A Game Merchant Who Started in the Ninja World

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This kind of fanfic about the mastermind behind the scenes. There are two main points to watch. First, many characters in the original plot, after knowing a lot of information and gaining the power to change their destiny, destroyed the original plot. Second, the protagonist, as the mastermind behind the scenes, arranges various tests and trials. The ingenuity of the level setting and the trend of the times it arouses, and the pleasure of being the mastermind behind the scenes. The following are some suggestions The first one is to stimulate subjective initiative The good ones will follow you, and the evil ones will admire you! The light longs for you, and the darkness also longs for you! You are an existence that transcends everything If you want to achieve such a goal, then the pattern must be relaxed. The protagonist can die personally, but he cannot simply become a messenger of justice. He should be a devil! Give the sinking the possibility of breaking free! Hinata Neji. Give the Avengers a smooth path to increase their strength! Uchiha Sasuke. The author handled the positive characters of the original plot well. But we need to open up the pattern and broaden our horizons. Why can't the Daimyo of Fire be given power? As the nominal ruler of the country, doesn't he want to have the power to suppress the world and actually hold power? Why can't the Tianlong people be given a chance to establish themselves forever? The ability to execute under ambition and the determination to sacrifice others will surely bring huge benefits. Besides, opportunity does not mean it can be realized. Don't underestimate the greed and stupidity of people. As long as there is hope, no amount of posters can stop the darkness and collapse of the regime caused by greed and ambition. And the deeper the oppression, the more ruthless the resistance will be. The game of reincarnation is the biggest and only opportunity for the resisters. The more fiercely the Tianlong people oppressed, the more the oppressed people explored the game of reincarnation, and the more determined they became in overthrowing the mountains above them. Give all living beings hope! Hope is the most precious thing. Whether it is a kind person or an evil person, people are willing to pay everything for hope. Nami's transformation in this article is quite good. The second guide changes destiny The protagonist relies on the advantage of knowing the plot to chat with the main characters of the original plot of the animation. Using this to guide and change their personal destiny is actually a good point to watch. However, the protagonist should not let the public guide directly say that if he guides 500 people at one time and each person asks a question, the scene will become a vegetable market and the guidance will take too long. Therefore, the public guide of Novice Village should be a cold, rigid and mechanized mechanism. First, shock everyone with absolute coercion. At the same time, silence everyone and deny them permission to speak. Second, actively control them to commit suicide. Let them not fear death. At the same time, it is also a show of force. Third, instill the purpose and mission of the reincarnation game. Fourth, give them ten minutes to buy and sell points and equipment information in the novice area. Fifth, when the time is up, throw them all directly into the mission entrance. Although you really need those people to help you work. But as an excellent HR, you have to show that you can be my dog ​​and it is your honor to work for me. After all, the protagonist really gives a lot. The protagonists and supporting characters of the plot, the princes, nobles, and powerful technicians can see the shadow of the protagonist that only they can see. This phantom that is exclusive to them will occasionally provide reminders and guidance based on the protagonist's personal preferences. This kind of guidance can be given directly. You can also entice them to use points to purchase. You can even guide them to explore the background information and side tasks of the open map. For example, guide Long to explore library materials in the ruins of modern technology, and discuss with him the pros and cons of various political systems. What is given directly is always doubtful. Only when you think and reason by yourself can you firmly believe. The third one is self-packaging and passing on responsibility The protagonist should package himself as a savior. He wants to tell players that the pollution of the world is not caused by games. Pollution is the public enemy of all worlds, and the world around us is facing the threat of pollution. The game of reincarnation is a savior and an attempt by the great and powerful to act as a buffer and a barrier against pollution and the world. In the game, the natives of each world can be resurrected infinitely, and some simple pollution can be initially eliminated. In this way, we can cultivate the younger generations and continuously train our troops. In the end, they will get out of the reincarnation game, out of their home planet of birth, and truly face the horror of pollution. This package tells the best players that the world of reincarnation is on the same page as them. They are not working for the world of reincarnation, but fighting for themselves! If the player sincerely thinks that I spur you and torture you for your own good. As the mastermind behind the scenes, you should never become the target of public criticism from your players. Not to mention standing on opposite sides, we should not even stand together. The protagonist's current position is the game company. How can any player not criticize game companies? If the benefits are sufficient and a little bit of aversion arises, that's perfectly normal. The author didn't handle it well enough and now just fills them with huge profits. The human heart is always greedy and never satisfied. Being able to feed them now does not mean that players will still be satisfied when they become stronger in the future. The fourth one: Heavy pressure to push forward The author obviously has no experience in squeezing his employees. I don't even read enough novels. Until now, the protagonist has been using the mentality of a game company to lure players forward. This is far from enough! There is great potential to be tapped! The first power. Give players hope to climb up and realize their dreams. For those outstanding people with a strong will, hope is their eternal beating heart and a firm will that is unbearable. Akainu's justice is absolute justice! If there was no other way, how could he just lift the table and compromise in the end when he was arguing with Wulaoxing. If there was any real hope of realizing absolute justice, he could just breathe fire and hit the Five Old Stars. It wasn't impossible for him to do it! The second pressure. Stir up the situation in the world, use limited-time activities to help careerists improve their strength and start a war. There are always many people who are content with the status quo. For example, Nami, after finishing Aaron's group, she would only happily go sailing and collect treasures, without any motivation to become stronger. Let careerists improve their own strength. Raise your ambitions and jump into world war. In times of crisis and war, people have more motivation and pressure to improve their strength. The third pressure. The protagonist's ultimate goal is to fight pollution. That requires the major forces to fight and compete with each other, and to cooperate with each other when necessary. The evil of human nature is unworthy of belief! If there are no restrictions, there will definitely be some forces that play dirty tricks on each other without any bottom line. For example, Danzo sent his roots to the boss siege activities led by Yun Ninja Village, causing Kizuko to blow up the city wall with his own hands. This pressure of world destruction should be passed on to the major forces in this world. It prevents them from committing evil acts without a bottom line, and also allows them to pay full attention to various activities in the game. For example, the player failed in this event. Then all the monsters in this event will be randomly dropped into the strongman settlement area in this world! Without the infinite resurrection in the game, how much blood would the natives have to shed to annihilate the monsters? Without this rule, if the event fails, the player will only make more or less. The game has always given a lot, and players naturally don't pay enough attention to it. They always think that even if the activity fails and they don't make enough money, then I can just work for another ten days and a half. But with this rule, failure of the event is a bomb that may explode at any time! There would be no way Konoha would relax its investment in gaming activities in order to hold the Chuunin Exams!

