I Made up the Exercises and My Disciple Became a Demon?

Personally, I don't like to see characters from famous works making cameos in books.

I feel like it would be very funny later on when the brothers, who don't know each other, get into a fight and then call the master for help.

After reading the introduction, if millions of people die at every turn, are there any left alive 🙂

The apprentice has a level of Qi refining, and the protagonist, a foundation-building monk, can refine Qi a hundred times as much as the first level. This is not a scumbag. The apprentice breaks through, and the master follows suit. In the early stage, he becomes a scumbag, but in the later stage, his combat power collapses when he reaches a high level. Is this really fun?

Low EQ: The punctuation and paragraphing are just a mess High EQ: Did the author write the novel on wx?

After traveling through time for a year and reaching the ninth level of Qi training, you still call yourself useless. How can you let those protagonists who are only in their 50s and 60s to build foundations and still say that there is hope for golden elixirs survive?

There is a kind of beauty of ancient flowing water culture

As far as the introduction is concerned, the population is quite large.

It's very creative, so you'll be sure to jump on it.

Is this an imitation of the strongest ancestor?

Is it a hands-on work for a new author? It's too casual. Many of the conversations are interesting, but the construction of the system is too casual Including the setting of the golden finger, it is indeed too simple For example, golden finger is a method without bottlenecks. Why can't it be a method that directly rewards you for evolving to the end after the disciple starts? At least it's a stage, so you can teach him There is also the golden finger halo, which makes it easier to meet the protagonist, and can also be supplemented by the protagonist's luck to create an entry-level method And the fantasy system is better than the immortal system, at least your expressive power is more inclined to the fantasy system The same goes for the magic weapon, use your brain a little, use snacks, don't set it so casually

The creativity is acceptable, the writing is poor, the food is tasteless, and it is a pity to abandon it. The new author deserves support and can be read as a meal.

After reading a few chapters, if nothing else, your writing style, the author, is very strange. The layout of the text is a bit like Gu Long, but it is not a serious style of writing. It is a bit funny in it, and it also has the feeling of a flowing narrative, which is very inconsistent with your layout. Anyway, it's weird

After reading a hundred chapters, the writing style in the first few chapters was quite strange, but later on I don't know if I got used to it and it seemed to become normal. How you feel after reading this... Does it feel like applying formulas to quickly answer questions? The basic formula is: The protagonist finds a new apprentice - the new apprentice wants revenge, so he accepts his head and worships him - the apprentice practices the skills taught by the protagonist into the magic art of cannibalism (all the apprentices who appear are cannibalistic abortions) - the enemy comes to the door to give experience to the chase - Enemies are coming 2. After beating the younger one, the old one is still being killed across levels. - Enemies are coming 3. The one who is coming is too old and cannot be beaten. Please help me, master. - Enemies are coming 4. The master lets the tiger return to the mountain to be a grindstone for his apprentice. - I got bored and found a new apprentice. All plots related to apprentices can basically follow the above process. The apprentices have many enemies. Behind enemy A on the surface, there is enemy B behind the scenes. The protagonist's own special plot is about a ruin related to the Thunder Emperor, and the response in the comments section does not seem to be very good. The scholar who appeared in Chapter 100 did not have his original enemy, but he did not mourn for the disappearance of his innate enemy for a moment. What immediately rushed to the battlefield was: a mortal enemy who had to fight against him due to his different positions, a rebel prince from the dynasty of cultivating immortals. Although there is a reason for formulas to exist, it is a bit boring to apply a formula so many times within 100 chapters of a book. When I saw Scholar, I didn't want to continue reading. Although the formula seems to have changed a bit since Scholar? In addition to answering formula questions, there is another question: Is the training system... Rudimentary? The specific manifestation is: the various realms of Qi Building, Fund Building, Yuanying, Divine Transformation, Void Refining, etc., Actually do not show any corresponding characteristics. It is simply a power level. There is no violation in replacing it with first, second, and third levels. If I have to say it, it seems that you can only fly after you start building foundation? And something that has been mentioned but not shown in the plot at all: teleportation can be enabled in the Void Refining Realm. And aside from the various cross-level kills of the disciples, the enemies later felt that they also had a temporary way to greatly strengthen their personnel. The most common one was to set up an array. Every time they could not beat them, they would form an array and their strength could even increase to a large level, just like the BOSS fixed process entering the second stage. Magic treasures are even more heavyweight. At present, it seems that they should be divided into ordinary spiritual treasures, acquired spiritual treasures, and innate spiritual treasures (yes, the difference between innate and acquired spiritual treasures is only the power level). Here comes the trickiest thing: The magic weapon used by the bandit leader in the middle stage of foundation building in Novice Village at the beginning is a high-grade ordinary spiritual treasure. Later, the leader of the Yun Sect who temporarily made a breakthrough from transforming gods to refining the void (four to five levels of high foundation building) inherited the middle-grade Houtian Lingbao which was described as a "magic sword". I remember there was an elder from the God Transformation or Void Refining Realm. He described that his skills and his low-grade Houtian Lingbao were invincible and powerful, making him one of the best in the same realm. Above, I ran out of energy to complain.

Millions of lives are just numbers, right? No logic at all, nerves.

Is this an imitation of the strongest ancestor in history?

This book was distributed to the wrong place. I want it to be published in Chuangshi. There is a market for this kind of white writing.

It's a cool article, not too poisonous, and it's fun to read 🤭

The 18-year-old new author has failed to write a book for the first time. Everyone understands! Please pursue reading, readers, please don't read books, otherwise you will die easily!

Side door, left way, self-study, ancestor.

As soon as the fourth apprentice was accepted, I immediately stopped reading. It was too casual, too casual, too casual. Apart from some talents, I really didn't like this apprentice. He had no personality charm. I thought that the third apprentice would be the beginning of the apprentice's improvement. The fourth apprentice immediately collapsed. It collapsed a lot. I won't talk about the logic of the writing, the plot, and the world structure. Anyone who can see me at this stage can clearly understand that this apprentice is really a failure.

The first few chapters of Recruiting a Disciple are over, and I want to go directly to the plot behind it. After the apprenticeship is over

There are about 5 characters in this book divided into one line. Whose general is this?

Who knows how many apprentices I have accepted in total? It took a lot of effort to finish watching one apprentice and then another apprentice came, all the time.

I kept repeating it and read it for a long time, but it was worse than a pornographic book!

It's watchable, but far from enough that I need to pay to watch it.

If you don't know the power of yin fire, you can search for phosphorus bombs

It's boring to keep doing matryoshka dolls. There is nothing new after they are put on the shelves.

Without fame, this layout is screening readers. Didn't the editor say that?

Support the author, but I also hope everyone will support my friend's novel. I would like to recommend to you a very silly fantasy novel. This novel is: Returning to the Fairyland, the book is at the starting point. This is a very silly novel. The author specializes in writing silly novels. There are various plot contrasts and funny plots in the novel. The novel is very funny. I hope you can support my good brother. I hope you can support the crowd and the seat. Thank you all fellow Taoists for your support.