I Asked You to Listen to Music, and You Became a Witch

I've finished reading it all, not to mention that men and women think alike. There are always contradictions before and after. I always contradict myself after just a few pictures after throwing out the settings. If there are many pictures, it doesn't matter if they are contradictory, but only a few pictures are contradictory. It feels like I have made an outline, and each chapter is written by a different person.

Female channel: I will use tricks and plots to eliminate all competitors Male channel: No, buddy, don't you know what my cultivation is?

No, buddy, it's okay to massacre the city if you have nothing to do. Why are you massacring the people? What does the common people have to do with you? Don't tell me that destiny has anything to do with the common people. Your plot is pure and unnatural. You don't care about the Northern Barbarian royal family. You don't care about the Southern Liang family. You attack the common people. What were you thinking when you wrote this?

The protagonist is written very naively, ignoring the suffering in this building. The protagonist who has not experienced betrayal and lies cannot empathize with it, and the mentality of the protagonist who has experienced growth is not easy to write.

Now that the protagonist has broken through to the divine realm, he still plays conspiracy tactics? - One person can directly kill all the high-ranking officials of the Northern Barbarians and Southern Liang. You have to write this kind of silly war drama, just like playing house Master The horn is like a hydrogen bomb that can be used indefinitely. When other countries don't have nuclear weapons, how about a fight? If you want to write about war, don't write about a protagonist who is so strong. If the protagonist is so strong, writing about this kind of war seems very brainless. The God of War alone can make the Northern Barbarians afraid to go south. What about you, Jiang Jianxian? It's simply unreasonable. You already have hydrogen bombs. You have to let 100,000 soldiers go to war. What a retard! If you are kind and don't control troops, you are retarded in commanding soldiers, right? You can kill whoever you want in your divine realm, and you can take back Liangzhou City alone. If you don't want it, what's the point of letting ordinary soldiers fight against the Northern Barbarians? Is there any reason not to take action? The protagonist is becoming more and more like a villain. In order to show off that he has a strategy, he lets ordinary people fight and die. I really can't stand it.

The new author reports and briefly talks about the basic situation of this book. First of all, this book is absolutely not about marriage. As for whether it is just a hundred... Don't ask, it's just about the relationship between besties, and it will definitely not admit that there is a love factor. So don't worry about this, the point is the plot! Well, that's all I can think of for now, I'll talk about what I think about later.

Create an important female supporting character at the beginning, and then quickly write it to death. Don't do it. I feel that this way of writing is really unacceptable.

The protagonist is like an adult beating a child. She can easily win but has to use her poor IQ to play the dark crawling game.

I haven't read it yet, but I'm already starting to get upset when I see the comment section.

If you have time to teach readers how to read, it is better to improve yourself. Even if you don't improve yourself, you still have to be smart. As an author, you cannot be omnipotent, but you should make use of your strengths and avoid your weaknesses. Don't do things you are not good at. For example, if you are not a cyber strategist, don't write about military affairs. Jump as much as you can. The last dozens of chapters have rubbed readers' IQ. The nine-year compulsory education has slipped through the net. The author must have memorized his thoughts and morals by rote when he was in school, right?

What's the use of writing so many conspiracies? There's no benefit at all except making people look unhappy. It's better to kill them directly and decisively. How can the conspiracies be stronger than the protagonist?

The false gods will destroy the city when they fight. Your soldiers will die when you fight, but his soldiers will also die. Everyone will die. If you don't have soldiers, you can kill people at his house. Anyway, kill a group of people. How many people can be killed. If you protect the people and the false gods sit separately, I will kill them alone. If you gather them together, I will kill the people. How many people can you protect? Why are you so tied up? Are you afraid that he is not afraid anymore?

Don't talk about heroes who serve the country and the people. I'm tired of it. You were born in a brothel, you were called a witch, and you killed the emperor. What else do you need to have a great and upright image? Author, can we kill people honestly, be moody and make love with lilies honestly? These chapters are so dramatic. Why is he suddenly loyal and patriotic?

