Mysterious Resurrection: Invasion of Idealism

I always see you saying that killing ordinary people indiscriminately in the early stage, and then becoming the headquarters' dog, seems okay to me. I want to live in the early stage. What's the use of ordinary people? In the later stage, I have the ability to be like Kung Fu, and I don't want to be the headquarters' dog. Maybe the transition in the middle is not perfect. The greater the ability, the greater the responsibility. It should be maintained. Who is right and wrong to kill one person and save ten thousand people? At least give the answer to the headquarters. There will always be someone willing to contribute. No matter how many ordinary people are killed and how many clones can be saved, they will kill as many people as they can. The book review is a little hesitant because of the influence.

It's boring. The protagonist seems to be very strong, but the author is still led by the headquarters in what he writes. All the resources requested in the first part are spent on handling supernatural events for the headquarters. Later, the author doesn't know what the protagonist can get from the headquarters, so he simply asks Wang Xiaoming to give the protagonist some guesses and let the protagonist deal with the enhanced version of the ghost. The main character is not in good condition but he still messes around. If he is not dead, it can only be said that the author forced cheating. You can find suitable puzzles wherever you go shopping.

For now, this book can actually be read, but I am not looking forward to the future content of the book, because I have not seen anything that I find particularly interesting. The content I have written so far is pretty good, but at this pace, I feel that the readers will run away as you write. I think there is no problem in writing this book with the author's persistence, so in order to make this book less eye-catching in the future, I have some personal details here People suggest Don't care too much about the headquarters in the mysterious world of recovery. This official organization is actually not popular in the world of recovery. Although the headquarters is powerful and has diverse and powerful functions, it is too restrictive for the protagonist. Wouldn't it be more comfortable for you to work alone? Is it possible that the protagonist can still be written to death by the author? Well, joining the headquarters is indeed a good way out. It can have more guarantees, resource support and so on. Then the protagonist can do things normally, don't be too active, and don't always think about saving people. Ordinary people who are mysteriously resurrected are still going to die when encountering supernatural events. It doesn't matter if they die more, just don't die all. You have to have a mindset. Only when you are strong can you fight against ghosts more efficiently. This requires There can't be too many dangers in the early stage, so you don't want to write that the protagonist goes up and fights desperately for some ordinary people. This will make it look too dramatic. People who watch Mysterious Resurrection fandom are probably not good people and are not willing to read this. If you have to write a story about saving ordinary people, just portray other characters in the original work. It's OK for the protagonist not to be stupid, and the protagonist can have such an idea. When the protagonist is strong enough, he can resurrect all the ordinary people who died in the supernatural. Of course, this does not mean that you should not rescue people in all situations. Just make a little judgment and call for support if you can't handle it. If you feel that it is not possible, just run away. Wang Xiaoming appears too frequently in this book. If I were the protagonist, I guess I would be planning how to kill Wang Xiaoming without being chased by the headquarters. You have to know that readers put themselves into the protagonist, and they will definitely not like someone who can often see through themselves hanging around them. Moreover, the reason and frequency of Wang Xiaoming's appearance in the article are somewhat unreasonable. You are forcing the plot. The content of the plot is too bland. Although you have written multiple supernatural events in a row, due to your poor description of the horror atmosphere, the supernatural events do not bring much sense to the readers. It feels like watching, you know, you have to learn some techniques to embody the horror of supernatural events, write about the critical psychology of the protagonist when facing difficulties, test the rules of killing, and try to solve the supernatural events yourself. Also, the protagonist's abilities are not clearly reflected. I still don't understand how the protagonist can pass through those supernatural events without any injuries. Well, it should be the one used by the clone. What are the attack methods? The protagonist's current status, goals, and environment are all a bit vague. It is recommended to write them in pieces in the following chapters. The protagonist's goals must be clear, otherwise you will not know what the protagonist is doing. One of the attractive aspects of Mysterious Resurrection is the supernatural confrontation in it. It is really boring to kill and kill. It is best for the protagonist to develop some supernatural auxiliary functions and make some supernatural items, or the protagonist has the ability to suppress the resurrection of evil ghosts. In short, in addition to being able to fight, the protagonist must also have other excellent supernatural abilities, otherwise he will be a fool.

I didn't want to read it after seeing Chapter 8. Living by corroding others is no different from supernatural events 🤫

The plot is a bit messy, the logic is there but a bit vague. Overall, it feels like the protagonist has been arranged clearly. This is the effect of the author's over-arrangement of coincidental plots. He is arranged to control ghosts at the beginning, and then finds the puzzle. This is too deliberate, and the protagonist seamlessly transitions too quickly. Ordinary people directly become the person in charge and work diligently, and then continue to be manipulated by the headquarters. Then he was manipulated by Wang Xiaoming. This is very bad. The protagonist cares too much about the responsibility of the person in charge. There is no need to rush to the front line for everything. If you feel that it is not working, just call for support. It's better to be the main character and not work. What you wrote feels like the protagonist owes the headquarters, and he does not get any benefits without being able to do his best. The point is that the protagonist's strength has not improved, and it seems that he is working in vain. Although there are many shortcomings, there is room for explanation. At present, they are all small problems, but there are also big problems. It is just not fun, and it is not interesting to read. The author's description of the horror atmosphere is not good enough. The plot seems bland and a bit tasteless. The author's level is still good. From the current point of view, if the protagonist only needs to be reorganized and less manipulated, the overall quality of the book can still be improved. Moreover, there are few words now, and it may be able to take off directly with a few changes.

