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Um~ I can say that I don't understand it. I tried my best and read dozens of chapters. I'm really sorry that I can't accompany you.
The so-called soul synchronization is a big failure
After reading about 10 chapters, I will talk about it from the perspective of a reader: 1. Systematic writing, this is purely something I don't like (only personal preference). But looking at the later content, the system appears very rarely, so why not directly arrange a panacea setting such as "time travel leads to memory enhancement" or "previous life career-related", which feels better than the system. 2. The problem of character design of the protagonist in this life. I don't know why Ding Zhen became so popular, but later on, his perception among passers-by was actually not very good. "A pig that takes advantage of the wind and flies up" is probably the impression. You seem to want the protagonist to take over the pig's body and take off, but the matter of "turning into a pig"... Cough..., Not to mention that according to your previous description, the pig's situation does not seem to be very good. It seems to be a pig that has flown into the sky and is falling freely. 3. The protagonist's behavioral logic. You set up a situation similar to "the body cannot fully adapt after time travel", and forced the protagonist to behave as "innocent" as you thought after time travel. However, what you described was not what innocence should be like, but instead resembled a child who lacked intelligence and was unable to control himself due to a genetic defect. An adult, who clearly knew the character Ding Zhen in his previous life, traveled to a similar character in another world. For more than 10 chapters, I have not seen any thoughts or actions on his part to get rid of "Ding Zhen", which is his own ending and reputation that can be seen in the future. Instead, all actions are consistent with the character and behavior of "Ding Zhen". Forgive me for being stupid, the only reason I can think of is: he (or you, the author) think this is a good character. I can't take on the role of such a protagonist.
After reading Chapter 11, a little insight
First of all, what does the Snow Leopard Soul specifically mean and why it suddenly appeared; Secondly, how to improve the integration level. I saw Chapter 11, but there was no hint at all. I flipped through the chapter names below and couldn't see them, so I couldn't find anything interesting; Just like Yang Di said in the show, he sang randomly and said it was a Qiang song, and a lot of people applauded. I feel that your knowledge is not broad enough. To set up the Mongolian race, you must use the knowledge of the Mongolian race to overcome the early difficulties. Otherwise, why set him up? People don't easily express opinions on knowledge they don't understand. Most judges will say "Well, not bad, it's quite new." If it's a vague preference, it's enough to have a firm foothold.
Brother, the collection of 200,000 and 300 is real. Hurry up and open the next book and stop the loss in time.
Please give me some advice, please
Friends who have passed by, please leave comments and suggestions. You can tease me like an electronic pet, please! I really don't want to stand alone! My hands are shaking, my heart aches, why is there no one! Wow, reader, I really like you!
I'm used to reading all kinds of entertainment routines, but this one is quite innovative.
The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! Recommend a book that kills decisively and has many joys. "The old man picked up rags in time and made a living by making bad movies" is hilarious...
A little suggestion
Suggestion 1: When the author publishes, check whether the sentences are smooth. If there are missing or too many words in some places, modify them. Suggestion 2: Sometimes there is no need to describe the psychology of the snow leopard. What I want to read is entertainment. Suggestion 3: The story should be smoother and not so rigid. It is really not possible to imitate other people's structure.
Although I have the mentality of just watching for fun, I can watch it till the end and update it soon.