Who Can Still Be a Painter When They Have Already Become Immortals?

The first one started to get messed up, and I'm not a big shot, so I'm sure I'll be on the street!

The writing is good, but the plot is too slow. There is neither talisman nor immortality, and even the "painting" in the introduction is not reflected. If this continues, I will be disappointed.

Fellow Taoist, judging from the name and introduction, your book should be a golden finger routine of talisman cultivation + proficiency. But I read five chapters in a row, so let's count it as one chapter with 2,000 words, but I only know the protagonist's name, Goldfinger didn't write anything about it, and the "painting" talent in front of the talisman making was not written either. The plot is bland, and the fifth chapter is about martial arts training, which can be considered a bit ups and downs. But doesn't the protagonist want to become a Talisman Master? Can practicing martial arts increase his talent? I really don't understand what you are trying to foreshadow, I just feel like you are talking about 10,000 words of hard water.

Good boy... You write well, you write well hahahaha😃

The writing is pretty good. Is it a vest?

Judging from the name, it's a traditional fairy tale.

From Douyin Qinghu! More refinement!

The writing is too careful, a bit like an imaginary person making changes to become a normal person. Still need to make progress