Tianlongzhi Makes Me Stupid Like This

To be honest, when writing a novel, you need to have clear protagonists and villains. You have already hinted that you made the original character a villain, but you also made the protagonist a dark villain and associates with four evil people. Is someone like Yun Zhonghe a human being? This has caused your article to be very alienating in the eyes of some people, which is why it was rejected. In fact, you can try to make the protagonist an upright villain, write all the original novels as dark people, and make it a plot similar to a black myth. It will probably be better, but you must not abuse the protagonist. Nowadays, people who read novels are mainly for relaxation and entertainment, and no one likes to read depressive things. This is all for reference.