Werewolf: the Policeman Shoots the Knife at the Beginning

This book is finished, thank you all again for your support! After carefully reviewing the process of creating the entire book, there are indeed many bad points in the front. During the writing process, I can also feel that my current level, experience and mentality are indeed not enough to create a great werewolf novel. Currently, I am going to take a rest, settle down, practice my writing, and come back after a while to write the second book on Paidao's worldview! Thanks!

Personally, I think this book lacks one thing - plot driving force. This plot driving force is simply to promote the plot and give the protagonist a reason to do something. The most common ones are money, power and the like. The book has a plot driving force at the beginning. From my perspective, the protagonist plays the game for what he likes. But before the international competition, a problem arises. Why does the protagonist have to participate in this game? Bring glory to the country? If it's just about bringing glory to the country, some people won't buy it. Of course, maybe the protagonist does this for money, but money will cause a problem - the value is huge First of all, it is normal to earn tens of thousands in a game. Hundreds of thousands is not unacceptable. After a series of marketing methods such as live broadcasts are launched later, everyone can accept tens of millions. Then what? It is impossible to earn hundreds of millions just by playing Werewolf well. Even if you find some ways for the protagonist to continue making money, it won't work, because the further you go, the numerical values ​​will become larger and larger, and what readers will see will only be 0s that continue to be added. So, money, honor, these things can only give the protagonist a reasonable reason to fight in a short period of time, but the real long-term plot driving force needs to be found by you, the author.

This book is the most logical werewolf novel I have ever read. The supporting characters are basically all above average in IQ, and there is no forced downgrade to set off the protagonist, creating a high-end feel. Not many people can write the basic logic of Werewolf well, and it is even more difficult to keep the supporting characters from being degraded. This is definitely worthy of recognition. Although strictly speaking there are still some problems, the first time I wrote it I have really crushed most werewolf writers. In the last two sentences, it can be seen that the author is under a lot of pressure, but in fact, there is no need to reply to many comments. Just delete them without thinking. You just need to concentrate on writing your own. If you maintain your current level, your grades will not be bad in the next book.

This article finally feels like going abroad to play a game. There are several rules and systems of other countries. Finally, it is not a werewolf killing article behind closed doors But it is also quite difficult. If the proportion of werewolf killing in other rules is too much, it will be a poisonous point if the werewolf killing is taken over.

The author's thinking is too flexible. And the board is particularly rich! Big love: The urban management wild child (flood can still be used in this way) Jack the Ripper (the third party is powerful, the protagonist is even more powerful, the whole process is brain-burning) Favorite game: Yongxuzhi Wheel (the beginning is attractive enough) Psychic Mechanical Wolf (the perfect hunter who was penetrated by milk on the first night) Magic Duel (the magician makes a change from heaven with reason) Charming Master (how to use the edge of a knife to make the succubus stare) Taoist You Spirit Wolf (full entertainment effect) Other good games for basic skills: Onmyoji (civilian deceives the big wolf) Ghost Rider (exploding tactics) Thief Cupid (single guard MVP) Exploration in the clouds (Jue Yu chases two rounds in one night) Grandma Little Red Riding Hood Wolf (n-number of wolves step on the wolf, it is impossible to escape the precognition eye) Undercurrent (blood stained the board of the clock tower) Eyeless Night (legendary card knife, one god fighting four wolves) The Piper Magician (a difficult victory for the third party) Wolf King Geomancer (a rare game against civilians) Only the Neighbor (the wolf team's archmage but lost its mana) Nightmare Dreamcatcher (the wolf team was frightened but won) Hunter of the Sun and the Light (swallowing the dreamcatcher) People, borrowing a knife to kill people in a continuous shot) Library (changing clothes with magic cards) Equation Paradox (showing weakness to the enemy, tricking the wolf into shooting the knife) Mao'er Alone Village (cat version of hunting the latent wolf) Animal Dream (in the superposition state of bear and pufferfish) Alpaca) Contract Angel (the four wolves are online, happy cooperation) Phantom Thief Detective (the wolves are clever but are mistaken, and their routines are not as good as the straight ball)... Adapt to the situation and play a coordinated game with high-matching teammates: Time Wave Rebellion, Tit for Tat, Khufu Horizon Other non-protagonist but short and concise games: Pre-Hunter Ban (Wolf Carry) Gargoyle Gravekeeper (Good guys all have their own agenda, lone wolf comes back)

