My Uncle, a Young Wudang Master, Just Wants to Become an Immortal!

You don't need to look at the world of mixed martial arts. There are no exceptions. They are all rubbish. Even the slightest weakness in poison resistance cannot be tolerated. The issue of combat power can be forcibly leveled. He gritted his teeth and accepted the draw between Qiao Feng and the Evil King. But the character design is really not good. For example, Huang Yaoshi is aloof and arrogant, which is very reasonable in The Condor Shooting. Among the five best in the world, he has the capital to be proud. But in the world of mixed martial arts, there are at least dozens of similar masters. He is still as arrogant as the original. Doesn't he become a fool?

Who cares about this setting? Stone veins. Everyone's meridians are open. It's just a matter of how to obtain Qi. You need to be brought in by a master and then look at your own talent. Only a fool who is a cultivator would watch this.

Either give him a gold finger directly, why should he give it to him when he is an adult? Are he a fool before he reaches adulthood?

This book is really speechless. First of all, the martial arts settings, foundation building corresponds to the grand master, golden elixir corresponds to heavenly beings, Yuanying corresponds to land gods, the golden elixir Yuanying, which takes hundreds or even thousands of years to be cultivated in the world of immortals, has been practiced in martial arts for only one hundred and eighty years, and Xian Na, who is still a chicken, this setting is simply too high, and it is estimated that only 90% of people are like this. Then came the characters. First came Duan Tianya, who appeared like a second-stroke character. He acted like a fool and was beaten by the protagonist. Then there was Xuan Bei, who acted like a joke and was also beaten. Then there was Yang Xuyan, who screamed like a fool. They were also beaten up. Shi Fei Xuan was beaten up for inexplicably causing hatred without any reason. Yue Buqun and He Taichong were beaten up for pretending to be cool. Linghu Chong was beaten up in revenge. Anyway, it was just a story about a bunch of idiots pretending to be cool and being beaten up. Does anyone know these? Is it appropriate for you to be treated like a fool? You don't need to read it anymore, I guess all the martial arts people are like this and let the protagonist beat them up.

It is true that every author has his own setting, but your setting is too ridiculous. You have to cultivate immortals, and Yuanying is comparable to the so-called land gods. To put it bluntly, you want to suppress the protagonist's strength. In fact, the outline can be set completely, and the protagonist's foundation building will reach the top in the world. , The golden elixir is to be invincible in the world, and then pursue realm breakthroughs, wander around the world and show yourself as a saint in front of others. It is really nonsense for you to compare Yuanying to land gods, unless these people with high martial arts can have special effects in martial arts like dominating the world.              ，，，，，，？ After all, you are writing a book for readers. If you are just writing for fun, practicing or something like that, just pretend I didn't say that.

Poison, the poison was discovered in the first chapter. It's multiple worlds stitched together. I don't understand. Can't you honestly understand one world view? Mr. Jin Yong's world is so exciting that you can't write about it. Forget it, summary. Shennong is dead

After reading Chapter 12, I felt like my IQ and common sense were being rubbed against the ground! A beginner in cultivating immortals has a kick that only weighs a hundred pounds! Aren't most of us on earth cultivating immortals? ? ? I don't care about the other things. I can't stand it any more, so the author should just write better and better! I'll withdraw first! May everyone have a healthy Dragon Boat Festival!

Can this kind of product be on the best-seller list? Are everyone so rich nowadays?

Open the big hook and still want to press. Zhang Wuji understood Tai Chi after just one reading. You are so smart that you still can't understand it. Shaolin and Wudang are equally famous, but Shaolin is the comprehensive Shaolin. When it's Wudang's turn, it's just Wudang who relies on heaven. Zhang Sanfeng relied on pig's feet to achieve his breakthrough. Why were Shaolin and Wudang so famous before?

The so-called opening of the meridians in the novel should be warm, nourishing and tempering, because in Chinese medicine, all meridians are born open, and if you have stone veins all over your body, you will be a ghost as long as you are alive.

There is really so much rubbish written about mixed martial arts, can't it be done one world at a time?

I really didn't believe it before, but now I believe it.

Qidian is really lonely, can this kind of garbage be put on the shelves? ?

The logic of hierarchy is confusing. Zhang Sanfeng 𣎴 said that the best in the world is at least one of the top talents. Based on the standard that he appeared at the age of 100 and the heaven and man are one, the heaven and man written by the author should be after a hundred years old. The cats and dogs are all heaven and earth, and it is outrageous to be younger than Zhang Sanfeng.

Rubbish, even if the ladder cloud is flying in the sky, how could it shrink to the ground?

After comparison, Nima, what kind of setting is this? It's better to practice martial arts than this!

The writing is messy, I write whatever comes to my mind, and the logic is confusing. This book will probably become a eunuch soon.

Damn it, there are so many negative comments, I actually spent money to read them all, then how stupid I must be, ugh...

What a rubbish book. If I want to offend people, the people who can read this book are definitely those who can't eat wild boars and can't eat dog meat. Let's not talk about whether Zhang Sanfeng is strong or not. Zhu Mingli dared to threaten Wudang and sent three horse boys. They were about to kill the pig, but the pig's feet let him go without saying a word. Is this a cruel article?

I was not familiar with the original work, so I continued reading until the protagonist was in seclusion and was visited by Shi Feixuan. There was no protection in the middle, and the protagonist had no temper, just like a dead licking dog.

Poison point: Nascent Soul = Land Immortal

Deliberately distorting the characters' personalities, making each character look like a clown. If you don't like the personality of the original characters, why should you learn from them?

