Naruto: I Am Hinata, the Strongest Creature!

The progress of the novel was so intense that it completely jumped out of the scope of the original plot and began to enter the stage of self-creation. But Hinata's cheating is too big, her status and background are high, her personality is not bad, and she grew up like a gangster, so the main character is: no one in the village dares to offend her, her combat power is low and she can't afford to offend her, she only cares about experience all day long and doesn't cause trouble. This next step will be very difficult to write. Not a story, not a protagonist. I am not optimistic about the subsequent plot of the novel, and I am worried about TJ.

It's better to write a male protagonist and a muscular woman... Why bother, it's all about aesthetics.

The Hokage has high skills but low flesh, and the top three colors of Pirates are basically invincible.

If he takes his own life, is Hinata really sane?

Hinata's talent is not weak, but her character is not good, and her potential is also high

Why do you need to use a mace when using Kaido template? I really can't appreciate this weapon.

When will Kaido be able to touch Kaguya Otsutsuki?

After reading the latest chapter, let me share my thoughts after reading it. First of all, the content is quite interesting and I could read it in one sitting. It is obviously not a boring novel. Secondly, the writing style is not bad and it looks very comfortable. Finally, let's talk about the shortcomings. The number of words is too small and I feel like it's not enough.

The biggest problem with Hinata isn't the caged bird or the Byakugan's flaw. But there is no room for advancement, he cannot learn advanced soft boxing, and he has to be controlled by some clans to control his life and death. Simply, leave only one sect, make all the others branches, and then let go of the study of secret arts.

There is a problem with the logical core of this book. It is written as a fanfic but does not respect the logical core of the original characters. If the author is the second publisher, the fanfic will be dead at once, because most book friends first read the original work and then use their own understanding to form their own version of the Naruto world. World view, the author can start to expand on it to resonate, and then add his own creations and derivative works. What the author writes should not be posted on the main website, but on a female channel. This book is the story of the heroine's rebirth and mastery of the family's powerful ninja world!

Cheating but forcibly suppressing the strength, the armor was divided into one hundred levels. The first level 10 took about more than a year and the next level 5 took about a year or two. However, the first level 10 sneak attack could kill the Raikage Jonin, and then he kept describing strength and so on. According to the author's level 20 Or around 30, you will reach the shadow level. The youngest protagonist is about 16 or 17 years old, and Uchiha Itachi is also about 16 or 17 years old. It's really distressing to cheat the shadow level. The most important thing is that it becomes more and more difficult to upgrade later. Everyone has played the game, right? The first ten levels are basically ten minutes and half an hour. It is not difficult to upgrade to level 50 or so in a few days and half a month, but there is a trap every ten levels. Sometimes it only takes one or two years to reach 70 or 80. The most important thing is that after the armor is fully upgraded, I feel that this plug-in is a trap. The most outrageous thing is that I learned to control a caged bird at the age of 5.

This Kaido template is at level 100. You are only at level 30 and you are almost first in the sixth level and below. Is Teacher Kaido really that powerful?

There are too many character changes, and the description of the enemy's IQ is too low. In addition, the last few chapters feel very urgent and rushed, and there are no details to start with.

Is the Uchiha family written too weak? There is no one who explodes when faced with a desperate situation. . . .

A big failure. This alone is enough to persuade you to quit.

I just finished reading the latest chapter, and I have a question. In this book, everyone does things without considering the consequences. There are five great ninja villages and multiple small ninja villages in Naruto, and Konoha occupies the richest place. Now the Uchiha has been very brutally wiped out, and dozens of middle and jounin levels have died in the ANBU roots (genin are rubbish, they are not worthy of participating in these missions). Does F4 want to fight Hinata openly? The Fourth Raikage: Hurry up, hurry up, the beating is so light and you haven't eaten, right? ! Black Zetsu: Hurry up The Fourth Kazekage: Beat me hard, I have long wanted to live in the rich Land of Fire There are also a series of large and small ninja villages that I don't need to give examples. These people don't know anything, are they just like fools? If there is no protagonist, the Uchiha clan will be exterminated on the first day, the Hyuga clan will be exterminated on the second day, Konoha will suffer heavy losses, the group will attack on the third day, and Konoha will be dead on the fourth day, and the heroes will compete 🤭🤭🤭🤭

I always feel like something is wrong with this writing technique.

Out of ten Naruto books, nine are political battles, and the remaining one is just mindless leveling.

The protagonist's character looks really twisted.

The book is the starting point. I forgot the title.

I feel like Brother Ying is more suitable for this template

It's a bit toxic and I can't stand it anymore. I think I should watch Konoha's Byakugan Princess again😅

It's a bit toxic, the plot is too much and unreasonable 😰

Forget about the daily plot, the main plot is still blended in with clever jokes, and the atmosphere of the book will be destroyed.

Update soon! ! ! Very pretty, okay?

I re-wrote a novel, and the author's text and direction are exactly the same as mine. In order to avoid plagiarism, I hope the author will send out the rest of the manuscript so that I can check whether it is plagiarized from mine 🙂🙂🙂

If you use a template, do you have to use a mace? Forget about soul time travel!

The power of arrows depends on the material of the bow. The power of arrows is basically limited. Your bow can shoot arrows with a maximum damage of 10. Even if your strength is 10,000, it will not affect the power of arrows. At most, it can shoot for a long time.

It's written like a running account, with no special features, just an urban pretentious slap-in-the-face article with Hokage's skin on it. The content of the article is not as attractive as the title. After reading the chapter list, you will know what is going to happen next. The plot is too blunt and boring! It would be more interesting to write about Hinata having a character like Kaido, drinking from a large bowl, and adding some Kaido jokes.

I won't look at it later. It's obviously just a running account, written by another person, or AI. Just look at the table of contents.