Break Through the Heavens with Games

Today I finally discovered why I had a weird feeling while reading the book. The protagonist was too polite to the Koreans (except the two sisters Gu Shen). I am the kind of person who doesn't like Korea and don't watch Korean dramas very much, so it's a bit distasteful to see the protagonist being so nice to those Koreans. This is my question. If I don't like it personally, the author can do whatever he wants.

Why don't you like to take people through time travel? Because I just want to monopolize the opportunity. And do you think those people can hold it? I believe in people's greed. The reason why they don't betray you now is because the benefits are not high enough and the danger is too great.

It's not bad, the main character has an average personality, but it's okay if she's not a virgin. Although I haven't watched many Korean dramas, I can still understand the plot. But I have one thing to complain about. It's a bit awkward to only have Korean dramas. You should add something else, and don't let people join the team so easily. You are the protagonist who is the easiest to join the team I have ever seen.

It can be seen that the author is the kind of person who likes Korean dramas. It's hard for me to imagine that a person with the abilities of the protagonist would be patted on the head by an insignificant person in his own team. (I'm just talking about gold) It is impossible for your team to feel like a family, because the protagonist is the only one. Without the protagonist, this team will not exist. If you want to talk about the two girls, Goo and Shin, it is possible that they could become family members, because the protagonist does treat them as sisters. As for everyone else, they all exist depending on the protagonist. In this case, how could it be possible to be as close as shown in the article. Manager Bai's approach is the normal way of getting along, the superior-subordinate relationship. Author, you obviously forced your love for Korean drama characters into the novel, but you didn't describe the feeling. The protagonist can play the world, he has the confidence. But he cannot and cannot get along with the people in the team without distance. Ability brings status, and status determines distance. Author, you should also be able to tell that the recent data is not very good. I personally think there are two reasons for this. First, almost all of them are Korean dramas Second, the people in the team are not likable. Except for Gu and Shin and Manager Baek, the characters and performances of the others are not outstanding.

The author's mind is too strange. Is he afraid of running out of money? There is a black light virus. Afraid of running out of money? ? , You can't be short of money just by reading a rich memory.

I listened to the audiobook and listened to thirty chapters. They were all names of various Jin xx and Jin xx people. I couldn't tell them apart. I had no memory points. Who was who, who was who, what interaction they had with the protagonist, what the protagonist did. Finally, who was the protagonist? What was the protagonist doing? I couldn't remember it at all. It was like a running account. I can still remember a little bit about the names and plots of the first world that happened. After that, I didn't have any deep impression, just one word. It was confusing. There were too many people and I couldn't distinguish the priority. The names overlapped and were very similar. Whenever I listened to the book and recited Jin xx Jin xx, I felt like I was reciting sutras. I was so broken...

The protagonist cannot have any abilities at all. If he has abilities, they will be confiscated and fused by the system. The co-author turned back and the system ran away. The protagonist is just a waste with no abilities.

. . . . 😅 I can't watch it. I haven't watched Korean dramas and it feels like a mess. There are all kinds of names.

Okay, I understand, there is something wrong with the author's writing rhythm. It feels like a lot of useless things have been written in, not much is useful, and what the audience wants to see has not yet appeared.

In the current situation of multiplayer online play, it seems that the benefits first pass through the hands of the protagonist, and then to other people. Points, stores, including the ability to travel are actually completely controlled by the protagonist The other thing is that the protagonist hangs too much, and it feels like there is a missing transition period in the middle. It goes to black light all at once, and it is a bit difficult to grasp later. I hope the author will continue to work hard, update well, and don't cut it casually.

The group portraits are so confusing. I have never watched any of these Korean movies and TV dramas. I can't tell who is who.

The hang-up is too big, just a few copies, and there are six levels of abilities in Naruto. It's hard to control it later, and the author may not be able to control your writing style. I'm telling you the truth. Wudiliu novels are the most demanding test of writing skills, and few can write them well.

I don't watch Korean movies very much, so I don't have a sense of immersion.

It's okay, it's best for the author to write whatever he wants in his first book. When I start a new book, I will definitely have to hone my writing skills or have a more commercial mindset. But the first book must have the determination to stick to it. Reflect after you finish writing

The protagonist should actually think about how to develop his power. Although the current protagonist is powerful, in the eyes of others, he is just a powerful superpower. Not to mention untouchable, after all, in the era of hot weapons. If you can have a power to support you, if others want to cause trouble, you can let your subordinates take action first. You can't always take action yourself. Otherwise, why would you ask your teammates? The protagonist now has the ability to form a medium-sized force. He has high-level chaebols like Director Bai and subordinates like former black officials. This is completely enough.

There is one thing I want to say. There are a lot of words in each paragraph. It's a bit tiring to read.

Is there Wind Spirit Moon Shadow? After all, it is in the games I have played.

I can only say that there is a reason for rushing into the street.