Dou Po: Stop Trying Harder

In what age are you still playing the role of a loser? Do young people nowadays have such patience? What's more, your writing style is not humorous and interesting.

The talent of a 16-year-old fighter is too ordinary, right?

Are you writing a new book? It's enough to give a brief introduction to the previous ones. Why talk so much? It makes me lose my confidence.

The first is that the book has no outline, so I write whatever comes to my mind. The beginning is useless, a 100,000-word abuse of the main character, the introduction of an overly powerful being, and the plot of trading Burning Jue with Yao Chen. This second creation is quite outrageous now that I think about it, and I don't know how I came up with it in the first place. There are so many mistakes in just a few hundred thousand words. Let me sum up my experience. I am very embarrassed and I am very sorry to everyone.

Little Medical Fairy

What I wrote above is all right, but after you were found from the Dragon Clan, you were so cowardly and offered your golden finger that people could easily get the Tuoshe Ancient Jade from you. And he also guessed that you had to get the ancient jade, and wanted to search for the soul, and also led the dragon clan to the vicinity of Wu Frank. That's not what you wrote. It's just that you easily exposed your golden finger in front of Zi Yan, I admit it. But you wrote it like this.

There is still one chapter to the latest chapter, but it is still withdrawn. It is not about poison, but it is just uncomfortable to watch from the appearance of the dragon clan to the appearance of this little medical fairy. The strong give to the weak, this is alms. The weak makes offerings to the strong, which is begging. You are just like a poor man presenting a feasible galaxy development plan in front of a rich man. Others try to survive in adversity, but what you wrote is that there is no adversity and you create adversity.

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It's too 6. Most of the fan fiction I've been looking for in the new book section these days is about eunuchs.

Finished the book... I cut it without saying a word...

Fighting Saints, if you still show your heart and soul to the protagonist, it would be too cheap. I feel like Lao Long is okay, at least he didn't punish the little medical fairy who interfered with his alchemy. If it were given to other natives, the Little Medical Fairy might be gone long ago. Generally speaking, since I am a native, there is no need to make the same demands as a time traveler. It's just too depressing and too realistic.       ， The main thing is that now the protagonist has no privacy, and there are many things that cannot be done or explained. Here you can use the protagonist's mentality change to make an entry. Is it really the life you want to enter the finals? He began to question his original wishes... After a series of interactions, he came to the conclusion that only by being strong can he truly be able to lie down. After that, he took the initiative to change the content of the transaction and gave up the direct train to the finals. At this time, Lao Long really looked at the protagonist, affirmed the protagonist's idiotic behavior, and said that because of this incident, he would always remember the protagonist, and left after exploding some gold coins.

Protagonist character, AI picture

Emm, shouldn't the poisonous body of the little doctor Xian Ernan be poisonous? Why should it be changed to the fire attribute? The protagonist wants to become a pharmacist and change the Burning Technique. Why is the protagonist set to the ice attribute in the beginning?

Why didn't I update today? I ended up finishing the book? ? ?

Why didn't you choose to collect them all?

What it means is not very clear.

The content of the answer has nothing to do with whether I collected them all or not.

Ziyan ai picture