The protagonist is quite cold and decisive in the first few pictures, but then he becomes extremely responsible from the vegetable market and becomes crazy and transfer money to the headquarters, which is equivalent to working in vain? ? ?

It's over 30 chapters, and the more I read, the less I want to read it. The protagonist becomes less and less independent and has no goals of his own. He has foresight but no plan on how to become stronger. The newly opened dungeons are all useless nonsense. Firstly, it is not fun. Secondly, there is nothing to help the protagonist become stronger. It feels like the number of words is just scraped together. Also, don't compare yourself with the author of the original work or the main character of the original work. If you can't compare with them, they will become gods and it's easy for them to get into trouble. People in Yangjian have their own unique charisma, but you, the protagonist, lack a lot of it. To be honest, your personality and performance are far from enough. You have to have some principles in everything you do, and being the protagonist even more so. To be honest, the protagonist in this book doesn't have any principles, at least for now.

You must at least have a reason to kill decisively. Don't say he is harming you, he is provoking you and you are not in good condition, so there is nothing wrong with killing him. As a result, when you go out and see a store clerk who greets you, you kill him... Isn't this so crazy? Don't talk about the worldview, that's how it is. None of the respectable ghost masters in the original book kill people for no reason. Those who kill randomly are just cannon fodder passers-by who will be finished soon. What's the difference between random killings and ghosts? I'm here to see people control ghosts, not to see ghosts control people. Fang Yuan killed someone because the other person was in the way or had value. You are simply sick.

The biggest shortcoming of this book is that in order to suppress the strength of the protagonist, it abandons the excitement and plot logic of the plot. For example: In the beginning, the protagonist's weakness is ghosts. As a time traveler, the protagonist can obviously control a ghost with ghosts, but the author just doesn't arrange it. If you write like this, it is impossible to get results in that type of book. As an analogy for the mysterious resurgence, how many chapters did it take for the protagonist to die as a ghost? Others also wrote a lot. In summary, it is difficult to distinguish the priorities. You should study how to make the plot of the dungeon more vivid, rather than studying how to suppress the protagonist's strength and make the novel longer (the plot is well researched, and the length will be longer by the way. Now you are just discarding the basics and giving up the fun points and the protagonist's IQ. The plot is longer, but it is not attractive.). I was very optimistic about this fanfic at the beginning. There were no other elements. However, I didn't read much of the basic plot. I skipped through it, and I didn't read it after Chapter 50. Not to mention that the plot was not attractive at all, and instead gave me a sense of being brainless and disgusting.

After seeing about 100 pictures, I felt that the main character's power of expression was very weak, and sometimes he felt like he had no sense of existence, like a passerby. A random ghost would stump the main character, and he would die on the spot if an incident happened. The original attractive thing about the beginning was that the main character controlled the idealistic ghosts and had a ghost domain, and then the infinite superposition gave people a very awesome posture, and it almost turned into a refresh monster.

I don't know why the protagonist cares so much about the headquarters

I consider myself not a Holy Mother, and I will not offend others unless they offend me, but I must have three views. First of all, it is the early stage of recovery. Will the headquarters invite the protagonist to do this? It would be nice not to give a warning or send someone to kill him, right?

Zhao Feng controls the ghost song and owns the ghost realm. He is a singing voice, and his supernatural powers are similar to those that can be followed by words, such as sealing off the ghost realm, retreating the ghost slaves, etc. He met Liu Qi and was regarded as a non-blood brother.

The protagonist has been controlled by ghosts since Chapter 8. If the moral value is 10 points, it is Tong Xiaoqian (the Holy Mother), Yang Jian is about 7 points (will not kill people actively, but will save people if conditions permit), friend circle is 3 points (will kill for profit, will not kill randomly), ghosts are 0 points and kill according to the rules, and the protagonist has a negative score and kills without rules. In the original work, he will be the first to be killed, which is more dangerous to ordinary people than ghosts.

It's not suitable for me. After reading a few chapters, the protagonist came out and insulted two passers-by without any hatred or enmity. I guess it was written for people who are into the dark genre.

If I were the protagonist, before the old man was alive, I used the cruelest way to get revenge by killing all the people he cared about most before he died. Your mother, if anyone treated me as a puppet, I would have thanked his eight generations of ancestors. This protagonist also has a good temper.

How can it be called idealism when a clone like the protagonist is hidden in a deep mysterious realm? It's really awkward to watch.

