About Me Turning into a Witch and Doing Daily Tasks

Before it was put on the shelves, the reviews kept saying that it was very watery, and kept writing panel data, and kept repeating it. The plot was also very slow after it was released.

Transformation, mermaid form

Come on, update soon😡😡

I have read more than 300 chapters. It was okay in the beginning, but now I am a little confused. The weirdest thing is that every time I mess up something, I will do "return it to its original owner". It's really funny.

The plot and imagination are very interesting. I feel that the biggest problem of this book is the portrayal of the protagonist. The protagonist's image felt relatively empty in the early stage. The simple image of the king of scrolls cannot enrich the image of the protagonist. After all, it is difficult for most people to imagine themselves as the king of scrolls. I think the author can try to make the protagonist more life-like and interesting.

I've written 10 chapters about such a scene, and I can't imagine how boring it will be later.

The author is too weak. He has more than 300 chapters and is still a second-level wizard apprentice. The previous writing is very good, but it is getting more and more weak. The plot is empty and does not move forward. It will most likely be a bad work.

It's already been 5 chapters. When do you plan to end this interview? 😅

Well, it took six months at the beginning, and then it took about a month (roughly) to level up to level two. It took a little more than half a year to improve my spirit from 5 points to 20 points. Then those people were surprised that the protagonist had a level 2 wizard bloodline (20 points of spirit) just after he entered school half a year ago. Then Chapter 134 says that one year has passed, but the protagonist only has 23.1 Mental power? You know, the protagonist's talent has been improved from B to A. Has the protagonist's speed slowed down?

The writing is very good, unlike similar novels nowadays, which are either mid-range to explosive, or have no brains.

Protagonist

The pace can be sped up a little, and the time progression can be carried out in the order of events-daily/research-events-daily/research. . The current writing method of advancing by day is not suitable for wizard flow/hp. Even Harry Potter, which is more everyday, spans seven years. When Rowling was writing, she would pass by the time when nothing happened. The protagonist of this book has nearly 200,000 words from the beginning to the present, and the time span is one month? According to the current schedule, approximately 10 million words will be written in a span of 7 years. It is better to be more detailed.

Make money and write ten chapters. No one cares about the specific details of the protagonist's play. This is not an acting book. You have written ten chapters of off-topic plots for fifty chapters. Don't deviate from the topic in your daily life.

Is it to get married or to be single? Don't look at it anymore

Advantages: Anti-classic wizard template routine. The heroine, the white wizard, was not snatched into the dark wizard camp on the way to the academy. She did not pretend to be a wizard and use the knight's breathing method to fight with people. Later, she practiced both magic and martial arts, and attracted the "interest" of high-level strong men of the opposite sex before she was even at the grassroots stage. Disadvantages: The plot and writing are too pale, and the brainless system is a plus. Many things written are too idealistic. In this world that believes in personal strength, regardless of men or women, when people are too beautiful and unable to protect themselves, they are often forced to make choices. However, the author always writes everyone, especially men, as very rational and without much passion, which is very unrealistic. The fighting plot is a mess, but the protagonist always appears at the end and performs a little trick to turn the tide, and everyone exclaims: It's so beautiful. Some plots can be guessed by skipping a chapter or two. There is also this kind of plot about understanding the law. It might have been popular in the early 2000s (coiling dragon suddenly comes to mind), but it is a bit old now. The author may want to create a strong female character who is independent and single and relies entirely on herself (not sure if she is a female author), but with a grassroots background in wizard novels, it is difficult to achieve this. It is better to focus on anti-routine, and go against the traditional wizard novel, even if it is written as a marriage change novel (joining the witch sect?), It can also attract more readers. The current state can only be used to pass the time, and the food is tasteless.

Even though I don't want the photo to be white😭😭

It's been a month. . Is this a niche field? Read one book after another 😭😭

I am more assertive about the main plot line and will not change it easily. But recently, regarding the plot branch, I will try my best to optimize the follow-up rhythm and not take over the main role. Thank you for your suggestions (refill)

This book gives me a feeling like the super-dimensional wizard with thousands of chapters. I suggest the author not to study too much. That book was really easy to read and you couldn't finish it halfway through. There were really too many daily chapters. I remember it took more than 2,000 chapters to change from apprentice to wizard.

I find that today's authors can't write novels without a system.

It's not that you can't write entertainment plots, but you shouldn't have too many! You currently write a quarter of all entertainment plots under the banner of wizarding novels, isn't it necessary?

Witch

It is recommended to change the name. I started my entertainment journey after becoming a witch.

How should I put it, writing about wizards and suddenly inserting an entertainment plot in the middle. A very charming heroine, in a world of personal power, when her strength is not enough to protect her beauty, she chooses to go to the opera house to interview the heroine to obtain resources, well... Not good review The biggest characteristics of wizard novels are the pursuit of strength, the paranoia for knowledge, and the structure of the world view. The previous chapters have been written quite well. I will follow up on the recent chapters, hoping that they will not go astray.

The leave request said 🙂

It's been half a year, are you sure you're not a eunuch?

Do you dare to suddenly update a chapter and scare me?😒😒

Brother, can you be resurrected? It's rare to write so beautifully.

It's not too much to ask for more refinement

The author's comfort zone is in daily life, and I am very comfortable reading it. However, there is a doomsday main line that particularly emphasizes the pace, which makes the pace become faster and faster. The latter part is too difficult to finish and is probably unfinished. I hope the author can write back to daily life in the next one.