Kill Across America from the West

The first few chapters were okay, that's all, but then I started to go crazy. I wasn't dreaming of being a wolf, but I was also a magician, doing fantasy mirrors, flowers, water, moon, different worlds, etc. I couldn't watch it.

When I first watched it, I thought the protagonist was a person with high IQ and incredible martial arts. Then I looked at the protagonist and found out that he was a loser. At the last look, the protagonist is being played like a stupid pig! ! !

What the hell are these chapters Yeyue, Jinghua, Shuiyue? Talking in your sleep or having a nervous breakdown? Anyway, I can't stand it anymore

The first few chapters were pretty good, but starting from chapter 12, I started to get sick. I just wanted to write something, but I got stuck 😅

Laoba

The protagonist goes to the United States to purge criminals. Isn't this a traitor?

. . . Where did the magician start to become a literary youth?

Many friends may find these chapters "inexplicable" and "obtrusive", and think that the author or the protagonist is being ridiculous. But I want to say: This is not the case. Perhaps these chapters are indeed not to everyone's taste. But I can at least guarantee that these chapters are by no means aimless. I have designed a complete plot line from the beginning and laid the foundation for it. There will be follow-up plots in the future to bring this "branch" to a perfect conclusion. ... This is my first time writing a novel, and I consider myself to be anything but a genius. So making mistakes is inevitable. I would like to express my deepest gratitude to those friends who silently read and provided valuable opinions, as well as friendly paragraphs and book reviews. You are my motivation to persevere and my mentors and helpful friends on the road to success. As for paragraph reviews or book reviews that are malicious and can even be classified as personal attacks, my true reaction is that I have no emotions at all. However, those who scold you too harshly will still be deleted in order to purify the comment area of ​​this book.

First, after reading the first three chapters, the writing is quite smooth and the future is promising. The current flaw is that the summoning system requires tapping the temples. It is recommended to chant silently in your mind instead.

If you copy the video content, you might as well watch the video on Douyin.

There are still many people around the world who are good at revolver rapid fire. If the protagonist can do bolt-action rifle rapid fire, he would be awesome. Bolt-action rifle rapid fire is much more difficult to master than revolver rapid fire. There are people who are proficient in shotgun rapid fire, but the era of breech-loading guns has been around for so long. Have any of you heard or seen videos of famous bolt-action rifle rapid fire?

America, the single female protagonist, went to the United States and became a good person. This is a proper surrender.

Forage? Poisonous weed? That's all, it's just a dream, so let's do it and cherish it.

It has been added to the collection. It has great ideas and the author's writing is very good. This book title makes people want to click on it. I visited with my work "The Witcher Begins in America". Thank you!