It's a bit interesting, but the main character should be invisible. After all, this is a group portrait, behind the scenes. The biggest joy of this book is the sparks of collisions between characters from multiple worlds. As for how the main character becomes stronger, conspiracy, conspiracy, and infighting, these are completely irrelevant things. It is best not to have such a shitty idea that the main character wears a vest and mingles with a certain team. The main point of the main character sneaking into the indigenous team, no one will praise you if you write it well, and you will almost get picked on if you write it.

First of all, let me state that the book is written by the author. As a reader, I am not asking the author to customize it for me, but to provide opinions and only express personal preferences. (Armor stacking completed) I saw some other readers speaking in the comment area like me, thinking that the protagonist should have less roles and not frequently intervene in the direction of events, and the author also responded. Then this suggestion should allow for continued communication. In the latest update, the protagonist will be attacked by Danzo, and the subsequent plot seems to evolve into: the protagonist issues a mission to all ninja players targeting Konoha (of course this has not happened yet). I personally would not like it if the above-mentioned plot happens. First of all, the plot I personally hope to see is: the protagonist, as the official planner of the game, is an independent character. He should play all the roles in planning the game and promoting the development of the game, and the player's plot (although it is arranged by the author) should also happen naturally (at least on the surface, naturally), instead of the protagonist directly intervening, which is very biased. Secondly, if a plot happens for all players against Konoha, what is the significance of this plot? Does he have anything to do with the maintenance of the game? Does he have anything to do with the main plot of your novel, cleaning up the world from pollution? The only purpose I see is: to make the protagonist look awesome. I really don't understand why there is a plot where the protagonist is pretending to be a member of the player team and is being slapped in the face. In the comments section before, there were voices saying "behind the scenes, don't have plots where the protagonist pretends to be a member of the player team to show off". Isn't it the same as "the protagonist appears in reality and is attacked, and then instructs the player to fight back against real characters"? Why do readers like me have such a big reaction when the protagonist appears and does something? Because I didn't take on the role of the protagonist, I just wanted to see the plot change naturally after each original character gained different powers, and they also changed their destiny. Instead of the protagonist pretending to be a slap in the face. I reiterate: I only stated my personal preferences and did not instruct the author to write a book. Writing a book is a private matter, and we are not crowdfunding a novel.

There can be no death when cleaning up pollution sources, but how can we win in front of pollution sources? I just want to ask, if there is no death, isn't the source of pollution just a piglet?

