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Personal thoughts on emotional dramas
I don't think it's necessary to jump into the emotional drama so quickly and write more than a hundred chapters before writing about the emotional aspect. And now many football novels use the same routine to write emotional scenes. You shoot a commercial with a certain female star or a certain model, get to know each other, exchange contact information, and then become lovers in less than a month. Or maybe I met a female celebrity somewhere and exchanged contact information on the first meeting. It really made me aesthetically tired. I didn't even need to read the rest of the story to know how the plot would develop. Moreover, the author is still looking for a career as a female model. I feel that in this career, choosing a spouse is either for money or for one's own commercial exposure. They are all purposeful Look at Mero and his lovers. They are all very low-key. There is basically no news at ordinary times and they rarely appear in the camera. If you find a model girlfriend, then she shouldn't hype her up every day to increase her popularity. Then this is not an entertainment article. Sports articles cannot be written like this.
Come on
Come on
The offensive ability cannot be based on that of Tottenham Bell? Able to burst, shoot and run, Arnold is a perfect pro max➕, and his defense is following someone else's template.
No progress seen. The character of the protagonist is basically the same as the previous book. He is very popular, liked by the elderly, has a high golf quotient, and criminals do not take revenge overnight, etc. I thought I hadn't finished the previous book yet, so I rushed through time travel again. In the previous book, I relied on defense in the early stage, expanded my organizational and offensive capabilities in the later stage, and became all-round. The overall line is pretty good. It's just that when the protagonist's defense was blown up by various media, the main defensive value was always 88-89, not even 90. After watching it for a long time, I felt that the positive feedback off the court was out of touch, a bit boring, and I gave up the book in the middle. This book is about full-backs. I thought that I can always focus on the advantageous items first, and then do all the bells and whistles. The results worsened. The defense is more than 60-70, dribbling and passing is only 70-80, running and shooting... It is more annoying than the previous book. Not to mention more than 60 shots, I still have the nerve to ask for permission to shoot 😒 The current book is even more unpalatable than the previous one. I don't know what readers think.
The protagonist gives me the feeling that Li Ang has put a layer of skin on him, his character has not changed much, the plot has developed, and he is the defensive tool of the previous book. He does not occupy the ball and is popular with his teammates. What about the new story that was agreed upon?
The defender cannot be the king of the ball, so he bids farewell
From Li Ang to Li Rui, some thoughts on the two books
The author prefers defense. Liang's upgrade path is actually relatively clear. He serves as a defensive midfielder, engineer, sweeper, defense, position selection, etc. In the midfielder position. He will not pass halftime and is a defensive midfielder at the 6th position. Real Madrid's later Casemiro actually filled this position. Then he began to improve his organizational skills, gradually moving closer to Xavi Alonso and Toni Kroos, and became competent in the organizational work of the 4th position. But Real Madrid did not give Li Ang a chance to move forward. Going to Chelsea, Li Ang continued to upgrade, became qualified for the No. 8 Position, and truly became an all-round b2b midfielder. At this time, Li Ang is already better than them compared to the three midfielders in the ceremony and their respective positions. The defense is better than Casemiro, and the organization, delivery and vision are better than Cross, and Li Ang's speed and dribbling breakthrough are even more incomparable to Cross. On the offensive end, he is more than Modric, purely on the offensive end, and better than De Bruyne at his peak. At this time, with comprehensive ability, he can play at the 10th position or as a free agent in the frontcourt. Li Rui started as a full-back, then became a winger, and then gained the ability to organize and organize. . Isn't this the template of a winger that perfectly covers the front and backcourts under the 4231 system? He can attack from the winger's position and cover the backcourt from the back. His left and right feet are completely balanced and he can play on both sides. Under the training system of modern European youth training, whether it is Li Ang or Li Rui, they will be the most perfect template after Dacheng, capable of various playing systems. Some people classify current football into European power type, European technical flow (European Latin flow), and Latin technical flow. Li Ang and Li Rui are the most perfect players under the European power model. But the two books actually have the same routine. Li Ang and Li Rui are the best parts produced by the existing industrial assembly lines. But this will lead to aesthetic fatigue. When I read this book, it felt bland and boring. . It doesn't mean that you have to follow the Latin American technology flow. Even the European Latin school, such as integrating Iniesta and Xavi, may not be as perfectly adaptable to all systems as Li Ang, but it is more beautiful and is not the same routine. I hope there will be some changes in the next book, not so bland.
Really, if you want a eunuch, be a eunuch. Don't be half-dead. Don't be disgusted when you haven't subscribed to many chapters yet.
After reading the last book and reading this book again, I can't imagine that this kind of book was written by you.
I followed him after seeing that it was the author of Balotelli's book. I felt that this one was the same as the previous one, lacking in excitement! I always feel like it's a waste to throw away the food! The author's writing is not bad, but it is too bland and lacks passion! It doesn't feel like a follow-up read. Another point is, if you have hooks, use them well. Don't overwhelm the protagonist like Balotelli's book. Think about the performance of 18-year-old Mbappe and Ronaldo. I don't think it's awkward for the protagonist to be super giant, because he has a problem (say it three times)! ! ! If you still grow at the same rate as ordinary superstars, then I think you might as well stop cheating and write about a talented football genius who is more acceptable!
I subscribed to this book at the beginning, but after subscribing for a few chapters, I found that there were a lot of "so, but, therefore, right..." In each chapter. Isn't this typical AI generation? Suddenly I no longer have the desire to subscribe.
