Transform Ordinary Beasts into Monsters, the First Person to Control Beasts

To be honest, I feel that the setting is a bit unclear. Why are there so many powerful people in the village instead of in the city? In the village of Qingye Cliff, you can basically see silver-level, gold-level, and Xuanyu-level people who are called masters There are even gold-level experts in the top three levels in the country. , And you can easily find beast-controllers with golden potential nearby. The gold level, which can participate in national-level competitions and is held for two years at a time, should be that strong level Although it does not mean that it is impossible for masters to live in seclusion in villages, it is just that Qingye Cliff can live in seclusion with so many masters. , And there are many potential beast masters nearby, so there should be something special about him, but to be honest, there is not much introduction to Qingye Cliff in the book. I only know that the beast masters in Qingye Cliff are very strong, and the identity certificate of Qingye Cliff can make people in the city give them face And it always feels like half a year jump, and then upgrade to a level in half a year. This kind of time jump makes people feel very boring, especially skipping half a year, but the only growth is that the level has been upgraded. It jumps three times for half a year in more than ten chapters, which makes people feel that there is no meaningful plot. The protagonist formulates a training plan, and then Half a year passed. The protagonist's brother wanted to recover the mantis. Then half a year passed and the recovery was successful. Then it was another half year. To be honest, I feel that the process of the protagonist training Fairy Jie Yu, or the protagonist's efforts to help the brothers recover the mantis, could be written. Currently, the only thing that can be seen is, start. The beginning and end, but the process is completely omitted Also, two years for a competition is really a bit too long, unless there is only one competition venue, and only two people can compete at a time, and it is very rare for a gold-level beast master to read this book. Even though they have strong fighting power, many of these powerful people will participate in this kind of competition. It takes half a year to two years to participate in this kind of competition. However, in this world, there are ferocious beasts that attack villages and towns. In this world view, so many strong people need to spend a long time to participate in the competition every ten years. , I feel that it will have a great impact on the security of cities and villages To sum up, I feel that the author's concept of time is a bit unclear. It is half a year or even two years, and it is once every ten years. As a result, the plot says it is as simple as taking an exam every week.

Author, I am moving your novel to another platform, but my readers are holding a knife and complaining that I am too slow to update. I advise you to take care of yourself and don't update quickly. You don't want my readers to know that you are not good at it, right? 🤓

Various settings are made out of thin air, and there is no basic framework. The settings are not just one or two. The previous setting has not been accepted, and the next one is here! Writing should be like a liar, letting people fall into the trap he describes. It would be much easier if the liar was on the same level as the author.

Please collect and read it, friends.

Wang Zhe

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Is the level of the beast master the highest level? Why do you feel that there is no higher level appearance?

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The writing is too complicated, and I can't understand it even on the first page of the first chapter, with a bunch of names stacked up on top of each other. It's obviously a good book, but it still makes mistakes that shouldn't be made in online articles, making it more difficult for readers to read. I'm speechless.