The writing by the author of Unhokage is very lacking, and many of the settings are inconsistent with the original work. In the original work, the Senju clan was disbanded by Tobirama himself, but Tobirama actually asked where the Senju clan was? I don't know how someone dares to use the conspiracy theory version of Naruto with so many IQ loopholes.

It's surprisingly interesting. Ninjutsu is easy to talk about, but I can't figure out how the currency of the ninja world can be exchanged for its origin.

What I want to see is a river of blood, a change in destiny, breaking of shackles, and the process of the original characters breaking free from their fate step by step. But what you wrote is about the interaction between the protagonist and the white-haired lolita. It is about the protagonist's daily life every few chapters, which does not promote the plot at all, okay?

The level of force is low, the god of the world uses noble robes? Not only is there a dynamic world on the robe, humans are plowing fields, the sun, the moon and stars, but there are also countless living beings, not just humans, who are the source of pollution in bloody battles. The imagination and style can be bigger, and it can also be used to ambush and arouse the emotions of the bloody battlers.

The character design of One Piece is really bad. Sengoku doesn't have such a good impression of the Celestial Dragons. The Sengoku in this book is simply the most loyal bastard of the Celestial Dragons. Sengoku just heard that the World Government has no good opinion of the Celestial Dragons. Garp calls the Celestial Dragons trash every day. Just because of Sengoku's bastard character in this book, one of these two would have died long ago.

Banknotes are made of wool. What can you do. The agency responsible for printing money is simply invincible, right? Directly print a ∞ amount of money to recharge and buy out all the things you put on the shelves, and you will also get the materials owed to the money printing agency. 😃😃😃😃😃😃

If the result of this test is to lift it high and put it down gently, then I may have to abandon the article. If I don't kill someone, there will be a steady stream of tests. If I are the protagonist, I must give a satisfactory answer within a limited time, otherwise all people affiliated with the Leaf Village will be banned from the game, and the needle will be published in reality. For the mission of Konoha until Konoha no longer exists, don't think Uzumaki Naruto is very important. Since there is world consciousness, without an Uzumaki Naruto, he can immediately give birth to another savior. Since the top management of Konoha is so stupid, then they must pay the price for their stupidity.

Just play the game and play the game well, this is the beginning of spoilers of the plot again, 😥

Shouldn't this kind of group portrait behind the scenes focus on the growth of players, the conflicts between players and "NPCs", and the conflicts between players? Isn't the protagonist just a tool to promote the plot? As a result, in every short plot, the protagonist has to brush up his sense of presence, and there is always a feeling like a lump in the throat. Each chapter must show how the protagonist secretly steals players' reward points. The author doesn't think this is cool, right?

It's almost done, it's just like falling in your eyes, there are all kinds of money scams, but you're not that bad💰. I want to see how the natives become more powerful and interact with each other, but I don't want to see how the protagonist deceives and deceives them💰.

The author's current story development route is: The protagonist arrives in a world → the protagonist pretends to be cool → the natives accept the game in shock → it ends abruptly. What about the plot of this world later? What about the original plot that fan fiction should have? Obviously because the author has not yet figured out the positioning of this book. This book has more than 500,000 words. It is not yet clear whether it is a game article or a business article. Although the title is a game article, the writing style of this article is obviously a business article. The focus of this story is long overdue. If we call it a game novel, the plot of this book is all about the protagonist showing off to the players, so it is not qualified as a game novel. The protagonist of the game article should be the leader of a force, and in the eyes of the players, he is an important NPC of their side. This article sells power equally, and players don't feel like they are playing a game. It is obviously a standard business article. If you want to write a business novel, you should honestly write the plot of a world and the story of the development of the indigenous characters. But you are still lingering on the game novel, which makes it nondescript now. My evaluation is to continue writing according to the business novel, reduce the role of the protagonist, and let the character come to the stage to develop the story on his own. Speaking of reducing the role of the protagonist, readers have said before that it is best for the protagonist to hide behind the scenes, but the author did not listen at all, and the protagonist is still pretending to be awesome. At first, it was acceptable to act cool in front of the whole world, but later on, he went to sell it to individual characters with a shameless face. The author wouldn't find this kind of plot of losing status very satisfying, right? There is also a world fusion plot that is said to be planned. There can be one, but it can only be an interlude, a small interlude. After players participate in the "Player League" and receive their prizes, they still have to come back to live their own lives and continue the story of this world. Anyway, if I keep doing this to others, it will be difficult for me to continue pursuing it. It's not because "Why hasn't your world ended yet?" But because a world always ends in a hurry and the plot is not developed. I came to see the fanfic. Of course, I still want to see the regrets of the original plot being made up for, rather than the original characters playing a legendary web game without a plan.