I feel that the author is not writing about a brothel, but a media company that specializes in praising artists. There are no courtesans who do not sell their bodies in real brothels. The so-called prostitution or not selling their bodies are all propaganda slogans for ordinary customers. There are no big shots or wealthy people who can stand up. The source of women in folk brothels is mostly human trafficking, homeless girls? Yes, there are, but they are all captured, not taken in.

The author's writing about martial arts is quite good, but he really can't write about power and hegemony. The protagonist he writes does not have the mentality of fighting for hegemony, does not have that kind of courage, and does not have that resourcefulness. The author needs to understand game theory or the art of war, look at Mao Gui and Ma Yuan, and at least understand modern history and see how Japan is doing. Who surrendered after being bombed by an American atomic bomb? Understand why the Soviet Union and the United States were fighting for hegemony during the Cold War. There was at most a small conflict. Because of the nuclear bombs, the United States and the Soviet Union did not dare to invade each other's territory or have a head-on conflict and start a war, because both sides were afraid that nuclear bombs would be dropped in a fight. Now the main character's power is the nuclear bomb. How come no one is afraid of it? Is it not a deterrent? How dare the Northern Barbarians not retreat?

What a hearty Akaishi.

In a novel where one's own high-end combat power is bound to be low, except for the protagonist, maybe all the protagonists will be defeated in the end, or there may only be a few left. This is an old-school routine. I don't think it is necessary to read the rest of the novel.

It's a completely female-only article. The author only sees male channels' popularity and higher income than female channels. He makes money by running male channels but refuses to write articles about male channels. Nowadays, there are more and more authors like this, which makes people speechless. If you want to make money, at least understand what the readers of male videos like to watch, right?

Nine-year compulsory education has a long way to go

If you're not a buddy, what's the point of countering when you're already invincible? If you give the princes and nobles the full picture, naturally some people will be happy to welcome Master Wang. 🙂🙂 I am the strongest in this world, and I can do whatever I want. 🙂

In fact, I think the author deliberately gave readers sweet potatoes to eat but not water to drink, or he didn't know how to feel good. Xiao Jiang has never given me a good feeling until now. I don't say that I must read a good article, but I have to give it some ups and downs. It should make people feel good where it should be good, and they should pretend to make people feel uncomfortable before they die. Which counts as four wars so far? The first time in Huashan I really didn't feel any pleasure, and I didn't feel that Xiao Jiang had any coins. The second group battle was almost over, but suddenly the eldest lady came out to steal the limelight and continued to feed me sweet potatoes. The third time I hit the monk Xiaojiang was so angry that the monk over there just killed him. The fourth time was even more disgusting. I thought I could torture this cousin, but in the end he died happily. At the end, Xiao Jiang was disgusted, and so was the emperor. Ah, uh, it was gone. This revenge was nothing. The first few have their own reasons and can be explained in the past, but the latter two father and daughter are nothing. More than 100 chapters are still only half of a revenge novel, right? This enemy's death was so free and easy, it really didn't feel good at all.

I didn't dare to watch it after reading the comments. The plot everyone discussed showed that it was a female channel thinking.

This book made me a little disappointed. I thought the world of martial arts would become more and more fantasy in the future, forget about fantasy, and there is also the struggle for supremacy in the court. The heroine is said to be the heroine, and the other two women have a lot of roles. Moreover, being the emperor is not the heroine, the heroine is just helping others. The only advantage of the heroine is that she has high martial arts, but it is not the best. She is afraid of turning into demons when using her internal power, and she can also be struck by lightning. Lord, these advantages have become too much. Killing depends on mood, no brains, being pushed away by others. In the end, the Sanqing Tianting was brought up. The person named Shen died. There are a lot of things about her behind, making things mysterious. The heroine seems to exist just for her. I didn't read the next few dozen chapters. I looked at the chapter title and saw that there was a heroine with a more powerful identity or something. I was speechless😑

Just read the title of Chapter 382, ​​why did Shen Liuyun pop up again? What on earth is this Shen Liuyun? Why does it look like a quantum state? As death

What is Qidian doing and recommending this book?

I just read the second chapter, and I feel that the third golden chapter is a bit lagging, so I'll give it a try first.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I don't know if the author is deliberately fitting the protagonist's age or if this is the upper limit of his writing ability.

Why are there always inconsistencies? What the protagonist knew in one or a few previous pictures changed directly later.