🍅It's here, the board is as new as ever, but I feel that the protagonist is not like a master. His mood is always nervous, hesitant, and confused, and it looks a bit weird. Other than that, it's okay. I'm not very good at playing Werewolf, but I like reading it. As a first book, overall it's good. Come on ❤️❤️

I think this werewolf novel has obvious shortcomings in its setting. How can I put it, it's okay now, but in the future you will find it more and more difficult to write. I hope the author can solve it

Author, I would like to correct a writing problem. You should not use too many words to determine the identity of others through their "gleams" of eyes. You can describe the protagonist's observation of the supporting character's eyes shaking, or simply write that the protagonist's divination is more accurate than others. In this way, it will not appear that there is a problem with the supporting character's ability, but that the protagonist's configuration will be higher and the refreshment will be more obvious

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Take a look at this one😈 And is the author's new book at the starting point or where? …

I read more than a hundred chapters, and finally I know what you are missing, author. After missing the game, there are so many famous scenes that go against the sky. After the game is overturned, why don't you review the game and give each other a blow?

1. To read this article, you need to understand some werewolf killing slang and terminology. Of course, if you are a novice, it doesn't matter! If there are friends who don't understand the slang and terminology of werewolf killing, don't worry! (Related to the work → Check out the Werewolf Killing Cute Quick Guide) 2. Each game will be accompanied by a seat number and the identity of the main perspective, and you can check it in the comment area of each chapter~ 3. This is the author's first novel. If there are any errors in writing, illogical logic, or incorrect illustrations, please point it out~ 4. This article is mainly about competitive werewolf killing. Therefore, the game style will be closer to Werewolf events such as Huashan Swordsmanship, Logic and Lies, and Jingshi Open, rather than variety shows such as Night of Fog, Jingcheng Masters, G/P/L~ 5. The rules of this article are based on the player manual of "Jingshi Open", and also take into account some rules of other mainstream events (such as LAL's Soul Resurrection Night), but will not adopt Huashan's "Theory of Human Life". At the same time, because the configuration of the players is higher than the reality, the scores of some good guy score rewards (such as the Witch Poison Wolf and the Four Wolves at Night Resurrection) have been balanced and weakened. 6. Werewolf is a game that is essentially a party game for everyone to have fun together. It may have many elements that are not suitable for competition. However, I tried my best to eliminate the interference of these elements, and made the plot and story settings (such as various wolf families, national wolf associations, and various international competitions) as reasonable as possible. I hope to work with everyone to create a world where werewolf killing is prevalent! 7. Everyone is welcome to have a friendly exchange in the comment area about everything about werewolf killing! If there are veteran werewolf killers out there, please kindly guide newcomers~(´⌣`ʃƪ) (ps: If you like this game, please leave a message and give me more motivation to update! (∩ᵒ̴̶̷̤⌔ᵒ̴̶̷̤∩))

I came from next door. I read Tower of Babel twice and ordered this book in full. It may be a bit subjective, but I still feel that the quality of this book is at least two levels worse than the Tower of Babel next door. Tower of Babel does not have so many messy people, it emphasizes logic, and the board is novel and creative. There are too many useless descriptions in this book, and some of the logic is messed up.

🍅Come on, the author is getting better and better as he writes, I tied it because of that book! So come support the author of old books! Subscribe to them all! Big cheers for the author! I really like watching it! I hope to keep writing and the author can try infinite flow in the future. I won't give any suggestions because what I'm particularly touched about is that the author really listened to the suggestions seriously, and it can be seen that the new book is smoother in terms of rhythm and narrative logic. The most important thing is that this is the first time I have read a werewolf novel, and after comparing similar novels, I really feel that the author's understanding of werewolf games is quite good. It can be seen that the author's logic is online, so I really think that the author can try an unlimited stream game next time about the game between people, like Japan's Gambling Apocalypse, Unlimited Games such as Kingdom of the Dying, or continue to enrich the background story of the novel except werewolf killing, and enrich the world view of the setting in addition to werewolf killing itself. After all, novels are similar to literary works. They need to have a more sense of story, but this is also difficult to grasp. The author 🍅 has already seen great progress in his book. The world view is more novel and the story is relatively complete. Come on