It's so toxic that I even went to the app to comment. Your protagonist's ability to cultivate immortality is comparable to martial arts training compared to cultivating the body in cultivation. The problem is that you shouldn't have some normal thinking and logic when writing novels. It's outrageous.

I don't know where those monthly tickets came from. Please stop writing novels in the future.

It's extremely poisonous. You wrote it like Shi Fei Xuan is a clown. The protagonist is so disgusting and yet he tolerates everything.

The plot is a mess, the conflicts are inexplicable, and the characters have no personality at all. It is copied and it feels like I haven't even watched a TV series. Each character has no original characteristics. The names are just like the passerby A, villain, B, and bandit D in the previous garbage Internet articles!

There were three great masters beaten at the front, but their throats were cut in a single fight at the back.

No need to read it, Song Qingshu's psychological description made me sick🤢I vomited, it's only 30 chapters and it's full of poisonous points, back off, back off

Just enjoy the heat. A very interesting book "The old man picked up rags in time and made a living by making bad movies"

"To live or to die, that is the question." Archaon was born in the Nordland of the Empire. On the first day after he was born, his mother drowned him in the sea... Stop! A man shouted from the shadows. Destiny is changed. ------- There was no death in infancy, and there was no sea. He was just abandoned. He appeared in the church and was adopted by the priest. He had grown into a pious, brave and righteous little boy at the age of eight. However, one nameless night, because of his adoptive father's taboo research, a terrible plague came to him. His skin turned into scabs, and his body was full of ulcers. He died of illness... Stop! A man in the shadow shouted angrily. Destiny was changed again. -------- At the age of thirteen, Archaon, who was not sick, stayed away from the church, and grew up healthy, became the squire of the local lord's knight. However, the irritable lord drunkenly beat up the cowardly knight, and the loyal squire who protected the lord hit the lord with a sledgehammer. However, due to the following offense, the lord and the knight jointly captured him and was kicked to death by the horse... Stop! A man in the shadow shouted angrily. Destiny was changed again. -------- The lord beat the knight and did not stop him. The two were drunk and fell into a goblin trap while hunting, and they were all killed. Archaon, who killed the goblins and retrieved their corpses, was adopted by the lord's wife, inherited the family, and became a noble. When he grew up, he was brave, upright and strong. However, after defeating a tribe of beastmen and saving the love of his life, Sister Giselle, he was seriously injured and his right eye was pierced by a rune stone. "The stones need to be smashed, the corpses need to be burned, and warnings need to be issued. Our empire is not a place for their chaos!" As soon as Archaon finished his heroic words and took the initiative to cut off the rear, he was crushed to death by the tauren... Stop! A man in the shadow shouted angrily. Destiny was changed again. ------- The hero saves the beauty, successfully escapes, and robs a forbidden magic book guarded by the beastman. In order to expose the devil's conspiracy, he, godfather Dagbert, and nun Giselle rush to the imperial capital Altdorf to report to the high priest of the Sigma Temple. However, halfway through, a group of Knights of the Temple of Sigmar blocked their way. After asking for their names, they killed Godfather Dagbert and Sister Giselle, snatched the Forbidden Grimoire, and stabbed Archaon to death... Stop! There was a man in the shadows who smashed all the cups in front of him. Destiny is changed again and again. ------ Everyone survived. They escaped the pursuit and returned to their hometown castle. What they saw was that the citizens in the castle were slaughtered by the knights of the Temple of Sigmar. The adoptive mother was hanged like a leaning scarecrow on the top of the city. There was a big word at the gate of the city---heresy! He did not cry, only endless sadness. He looked at the scars left when he fought against the devil, and then looked at the faith pendant in his hand, and his faith began to collapse. The adoptive father told him that he saw the reason in the Forbidden Grimoire: "The Forbidden Grimoire revealed the end of the world, and the person who destroyed the world was named Archaon. And that person is you." Archaon did not want to admit such a fate, but he had to believe his adoptive father's words. In order not to bring darkness to the world, he chose to commit suicide by throwing himself into a well. Stop! There was a manly man in the shadows, cursing and modifying the timeline. Destiny was changed again. --------- The adoptive father, lover, adoptive mother, and subjects were all killed by the temple knights. The angry Archaon swore revenge and broke into the Great Temple of Altdorf. He caught the high priest and asked him sharply why he did this! "The Forbidden Grimoire reveals the end of the world. The person who destroyed the world is named Archaon. And that person is you." The great priest said. "Just because of this ridiculous prophecy, you are going to kill my whole family?" Archaon turned dark, full of disgust for Sigma's hypocritical light, and vowed to destroy everything about Sigma and make him pay the price. He broke through the Garden of Nurgle, walked through the Demon Palace of Tzeentch, withstood the temptation of Slaanesh, killed the Great Demon of Khorne, dragged his scarred body to a place of shadow, and was crowned by the Eternal Chosen One. "Stop!" The man in the shadow stood up and said happily: "My name is Bilak! I am your father! Everything you have is given by me, now it's time to give your body back to me!" --------- I am Archaon, the Lord of Doom, the Three-Eyed King, the favorite of the Chaos Gods, the last High King of Norsca, the 13th Eternal Chosen God, the Commander-in-Chief of Chaos, and the boss of the bad guys. I killed Beelak who was playing tricks on me all my life, and I beat Sigma so hard that he cowered in the Kingdom of God and did not dare to go out. Faced with a life that has cycled countless times, how should I choose? "To live or to die, that is the question."