchiha has never killed anyone? You must have come here in a dream with your three magatama, it's really outrageous

Let's briefly list the poisonous points of this book 1. The emotional scenes are very awkward, and you can tell at a glance that the author has never been in love. 2. The protagonist is sometimes too dissolute, arrogant, and thinks he is in control, but in fact he is not at all. 3. The author adds a lot of his own personal settings. Sometimes he talks about his own settings and opinions in several chapters. We don't read novels just to see the author himself talking. 4. Many times the protagonist takes things for granted and does not have a clear plan for doing things. He just does what he thinks and does. I doubt the author has an outline. 5. Suppressing the protagonist's combat power, and then traveling through the dragon vein to the Fourth Ninja World War, he did not cherish time, saying that he had enough time, and just delayed it. As a result, the twin Kamui only got Obito's one, but Kakashi did not get it. 6. After becoming an immortal, my expressiveness is not good enough, and I can't even suppress one tail in the desert. If you become an immortal, you might as well not become one. And the author believes that one tail is stronger than nine tails in the desert. 7. In order to become a sage, Izanagi lost one of his eyes, but the benefits of becoming a sage are obviously not enough. On the surface, in the ninja world, the protagonist is invincible, but it is difficult to fight even in the desert. He doesn't seem to have much combat experience, and he's so picky that it would be a waste to give him the Flying Thunder God. 8. Sometimes I feel very cautious when looking at my behavior, but many times I feel very reckless. He said he was invincible, but he did nothing. 9. The author does not listen to advice very much. He obviously has his own opinions, but his opinions are not very reasonable. In short, there is no value in subscribing to this book if you read it when you have free time. It can only be said that it is tasteless and it is a pity to throw it away.

Writing about slug is too simple. First, slug is a thousand-year-old monster, and its lifespan is completely unclear. Second, slug will use its clones to pretend to be young to lower the vigilance of other creatures. All the characters on the stage are clones. Third, it is the same strength, power, and historical time. It's impossible for a guy from one of the three holy places not to be smart, but the clone in the plot never showed the wisdom of a thousand-year-old demon. The only possibility is that the slug is more sinister and cold-blooded than the white snake and the toad. The toad tribe has many people, and the white snake tribe is even bigger, but there is only one slug.

I have been reading Naruto fanfics for many years. There are those who travel through the dragon veins to acquire girls, some who collect ninjutsu, some who realize their dreams, and some who receive the chakra of tailed beasts. Basically, these are the big and small ones. I read another brainless Naruto fanfic a few days ago. He traveled through the dragon veins in order to obtain Shisui's other god and then prepare to hypnotize Danzo. I was speechless

In fact, it is not bad to activate the infinite Tsukuyomi to create a metaverse for the ninja world and realize the dream. Of course, the premise is that you have to pay enough chakra balance. When those dreamers are short of chakra, kick them out directly. This will not only ensure that they will not starve to death due to being addicted to the virtual world, but also allow them to spontaneously refine chakra.

Tieba and Bilibili have long refuted the rumors. The Sarutobi clan took the lead in the four battles. There were only about 20 ninjas breathing fire together. After being praised by Nara Shikaku, conspiracy theories took hold. . The third generation wife, the third generation eldest son, the second son including himself were sacrificed for Konoha. .

It's actually very simple to keep the Uchiha clan, right? Just defect to other ninja villages and have children, right? The rest of the ninja villages all have Uchiha blood. Can you, Konoha, destroy your own? I fight Uchiha, real or fake

Author, if you, the protagonist, want to be recruited, I won't read it.

I couldn't stand it from the beginning. The older you get, the more glassy you become. How can you be written as a love brain if you save others? Nuclear weapons in times of war. A massacre of people with bloody hands. Just grab a few tri-colored meatballs and win. I just want to live in vain. If you want to know why. The protagonist will tell you (this is love). Sure enough, the older you get, the less innocent you become. I can't understand the inexplicable love. It's a bond. You can only see that others want you in vain

I don't know why the protagonist has to take Kakashi's eyes. He can obviously take them directly, but he has to disgust the readers. Just make it so that when the time comes, you will die speechless, and you have to use poison.

There are too many personal assumptions, and the author always feels that he is right, that his is not personal fiction but the truth. It's so absolute, I feel like it was Naruto's loss if the author didn't draw Naruto back then. A bit unbearable

I don't know how you, the author, think that because Madara and Sasuke have opened the Samsara Eye, the genetic gene of the sacred tree is hidden in Uchiha's body! And the formula for opening the Samsara Eye is to combine the chakra of Indra and Asura with the chakra of Otsutsuki, plus the genetic genes of the sacred tree! You said that the genetic genes of the sacred tree are more reasonable in Senju Hashirama's body than in Uchiha's body! And your so-called way to obtain the chakra of Indra and Asura is to take a little blood from Naruto and Sasuke when they are young, cultivate it and then inject it into the body! Blood is blood! Cells are cells! Chakra is another thing! These three things are completely unrelated, how can they be equal? It is better to create a ninjutsu similar to the star-absorbing technique of Beiming, which absorbs other people's chakra! Forcefully suck them dry and see if you can get the chakra of Asura and Indra! The author even regards the stone monument of the Uchiha ancestral land as the method to open the Samsara Eye left by Six Paths! 😅 It is obvious that Hei Zetsu used the name of Six Paths to deceive the reincarnated body of Indra Chakra who awakened the samsara eye into opening the infinite Tsukuyomi!