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I read a novel and got myself into it. I started killing online excitedly and found that I couldn't even understand the prophet in the 9-player game🤣🤣🤣

I wrote too much about the main theme before it was put on the shelves, and it was a bit hard to read. In comparison, the Tower of Babel you have in 🍅 is much better

Werewolf is originally not suitable for large-scale international competitions because of the multi-person participation and uncertain identities, because it is easy for unfair situations to occur due to national issues. As a result, you are in a parallel world and you still write so many off-site methods. This is a very poisonous point in competitive writing. Why do I read competitive writing? What I want to see is who has more off-court skills? It's enough for you to write some small tricks about South Korea. After all, we don't know what South Korea is like, but you know that South Korea arranges positions for Chinese players at the front, and you can also perform such unique ruthless skills as the curse of possession. . . I know you want to highlight the drama of the protagonist saving the national team in a desperate situation, but brother, this is 2024, do you want me to dream back to ten years ago? I don't know if your writing like this highlights the protagonist's awesomeness, but it definitely highlights the stupidity of China in this world. As a strong team in this game (according to your description, it is considered a strong team in Asia at least. I haven't seen the back and I don't know what level it is in the world). It has no right to speak or any means of counter-control. What is this other than stupidity?

Let me talk about the conclusion first. I personally give this book a 6/10 and recommend it to all online readers who are interested in werewolf killing (you don't need to understand it, you can read it as long as you are interested). Due to the difficulty of writing and the narrow audience, the benefits are disproportionate. Werewolf online writing has always been a niche within a niche. There are only a few dozen authors out of 1.4 Billion people who are willing to write and complete it well. The quality of this book is undoubtedly among the best among the works I have read. It depicts enough attractions both inside and outside the game. Originally, according to this evaluation, it should have been given 8 points or above (personal scoring standard reference: 8 points for the Lord of Mysteries, 9 points for the Taoist Fairy), but there are two big, two small and four problems in the book that are serious gangsters for me, which severely lowered the author's expectations. The following is a list of problems in the order in which they appear, for your reference only: 1. Setting contradiction: It is obviously a world with much higher technology than now, and holographic projection can be used to change the appearance anytime and anywhere, but it is still used to wear a helmet, deal cards manually, and tap shoulders to show the game links such as closing eyes and obtaining identity. It is just like Wakanda in the Black Panther movie, which claims to be the world's top technology but uses spears and bows to fight. After reading the following, of course we know that this awkward setting serves the main logic of the book and the core ability of the protagonist - to kill people face-to-face. But in the eyes of the vast majority of passers-by and readers who have only been exposed to online killings and a small number of variety shows, it is inappropriate to make comments based on whether someone is nervous or not wearing a helmet before they have spoken. Is this inappropriate off-site factors? And this leads to the second question. 2. Unpleasant off-field factors: Mainly reflected in the small movements of the stick at the beginning, followed by the teammates who suddenly became cunning and stubborn at several critical moments later, trying desperately to hold back the protagonist. Friends who read a lot of online articles should be able to see that these bloody scenes are to create a sense of crisis and tension, so that the protagonist will not be pushed all the way. But the reaction of readers is enough to prove that these things are not pleasing in the werewolf world. 3. Off topic: If the previous issue was just a small issue that affected the perception, this was the big issue that made me think about whether to continue pursuing it. Epitomized in the blood-stained bell tower in the World Cup final. Except for having the same source, this game gives me the feeling that it is completely different from Werewolf. What's more serious is that the game judgment is full of uncontrollable off-site factors. The success or failure of many things is not determined by the contestants, but by the storyteller. This is just like you get a penalty kick in a football match, but whether the opponent has a goalkeeper and how many goalkeepers there are are all judged "randomly" by the storyteller. In fact, the game itself is well written, showing a completely different gameplay idea and game charm from Werewolf. If this game were placed in the protagonist's daily participation in variety shows or friendly practice matches, I would be very happy to watch it. However, it appears in the most important World Cup final, just like you are halfway through the football World Cup final and suddenly ask the players on the field to play a game of table tennis, and the winner will count one goal. To me, this is a serious digression. 4. The inconsistency of professional terminology is reflected in the game of Mao Erlang Village in the Olympic Games. Similar to question three, there are also random factors, but at least it was the contestant himself who called for a stop. At least on the surface it seems to be controllable, so the problem is not here. 99% of the book uses the terminology of werewolf killing, such as killing, gold, mercury, and silver water. Why do you insist on changing it to black balls, white balls, etc.? You said this is a term exclusive to Japanese wolves, but the tabla wolf who participated in the Alpha wolf did not change his words specifically? Do Americans and Italians also say chasha and jinshui? Taking a step back, the protagonist's national team teammates have also participated in the Japanese Wolves several times. At that time, they were also talking about killing Jin Shui. Why did this game have to be special? A similar situation actually exists in question three, but in my opinion, the blood-stained clock tower is no longer a werewolf, so I can use the wording as I wish, but in name, your game is still a tabla werewolf. These are the issues that affect my reluctance to give high scores. Of course, these are just my thoughts as an online literature enthusiast and Werewolf player, for reference only. Including the author, there is no obligation to listen. Just choose the one that makes sense. I think if the author doesn't listen to the readers' opinions, the novel may die, but if the author listens to the readers' opinions, the novel will definitely die.

