Earth Wrong: Breaking the Darkness with Thunder

After reading it, let me talk about the problems I have seen so far. The overall writing style is okay, but the logic and main line are not clear. Except for the beginning, the more you read later, the less present the protagonist is, leaving you with almost no sense of involvement. It is better to use a visual description centered on the protagonist.

How can I say that? It's a Western fantasy story, but the way magic is done now is a bit like Chinese Taoism. It just feels nondescript, just like the Kryptonian Superman playing Wing Chun or the Black Mountain old demon using Iron Man armor.

I feel a bit like a literary youth. I keep talking about justice and describing how the people are like. I personally feel that it is unnecessary. Just one or two chapters will be enough. Any more will feel complicated. To put it bluntly, once the high-end combat power is defeated, Orario will be destroyed. This is a Western heroic story. The overall victory or defeat of the war depends on a few people. There is no need to write too much about the low-level combat power showdown. Even if you write a showdown with low-level combat power, you have to write it around the protagonist. Don't always write the protagonist as the one who saves the day.

After reading more than 50 chapters, although I was mentally prepared, I was still extremely addicted. What I like to watch the most is the kind of protagonist who doesn't eat beef, so this Asasi and righteous protagonist is completely in conflict with what I think. But I also want to see it wrong, so as long as he is strong enough, can be deceived enough, is obscene and developed enough, and then saves others, I can accept it. However, the male protagonist in this article is really good at not being obscene and developed, and he is also desperately righteous. It is so poisonous that it is difficult to express in words.

Looking at the title of the book, Breaking the Darkness with Thunder, I originally thought it was Sikong Zhen or a magnetic field strongman similar to Bufa Dian, but it turned out to be a five-thunder rectification method.

The skills are too skewed. The Japanese flavor of the skills in the light novels written by Japanese people is not as strong as the Chinese Taoist flavor of the fan fiction written by the author. Wouldn't it be okay to have a Zeus Thunder for a more Greek style? You come up with the Five Thunder Zhengfa style... Play with thunder and come with skill thunder. Play with body and come with skill hero trial (save the number of life and death battles as spare life to strengthen physical ability and form special skills on this basis. Taken from Twelve Trials and Twelve Glory)

If she has a harem, will the beauty take it? Hestia and the Moon Goddess... I saw someone talking about giving Bell a CP... No If you already read harem fanfics, why should you read the original CP?

I've been a eunuch for a month, are you pushing the bull demon?

These three magics feel average. The three magics of Jiu Mo Ji can be combined to produce 9 kinds of effects, including large range, small range, and can also be used as a shield.

It's pretty good, but there's no main plot. It feels like the main character has nothing to do.

As a personal comment, one year is fine for the timeline, but it's also fine for the protagonist to advance to level two in seven months. The protagonist at level 2 can rescue everywhere and the target at level 5 can also be used. But I always get hurt, and why don't I use the main character's ultimate move in one? Even if there is damage, there is healing. After seeing the fortieth picture, I felt nothing after that and didn't want to read it at all. It's smelly and long, and the protagonist's strength is not mentioned at all. What's wrong with just starting a game and going straight to level three? Isn't it possible to directly summon Erlang Xian Sheng Zhenjun, or the Nine Heavens Yingyuan Thunder God Universal Transformation Zhenjun? It doesn't open all the time, it's frustrating. What's wrong with driving? With the Milk God here, I can recover in less than a day. Besides Zheng Lei provided a description of the position, it had no effect and was not presented. The plot is as bland as running water. What is the meaning of the protagonist's existence? Knowing that Aurora will be attacked like this, what other measures are there besides reminding her that something will explode? Still got bombed. The second protagonist's strength, weapons and equipment have been put together. Hungry Oh took a look and it took eighty pictures to end the plot. It's boring.

I haven't watched the anime, but I have read the fan fiction of this anime. Although I haven't read some novels before, it doesn't affect the enjoyment. Now this one seems to be too pure for someone like me who has never read the original work and I can't understand where the enjoyment is. I hope I can write it so that passersby readers can also read it.

Since "Di Wrong: Breaking the Darkness with Thunder" has been released, you should have guessed what people who clicked on this name want to see, but the result is "Five Thunder Methods"

Author, to be honest, I feel like I am reading a long book, there are so many names 😥

How does it compare with the refresh skill next door?

The head above the neck🙂

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?

Emmm, that's not good. I haven't seen such an embarrassing article in a long time.

I want to see Astraea's start as a fan of the Earth Mistake. I hope Alishe and the others can continue their justice, instead of letting Lyu bear the burden alone.