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I don't want to read anymore. I'm here to watch the Naruto fandom, not for you to criticize Naruto. Several chapters are just commenting on the plot of Naruto.

Don't look at it, it's extremely poisonous. He obviously said that he wanted to kill the weasel at first, but then he went to help him and used him as a dog for others.

This book currently has 55 chapters, I think it can be reduced to 35 chapters

You are a so-called immortal who has become an immortal. In terms of using the Mangekyō Sharingan, you are actually not as strong as a transplanted Hashirama cell that has been reproduced for who knows how many generations.

It's such an embarrassing emotional scene. At first glance, Ding Zhen definitely looks like a man who has never been in a relationship before. He smells so bad.

It's normal to write a fan fiction with two private settings, but there are too many of them in this book. It's a basic operation to spend most of the chapter criticizing the original character and then forcefully explaining the rationality of the private design. The punctuation is also strange. I can't bear to give punctuation to a long sentence, which makes me tired just looking at it. I can't say that the emotional drama was averagely written. I can only say that it would be better not to write it at all. To be honest, I really like the setting of the protagonist who defected before the genocide, but the author's writing power really can't support it.

I've read Chapter 22, and I can only say that it's boring and irritating. It's all speculation and confession, or it's setting. There is very little effective plot content. How can I eat a plate of green pepper stir-fried meat filled with green peppers! Have you seen Shennong behind? Are there any changes in subsequent chapters?

He is so brainless. He always thinks of others as if they are brainless. I really can't stand it.

It's a rubbish book. Itachi's character setting seriously deviates from the original work. It's not even black.

Xiaobai, did the author go to high school?

I forced myself to read Chapter 19 of Yo-Yo! Real

The emotional description is a bit boring and ex-oriented, and there are too many backgrounds just like supplementary knowledge points.

Sure enough, there is no Naruto fanfic that I can read, alas. . . .

I finally understood why it cost 95,000 words for 15 months. The protagonist has no clear goal. If you want to make it daily, the writing style is flawed.

What can I say about this book? It has platinum status. Both the portrayal of the protagonist and the profiles of the supporting characters are perfect. The sense of immersion can be said to be very strong. I am not exaggerating. I have been exposed to online novels since the sixth grade of elementary school. I can say that I have read countless books now. I am definitely a hardcore bookworm. As we all know, the more books you read, the more picky your taste becomes. Ordinary books cannot be discerned at all. Some books can be known just by looking at their titles. For a slightly more advanced book, you can also guess the outline by looking at its introduction. For a more deceitful author, his book title and introduction have successfully attracted me, but I can guess almost as soon as I look at the table of contents, and I can even judge whether a book will enter the palace. But this book is different. First of all, the title of his book attracted me very much. I initially concluded that the author is also an unconventional person in some aspects of life. Looking at the introduction of this book again, do you feel an addictive impulse? After reading the table of contents three times, you won't know until you look at it. At the first glance, you will be shocked. One word, it's amazing! Book title + introduction + table of contents, the trinity! The three basic elements of the novel are interconnected, linking up the past and echoing each other. It is very rare to be able to do this. At this point, an online novel has been completed. Let's look at the content of the first three chapters. The three golden chapters of online articles are extremely important. If the three chapters are not written well, the book will probably be useless. Therefore, the first three chapters must attract readers. This author has handled it very well. The unique beginning makes people want to read on. Basically everything that needs to be explained is explained, and the main theme is to be frank and lenient. As of today's latest chapter, its rich content still makes people want to stop it, itching unbearably, and can't help but want to explore the following content. The story plot has ups and downs and is soul-stirring! Some of the people and events in the article are also thought-provoking. The author also gives different perspectives on issues related to morality and ethics, and handles them very well. From the current point of view, the writing style of this book is excellent, and the writing is natural. The exquisite wording, smooth sentences, and profound writing power seem to be inhuman! Reading it feels like being there, and it's amazing! The author's writing style is unique and he can be called a master! To sum up, this book is definitely the best novel ever written. It surpasses its predecessors, jumps out of the frame, and has eclectic content. It is difficult to regard it as a traditional online novel. This is a treasure that has never existed before and will never exist again in the future. It only exists now. I know that my evaluation may be difficult for people to accept. It is a bit exaggerated. I will not argue about this. I will leave it to future generations to evaluate whether it is good or bad.

I want to know why you write about a female protagonist and give it so much space

Too much nonsense, a bunch of because, so, but...

Author, your level is quite in line with the current popularity of this book.