The problem with the protagonist's setting is serious. He has no strength at all and consumes achievement points. Without reward points, he is just a mortal Even if the player does not have reward points, he is still a ninja or a ninja. He has extraordinary power, and players can use the reward points to strengthen themselves (blood inheritance, all-round physical improvement). They can also exchange for blood, and the reward points can be converted into permanent power Why doesn't the protagonist use it? Why don't you improve yourself? Why not improve your self-power? Orochimaru sold the entire Sound Ninja Village for only 50,000 reward points. It cost 50,000 reward points for the protagonist to withstand an attack from Danzo. With these 50,000 reward points, he can increase his permanent extraordinary power. It is not a problem to crush Danzo to death, and he has his own extraordinary power permanently But The protagonist has to be a mortal, and use achievement points as consumables for one-time attack and defense To use an appropriate metaphor, the protagonist can spend five million to buy a Ferrari sports car that will belong to him forever, but the protagonist does not buy it and spends five million to rent a Ferrari sports car for a day to drive.

It feels very inconsistent to see the conflict between the Hyuga clan and the branch family imagined by the author. Neji's father died for the head of the family and the family. Except for the head of the family and Hinata, no one dares to show Neji's face. But because of Neci's father, Hinata Hizatsu has always been apologetic to Neci. It is also for the same reason that Neci has never given Hinata a good attitude. Which clan is the clan in the author's article? Dare you give Neji strength? Neji's bloodline is nobler than that of the clan in the article who doesn't know where he came from. Hinata has to call him brother. Does anyone understand the value of the family head's nephew?

In fact, I think the setting of soul potential level is a bit awkward. Isn't the protagonist's game under the banner of "gaining power to change destiny", but there is a "talent" like "soul potential" that is linked to destiny. The most important thing is that the protagonist, as an official, actually directly gives guidance and care to such people, such as Nami and Weasel. This is too deliberate. Do they, including other players, really "change their destiny"? As said in the comment area, it is best for the protagonist to be "hidden", which does not mean that there is no role. Like in recent chapters, as an NPC mechanism, it is possible to refresh and buy props in various real worlds. It exists as an official mechanism of the game, but it is not good to pay special attention to certain characters if you have a personal tendency.

If there were no scenes between the protagonist and the idiot's will to the world, it might be better to just write the game "Adventure to the Ninja World"

It's infinite resurrection again. To be honest, a group of elementary school students with infinite resurrection can open up the whole world.

Every time the author writes about game settings, especially occupations and skills, it's very difficult for him. It's like he's been bitten by a poison called DNF. He just can't forget it. Even something original has a strong smell of DNF. I have said before that regarding professional skills and other things, I should try my best to find characters in popular works that fit the role. On the surface, the author listened, but in fact, he did not. The author is quite active in the comment area. When he is criticized, he will go up and cry, saying that he is wrong, but in fact he will not change it at all.

It's not grand enough and feels like a small fuss.

The power system is not integrated, the character interaction is low, and the characterization is unimpressive.

It's simply outrageous. Hawkeye is equivalent to a soldier in the world of wind and cloud.

The author's conclusion is here. To put it simply: The first thing is that he didn't make a good outline of the whole book after opening the book The second thing is that the writing is not strong enough. Each family has its own world in the future, and there are more variables. It is difficult to write with your heart in mind I wish the author will be in the top 800 monthly votes list.

Speed ​​up and refine!

When I read Chapter 207, I felt like there was something wrong with everything. Anyway, I felt unhappy no matter how I read it.

I haven't seen an update for several days, kid. Isn't this too much of a risk to the red-haired guy? When most people are in their teens or twenties, you just give them the entire awakening? Why does he use this one-time awakening skill? He has neither strength nor liver.

After reading a few pictures, my impression is that I have to step on them. TMD Poisonous Milk Powder Mage's skills of more than ten levels can be used as forbidden arts in Naruto, and MD's fantasy ghost swords, swordsmanship, etc. Are awesome 🙂 But the problem is that in One Piece There is already a replacement for this thing. Isn't Haki similar to sword intention, which is the manifestation of will. There is also sword soul, which I am too lazy to complain about. You have to know that Zangang is only available after the sword soul awakens. In One Piece, a swordsman can do it. Is this still third level?