Heavens, Starting from Martial Arts

Author, you should not be suitable for writing this type of novel. You can't grasp the rhythm well, and there is nothing interesting. For a plot with a ten-year-old protagonist, you should speed up and jump into the plot after writing ten chapters at most. As a result, you have written 50 chapters and the protagonist is still ten years old. All 50 chapters are your original plot, and the important characters in the original novel basically do not appear. To be honest, your original plot is not good. , I really don't understand what the ten-year-old protagonist is worth writing about. He can't fight at the moment, the heroine is only ten years old and can't push forward. The protagonist is a cultivator and has no training. There's nothing interesting about the plot. And judging from your current progress, you can't enter the plot in 100 pictures. And you are Zhutianwen. You can't enter the plot in dozens of pictures and you dare to write Zhutianwen.

Is there an Immortal Lord Luo Wuji?

Author, can you write a 180-year-old "Emperor"?

I had guessed from the first update that this book was going to the palace, so I kept it, and now it has indeed entered the palace.

You haven't put it on the shelves yet, and the updates are so slow. What's the point?

The author is Qingtan, the character card is so ugly.

Oh my god, this is such a big problem with the protagonist's age, so many people in the book review section didn't notice it? A group of people are still discussing who the heroine is. The protagonist and Lin Langtian are of the same generation. The protagonist is nine years old at the beginning of the chapter, and Lin Langtian is only a ten-year-old kid at the beginning. Lin Langtian is at least ten years older than Lin Dong. There are different opinions on the Wu Dong Qiankun post forum about how much older she is. The youngest is ten years old, and Aya Qingzhu is two years older than Dongzi. If the age of the protagonist is set, then he will be ten or nine years older than Lin Dong. In this case, it will only be ten years before we can see Dongzi and Wudong's popular female characters, Aya Qingzhu and Ying Huanhuan. And the most important thing is Wudong Qiankun. It's Dou Po. The martial arts protagonist group's training speed is very fast. Dongzi, Lin Yan, Aya Qingzhu, Qingtan, Ying Huanhuan, these people are all in their early twenties. Putting Dou Po next door is equivalent to Dou Sheng in his early twenties. Dong Zi is in the ancestral realm at the age of twenty-seven. Putting Dou Po next door is equivalent to Dou Po. The protagonist is the twenty-seven-year-old Dou Emperor (when Xiao Yanzi was twenty-seven, he was only a five- or six-star Dou Zun and went to the ancient tribe to participate in Xun'er's coming-of-age ceremony). The protagonist is now the same age as Lin Langtian, much older than Lin Dong. When you meet the ten-year-old Lin Dong in your twenties, how should you set your realm? For example, in the ancient tomb of Nirvana where Lin Dong and Ling Qingzhu met for the first time, Lin Dong would be seventeen years old at the Yuan Dan realm, and Ling Qingzhu would be nineteen years old and almost at the creation realm. If the protagonist came closer, the twenty-seven-year-old protagonist, Fang Ling Qingzhu, was already a half-ancestor, and Fang Dongzi was already at the age of the ancestral realm. What realm should the protagonist be in? If the protagonist's cultivation speed is set to be equal to that of the protagonist group in the original Wu Dong, then the rest of it will be too brainless. If you practice at a normal speed, it will be too toxic later on. Even the cultivation speed of the protagonist group in the original work is not as good as that of the protagonist group in the original work. Then why should readers read the fanfic? It is better to read the original work.

Who are the heroines? Don't give them away

Who is the heroine of the author's book? Or say no?

Overall, it looked pretty good, but the plot progressed too slowly. When I saw the later chapters, I thought it was a separate Wudong fanfic instead of Zhu Tianwen. If the plot is this slow, you can update three or four chapters a day, but now it's one chapter a day,,,

There has been no update for three days. Is this a eunuch?

Well, I haven't read Wu Dong until the end of the book. It was basically cut in the middle.