The Ghost-Killing Detective in Conan

It's too old-fashioned, and the classic gangster turns into big trouble. The love process was well written, but it felt like a lot of points were deducted because of those somewhat annoying and embarrassing routines. Actually, it's pretty good if it's about removing spirits and solving crimes, and the sweet love story (I really like the love process written by the author), but it's a pity that this unsightly plot has to be added. It's tasteless to eat, it's a pity to throw it away

Can the heroine also add Xiaolan 🥺

The author didn't pay attention to many details. How could Xiaolan and Mariko be in the kendo club?

Why are there so many members of the New Zealand Party in a novel?

First of all, there is a problem with the introduction. Suzuki Sonoko is the second lady, and the eldest lady is Suzuki Ayako.

Every plot you write, whether it is a big plot or a small plot, must shape or show the protagonist's personality. It doesn't matter whether the abuser fights back or not. These design issues are only related to the readers' reading preferences. However, you have to write about the advantages of the protagonist's character, and his overall shaping must be upward, otherwise it will be like a diary.

No Xiaolan? What about Concubine Yingli

Just the main female characters appearing now, Haibara, Sato, and Suzuki. Among them, Haibara and Sato's descriptions are better, while Suzuki's descriptions are quite average, just like the plot in a common campus novel. Haihara is about the interaction between a arrogant kitten and a rogue master. Sato is also about the mutual entrustment of life when the case occurs, and the astringent welfare plot after the case is over. I think the two can be written together. Haibara doesn't matter as long as she doesn't get older, while Sato is a standard heroine template.

Xiaolan really added it, can you add Kujo Suzuko? She seems to be at odds with Feiyingli. When the time comes, she will be with Feiyingli...

To be honest, the protagonist always looking at Sonoko's feet is a bit perverted

Belmode

Xiaolan is doing karate, why do you always write it as taekwondo?

Author, can you delete the part about "Xiaolan and Conan took a bath together" in Chapter 12? Do you have to keep disgusting people?

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The writing is quite good, but the heroine should only be briefly introduced. I'm not against harems, I quite like them, I'm just giving some advice. Too many female protagonists are stereotyped and the process of recruiting them is too bad, which tests the author's ability. Now the plot and emotional description are pretty good.

I read the comment section and laughed. Sure enough, there are more fans of Conan here. Although Xinlan is still dating, the character of a loyal and sympathetic character has long been an old man. There is nothing that cannot be broken down (the following are the key plots before and after the critical resurrection and the interview with the Cyan Fist movie version) Well, the boyfriend can't do the intimate act but the avatar can do it, it's really like the setting of Luo Wen Not to mention the Death Luo Shen chapter. Even Yuanshan and Ye believe that the washing machine is innocent, but Mao Lilan. . . . Um. . . .

A little gangster keeps delaying the solution, disgusting

It's really well written. Please support me. The little gangster in the front is a bit disgusting. I hope that the protagonist in the back will do it to him for the first time when he encounters this kind of garbage.

There is no need to create some old-fashioned formula with multiple female protagonists. In fact, it would be better to write just one.

At the beginning, I defrauded two million yen and gave it to a little gangster. How dare this little gangster dare to take it? Why didn't he run away immediately after taking it?

The biggest problem is that I don't have a big picture view. I don't have to go to school right away. So what if I take a year off? Anyway, after studying for decades, I am still a sophomore in high school. Use the world for other things, and if you have the strength, just kill everyone you don't like.

Why do you feel that many characters and plots are not original but original? I'm very worried about whether the author's writing skills can be used to make Conan play the role of the protagonist without appearing to be too intellectual.

Most of the original works written before it was put on the shelves, a little bastard dragged out dozens of chapters, with no desire to spend money to subscribe.

What about the new book? Zhongdeng

I feel like you've just started and you've finished the book?

Compared with another exorcist, the span is not that small. Consciously be a little lower than taking off your skirt.

A eunuch? 😅

Is there a group? I think the author can consider a spin-off

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁

It makes me feel so uncomfortable. I don't have any means to save my life.