River View (Photo: Guangyuanjiang)

Chen Xiang (Photo: Guangyuanjiang)

Inexplicably funny () Jiang Jing: If you really have the ability, just push the good guys and slap the knife. What's the use of shouting "The werewolf will win" to strengthen your courage? It's still Jiang Jing: Wolves must win! (Leaving the scene gracefully) I found that Jiang Jing was always thinking about slapping his knife. I feel like this guy likes to be cool () or likes to solve the game simply and neatly? Teacher Jiang Jing has always been brave and good at operations, and he is super confident, handsome and cute hehe Well, I feel like Jiang Jing is a proud kitten...

Jiang Jing reads urban cool novels and wonders why this is so unpleasant (Playing with jokes, playing with jokes)

I thought it was far worse than Babel Tower. Someone in the comment area said it was two levels behind. After reading a few boards, I felt it was more than that. To give a simple example, since the author has decided to set the Werewolf game as a competitive game, he must ensure the most basic fairness. I did not expect that the identity number of the national team has remained unchanged. Doesn't it mean that a team can always let a team take the first stab or even the first poison just by thinking? The most naughty thing is that the author actually wrote it like this, which almost made me die of poison.

In the niche werewolf killing circuit, I chose a more niche face-to-face killing. Most of them rely on facial expressions rather than logic. On top of this, I also have to spend chapters writing about other teammates' games, and I know that viewers who are not the protagonist may not like to watch it, so the writing about teammates is relatively watery, but it is not a brushstroke. Leading to even more nondescript. On this basis, many more niche foreign boards have been added. . . .

It's very frustrating to see a free chapter where foreign countries are targeting them and the country is unable to counterattack. The whole chapter has a depressing atmosphere.

What is the reason? It's so hard to guess. Good Q bomb. In the past, you always painted more handsome river scenes? This one is so elastic and soft... Hey hey

Is this Jiang Xiaojing from high school before time travel?

Strictly speaking, this should be a CP-oriented single-player picture of the river scene I drew, but Xiaobai is considered a sequel... And does not appear in this book. Many of the river scenes I draw are actually two-person pictures () I always feel uncomfortable posting them here.

I feel that it is a bit unreasonable for the protagonist to lose before time travel. A player ranked in the top 100 does not know how to adapt to various teammates to speak? After playing for two seasons, what teammate have you never seen before, who would be so careless? And if the protagonist explains clearly, why can't his teammates understand? The protagonist's ranking is so high, why would he be matched with some novice teammates?