Douluo: Martial Soul Geng Gui, Soul Palace Protector

When will the author write Groudon? Groudon's solar domain matches well with the angel family. And when Qian Renxue flew into the sky and laughed at the protagonist's Groudon spirit that couldn't fly, it felt pretty good to use the Cliff Sword. Original Groudon also felt great fighting Poseidon Tang San in the sea. He pinned Tang San down in the sea and beat him violently, then said that I also know a Poseidon, but not as hard-hitting as you (the Poseidon specifically refers to Kyogre).

Originally the front line was pretty good, Twin Martial Spirits also had the advantage of knowing the plot well, with a little bit of planning, a little bit of growth, the anticipation was overwhelming! As a result, the style of the painting changed and a system suddenly appeared... And it suddenly felt boring. It's not that the system is bad, it's just that it's boring if the system is too high. Moreover, the title and introduction of your book do not say that there is a system. The contrast is too great. In addition, there is a system that definitely makes it easy to pass the level, which instantly dissipates most of the sense of expectation. Even the 100,000-year-old soul bone mentioned earlier by the protagonist, and Xiao Wu's soul ring... Their value has plummeted, regardless of whether they have it or not. After all, the system is already the biggest plug-in. If there is a system, nothing will be difficult, and readers will be sure that the protagonist will succeed 100%, without that vague sense of expectation... Sigh.

Dou Po came and Douluo opened a branch of the Soul Palace.

It feels like there are too many things added. Just add a Geng Gui martial spirit and a Poke Ball martial spirit. Gengar is poisonous and ghost type. The ghost is immune to physical attacks, which is equivalent to being immune to all Tang San's hidden weapons. If you develop poison attributes. You can take Dugu Bo as your teacher and find a way to take Bloody Swan Kiss to turn your body into a poisonous body. In the future, you can become stronger by taking poison. Eating Dugu Bo's poison, then eating Dugu Yan's poison, and then eating Tang San's poison in turn poisoned Tang San. This kind of plot should be very interesting. There is also an elf ball martial spirit, which can subdue spirit beasts and add a life soul ring to the elf ball. Use the life ball to collect the bodies of the two dragon kings of ice and fire, and slowly resurrect the two dragon kings in the life ball to form an army of soul beasts and become beast gods. In the future, we will create a system similar to Pokémon, allowing spirit beasts to team up with their own spirit masters to fight together. And using the spirit ball spirit and Geng Gui spirit to perform spirit fusion skills can make Geng Gui spirit become a giant. If you write it like this, half a million words will definitely be enough, and it will better integrate the elements of Pokémon and Douluo. Author, your writing is very good, and I keep reading it. But it seems that the highlight of Pokémon is not written out.

You didn't change Chapter 55 and just pushed it down. No matter what your purpose was when you wrote it, no one will see you pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger.

Food and grass can be read, the protagonist has not lost his IQ, has not stepped into any traps, and the meat-eaters are not eunuchs.

Wang Po sells melons and boasts about herself.

I hope the writing is reasonable. Nowadays, many Douluo texts can be written about existences similar to Daluo Jinxian. Don't even look at Douluo's character. It would be good to raise a being who is more powerful than the God King. I don't know how many years the Dragon God has lived. Still gifted. Only slightly stronger than the God King

Er said that even if Xiao Wu was a rabbit, there would be no need to target her like this. Isn't this too villainous? You might as well just force the sacrifice to you in the early stage.

First of all, I have never been an author, but I want to say, is it difficult to write 100 chapters a day? It's not that I am being unreasonable. After all, I said at the beginning that I have never been an author.

If it's Groudon, it should be more serious and maintain a strong and epic feel or majesty and fierceness. In other words, wouldn't it be good to write otherworldly western fantasy or fantasy?

You are still young, so you might as well bite the bullet and work harder to write 4,000 words. After all, you are writing a book online, but 4,000 words seems a bit effortless, and readers will not feel comfortable reading it. It is better to just write 6,000 words, which is very standard. But since we have already written 6,000 words, why not do another 4,000, directly go up to 10,000, which will not be the same level as before. Since your hand speed is not that bad, it shows that you are working very hard! But it's already 10,000 words. If you don't add 10,000 more and code the meaning of 20,000 words, that would be great! Even when you are lying in bed, you may not be able to think clearly. I already have a code of 20,000, why do I still care about that? It's not that bad at all, right? That's right, listen to me, code 100,000 words today! The man who builds the online book writing pyramid!

I just wrote a Douluo fanfic about Shadow Spirit. The protagonist can build a shadow army. Those who are not interested in reading can click on the avatar to take a look. (Comments can be deleted)

The protagonist's PUA Xiao Wu finally designed to make her sacrifice, which is called love cheating. The route is the early development. Later, you will pretend to join Wuhun Palace, collect Qian Renxue, and then Shui Bing'er, etc. If you have any suggestions, you can give them in this building

Wang Po sells melons and boasts about herself.

Forget it, I can't stop scolding. I bought 4 books in a row last month. Maybe it's because I have a problem with my vision.

Hahahaha, I finally waited until the author cut it off. Come over here and take a look. Click on my avatar to see it. A newly written Douluo fanfic. The protagonist possesses a shadow martial spirit and can build a shadow army.