Longevity Begins with a Small Role

I hope it won't be like that evil speed pass, which is good in the early stage but becomes overwhelming in the later stage.

Not to mention whether the plot design is poisonous or not, everyone has their own ideas. As far as the writing is concerned, it is really worrying! I can't figure out the characters. The designed dialogues are completely inconsistent with the characteristics of the characters. The personalities and experiences that many characters should have cannot be reflected at all.

Not bad, not bad. When I first read the title, I thought it was a one-on-one novel. Unexpectedly, it turns out to be surprisingly good at the end. Is this the right way to write it? A living world should have living people, and everyone is their own protagonist, especially a world like the world of cultivating immortals, where the power belongs to oneself. The vivid plot development is the basis for this book to continue. Although the beginning of the plot is a bit of a cliche novel, the plot characters are well written. The male protagonist is not highlighted, and the supporting characters are not deliberately suppressed or suppressed, and each character has a certain development. It is not like some cool novel, which is still the same after ten years!

Coming~

I suggest the author revise the first ten or so chapters. It's too overwhelming and too discouraging. If I don't talk about the later chapters, it's still a bit of a problem. Or maybe you should learn from the book on the Seventh Month Demon Cult.

What a powerful killer! Worse than a dog

You received a reward of 1,000,000 starting coins from your old friend Youxue!

Looking for further reading! ! !