There's Something Wrong with This Big Witch's Style of Painting!

Looking at this introduction, you actually want to see how the ancients tore apart Gundam with their hands, right?

The extraordinary and barbaric chariot crossbow can only shoot a few hundred meters and then kill indiscriminately. It is not as good as the eight-oxen crossbow of the Song Dynasty that has a range of more than 1,500 meters without extraordinary power.

This book has great potential, but it's a pity that the author is not a mechanical person. It is recommended that the author read Introduction to Machinery and the History of Machinery Development before writing. As a robotic dog? ! Do you have any understanding of gait balance and create a long article? There is also a price to pay for the protagonist's superpowers, but you don't need to pay for the superpowers of a chauffeur, as the car will overturn.

This is written about Chi You! Jiang You is probably Chi You

Looking at your introduction, as a descendant of Yan and Huang, I guess you will write the two ancestors as villains. In fact, just like some people who grew up under the red flag whitewashed the American and Japanese emperors, they whitewashed the Kuomintang old Chiang Kai-shek...

It feels like this wilderness doesn't have that barbaric feel. You killed a Witch King with a lot of crossbow arrows. I don't understand why you didn't poison the crossbow arrows. It's weird that the witches can't use poison And divination and sacrifices were very important in that period. There were witches who controlled wild beasts. What about the poisonous insects? Considering the mythological background, the hunting attire of the tribesmen when hunting (that is, the oil paint on the face) and the tattoos on the body, these can all be added with extraordinary elements, and it feels a little less barbaric.

Let the ancients see Gundam. Hand-poke Gundam

Good guy, if you calculate it like this, Chi You's eighty-one brothers with bronze heads and iron arms equals eighty-one Gundams, right?😁

The specific number of people in the tribe, whether they are farming or hunting, and there is no explanation about the tribe's military establishment and the number of troops, which is too trivial). Is it too hasty to build a city with just a few thousand people?

It is recommended to add some data to the description of the weapon, such as length, width and height, or the same height as so-and-so, or how heavy it is. Otherwise, just relying on imagination would be too unreal, and the weapons written would give people a very thin feeling. Also, the measurement system before the Qin Dynasty was different. Southerners and northerners have different heights due to their environment, and the sizes of things they use are also different. For example, the bowls used by northerners and southerners to eat are larger. The bowls in the north are larger than those in the south.

Don't you think the system in the article is very abrupt? I propose one, why don't you refer to it Witch disciple: Apprentice, a beginner on the "Witch" path, who only has a superficial knowledge of "Witch" Wizard: Teacher, an instructor on the "Witch" path, who already has a detailed understanding of "Witch" Witch sacrifice: Sacrifice, explorer of the "Witch" path, their long qualifications and rich experience have given them a deep understanding of "Witch", and some Witch priests are the agents of ancient gods. Witch King: The king is a researcher of the "Witch" path. He is the master of a certain aspect of "Witch". His understanding of all aspects of "Witch" may not be as good as that of the Witch Sacrifice, but he has his own unique insights into one aspect of "Witch". In this On the one hand, it is already far ahead (In this system, the Witch Sacrifice and the Witch King are on an equal footing. The Witch Sacrifice develops in all aspects, while the Witch King understands it in some respects, and it generally means that "important matters of the country lie in sacrifice and military affairs")

The pace should be steady and not too fast, as it can easily cause the ball to be pulled. The protagonist must first formulate the tribal system, military system, and social system before becoming stronger. Otherwise, as the population increases, interest groups will easily cause trouble. This is how the Jiuli tribe failed this

Now that tribal writing has been established, we should count the specific population, compile households to equalize the people, build the internal affairs system, send out one soldier for every five households, improve the military system, reward soldiers' wages, and encourage the dedication of soldiersspirit

Aren't the Qiang people descendants of the Yellow Emperor?

When did you start riding a panda😍

A common man is not guilty, but he is guilty of his crimes. Aren't others jealous?

I feel like I don't need to read the last few chapters and I don't want to follow them.

Come on

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