A 19-year-old genius? The 19-year-old Mbappe has already won the World Cup, the 17-year-old Bellingham has already moved to Dortmund for 25 million euros, and Haaland has already turned into a scoring machine at the age of 19! I really don't know if the authors who write books nowadays are out of touch with reality or if we Chinese are accustomed to thinking that all children are children under the age of 20. Some authors even wrote that the protagonist is a 23-year-old genius. It's really weird! The superstars who are famous now are not substitutes or even starting in the first team of the five major leagues when they are 16-17 years old. We all know that football is about youth, and you must become famous as early as possible! A few days ago, Kroos announced his retirement after playing in the European Cup. He is only 34 years old and is still a midfielder!
This author doesn't seem to like communicating with readers and often deceives them. No wonder they don't dare to form a group, probably for fear of being scolded to death. But in fact, your writing is quite good, but your operation is disgusting and you never explain it. If you don't want to write, then don't write. Don't let the eunuchs cheat me out of my money later.
For the next book, just reincarnate and start writing about foreigners. I don't want to see Chinese people becoming foreign nationals, but it's very awkward that you don't have a national team in this book.
Is there a fantasy plot in this book where you are still a Japanese devil, not being called up by the national team, and then still being an endorsement for Kaka in China? Based on the national conditions of our country, I guess no boss in the country would dare to use him. He has a bad reputation, but he still wants to be an endorsement, but there may be force majeure factors.
I hope one person won't do all the work of twelve people this time.
This one doesn't work well, it's boring.
The last book has been fully ordered and read. Looking at this book again, it's really average enough. The character of the protagonist is a carbon copy of the previous book. It's uninteresting, boring, and uninteresting. I made a suggestion to the author many chapters ago, saying that when writing the game, we can add more commentator perspectives, which will make it more exciting. The author also responded to my comment. But I patiently kept reading, and I never saw the author's changes. There were not even a few "" in one game. It was all written from a God's perspective, just like writing a running account, with no ups and downs, no turning points, no changes after what was said, and just going its own way. I don't know why I'm updating. I've been on leave all day long, and I can't even update the 5,000-word guarantee every day. When I say "explosive", I mean 4,000 words. Isn't it boring? In my opinion, the eunuch at the end of the previous book was a masterpiece, so I thought this one would just rest on my credit book and enjoy it. The result is written like this. Is it worthy of my full subscription of the previous book and the update of this one? All I can say is that it's just boring to everyone. It's really boring.
Three taboos in sports writing
I read not just 100 sports articles, but probably 50. Any book that talks about experience cards, emotional drama, or the national team will either get low marks or be a flop. If you don't know how to write an emotional scene, don't write it. The author has to add an emotional scene before the 50th chapter, which really brings down the viewing experience. Moreover, the content and routines are very clichéd, so you can just brush it off in one sentence. I would rather you write about a national team and fantasize about it instead of watching emotional drama. You are a reborn person, are you still single from birth? If you think about these things so quickly, don't men in middle age have no desires or desires?
Has the author changed?
The writing is not as good as the previous one. The main character in the previous book was the main character, and his defense was also top-notch. He only started to shoot continuously after reaching the top level, so that he could only shoot occasionally. In this book, the main character didn't even sit down, and he started to practice shooting. He also asked for the right to fire, and he drifted too fast.
It's really disgusting to watch. You're like a rookie wall when you open chapter 13, and you're so damn good at shooting. You can't even go from sixty to seventy, and then you put down defense without practicing and increase your shooting skills to seventy or eighty. What's the use? Does it make it easier to practice if the upper limit is higher? After reading dozens of chapters, I still feel suffocated.
Understanding of explosive updates
Maybe I have been tricked by other authors. I think my understanding of explosive updates is at least 10,000➕. I have followed this book from beginning to end, and now I feel a bit disappointed. The author's update time is uncertain, and he asks for leave to make up for updates. There are also people who say that they will be updated. I haven't seen it yet. A book that is not updated even every day is unstable, and it really loses fans.
Fortunately, I saw that the update speed started to go wrong again, so I gave up immediately, so I cut my losses in time.
This is the update. . . . How about I get some trolls to publish this book directly, and let the author stop thinking about it 🙂🙂 If you can't stand it, give me three chapters in five days
I just want to ask if the protagonist has a labor certificate
Fake corpse😰
Just one dollar
It's a double book again, no wonder I feel like I can't write anymore in the following chapters... To be honest, I think this book is an improvement over Kick the Queen in the waist. The writing, rhythm and character description are all smoother and more sophisticated. The only problem is that there is no breakthrough. After writing this book, it is very likely that it will build on the past. After all, it is a niche field. If there is no previous book, this one will definitely be better. However, under the same reader group, the problem of homogeneity is more prominent. It's definitely a good thing that a new book is starting to address this issue, but I still feel a little pity after reading this one. I had never watched football before. I accidentally read the last book and started to be interested in football. I even agreed to be dragged to Phoenix Mountain by my friends. Is this also a manifestation of the meaning of the work? New readers will be attracted to learn about areas that were previously uninteresting. So I still hope that the author will continue writing, and I wish you good luck in writing and good luck with your new book~
More updates, thank you
It's been almost two months and 12 chapters have been updated? Please don't make me say that famous quote off the field.
7:0 I dare not read the novel, the reality is too embarrassing.
This is the update rate after more than ten days