The protagonist really doesn't owe anything to the headquarters, and considering the supernatural beings controlled by the protagonist, life-saving is quite strong. However, the headquarters does not change the settings of the original headquarters very much. He just uses the ghost controller like a beast, always writing blank checks, and the support of the headquarters' supernatural resources is not proportional to the events that need to be processed. Coupled with the consumption of the ghost controller's own lifespan, the little things provided by the headquarters are not enough to handle a supernatural incident. But what is the protagonist doing now? While working hard for the headquarters, the most important thing is that I can't see that the protagonist has gained too much. Instead, the author briefly describes the growth of the protagonist in the supernatural events. This sense of immersion and refreshment is almost invisible. It is even worse than the rhythm of your last book. Take a closer look and change it, otherwise this book will probably be cut. Personal opinion: It is not expected that the protagonist will improve in every supernatural incident, but at least the improvement of the protagonist in the recent supernatural incidents must be written in detail for the readers. Don't always think of repressing the protagonist, depressive style, those fan fictions that show off from the side or from the front, occasionally arrange it, what is the purpose of the protagonist's growth? It's just a pretense for readers to see! Specifically how to write, look at the most popular fanfics and how they write. Reduce the excessive contact between the main characters in the headquarters and the protagonist, especially Wang Xiaoming, who is personally very unpleasant. Strengthen the protagonist's harvesting in the headquarters. You can gather it so that the main headquarters is unaware, but it must have a significant effect on the protagonist Otherwise, go to the headquarters more, or occasionally touch the fish, you have to show it, and then the protagonist can gain something. Compact supernatural events, and occasionally relaxed supernatural events should be combined, don't be tight all the time, won't this feeling of pleasure come? Even if the supernatural setting is well written in the original work, Yang Jian does not follow the overall depressive style. In the terrifying and depressing supernatural events, Yang Jian is more often a "protagonist halo" character. Whether you are a reader or a bystander character in the original work, you can see Yang Jian's ups and downs. Pan, survival in a desperate situation, is a kind of passion that gives people a bright personality. Please give more consideration to the personal setting of the protagonist and his character in this book. The goal of the protagonist in the novel is not clear now, and his character has a sense of being happy with the situation, and not afraid of death. After all, if you die, you will get a new one. It is said to be crazy, but it is not written out.

When I read it earlier, I thought it was about dark literature, but suddenly I became the person in charge and started working diligently for the headquarters. I started to be suppressed by Wang Xiaoming without asking for anything, so I just started working illegally. I killed readers who didn't like dark literature, and then I changed some of them because my personality changed. You are screening readers too fast. You might as well just write about people like Li Jun and Tong Qian.

I gave up when I saw the protagonist killing people indiscriminately. I tolerated the supporting characters and ignored them because they didn't concern me. But it's boring for the protagonist to kill people randomly.

Fans also asked riddles, did the author think he was smart?

Forget about suppressing the protagonist's combat power, but still trying to act like a dog later is still bullshit.

I can't stand it anymore when I see random shop assistants being killed.

Before Chapter 160, it was actually fine. I wrote my own stuff. But after arriving in Dajing City, the plot was much worse. The protagonist has no internal drive and no goals in doing things. The author probably also got stuck in the plot, which resulted in the protagonist paddling against Yang Jian throughout the entire plot. It would be the same with or without him. In the end, everyone forced a wave of passion, which was extremely embarrassing.

The Lord of Jiangdong Town who hates betrayal and deceit

I can't understand it, the fanfic is written like a puzzle game, it's confusing to read

Forget it, I clicked in a few times and read a few chapters, but I still couldn't stand it. It was written inexplicably, and the Riddler seemed to want to show the intelligence of the protagonist and the tension of the plot. In fact, I felt nothing while watching it.

The idealistic ghost is a ghost whose body does not exist in reality. It is shown by triggering the media invasion that the ghost youth controlled by the protagonist will not exist if it is an idealistic ghost. The attack condition of the young ghost is contact, but the young ghost is idealistic and does not exist in reality. If you want to contact, you must have reality. If you want to exist, you must contact. If you want to exist, you must contact. It will be a different kind of death and will not appear in the world

I can't understand that the five or six captains who will be alive 60 years later will basically have the strength of the Seven Elders. Then why did the most radical Hu Chao and Li Leping seal Yang Jian? Even if Yang Jian had no grudges with Li Leping and Hu Chao, they were working together, but Yang Jian had to delay it for the sake of the world or the captain for 60 years, so that he could study ghosts and the time to end the supernatural, but he was kept sealed like this, which is not appropriate for both emotion and reason, right? Moreover, Yang Jian made it clear before sealing himself that this was also a way, and that he might successfully end the supernatural beings. Even if he failed, five or six captains could still suppress him. The captains would not even lack this courage.

I haven't read this book, but I feel like a lot of people are saying that the protagonist loves to be a dog, but the question is, in that world, cooperation with the country is the only way to maximize benefits. Don't make any nonsense. For the country, are these disobedient captains really good? Is it good for the general public? Although they protect one side, they themselves sometimes lose control. When you lose control, who will save you? Li Leping's loss of control was by no means an accident