Travel Through Time and Become a Doctor of Truth!

In fact, it is a bit redundant to write that the protagonist becomes Doctor Truth and then travels through Teyvat. It would be better to just let the doctor travel through time and get rid of the redundant elements. Doctor Truth is a charming character. He is a genius, but he calls himself a mediocre person. Throughout the plot, he sets up puzzles for the pioneers and guides them so that everyone on the space station can learn not to blindly follow geniuses but to learn to think for themselves, so he can be called a teacher. But now the author has added some unnecessary elements to the protagonist, which makes the doctor's character flawed and gives the original genius character a sense of being useless. It falls apart from the first few pictures. If a book starts with a character that is not accepted by people, then the book will be useless.

Secretly said: The author can copy the doctor's quotations and act like a doctor. This will be more attractive and can add original character, but the best doctor will take the majority 🥱

Can you write the feeling of Dr. Truth? In the new plot, Dr. Truth is a very smart person. I doubt the author's level.

The name doesn't have to be a combination of Chinese and Western, just call it Zhenli's name. Don't you think Lin Yun sounds nice? 😡

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I was relieved when I saw the comments saying that they were told to quit at the beginning. It seemed that I was not special. . . .

I'm really convinced. I've been thinking about writing a dick book for a long time, but I can't finish it. I currently owe two books, so I'll record them here.

Very interesting subject matter, but it's a pity that the author lacked some wisdom when writing the book. I am an old bookworm. I am neither picky nor picky. If there is a slight difference between the two, the difference will be a lot. Maybe you should think more about it when you create the protagonist, and then a few more update tickets will be in your pocket, instead of writing some words of encouragement before leaving like now, come on

It is recommended that the tone of the form of truth be regarded as a systematic task. For example, if you play the truth, you will gain the ability and knowledge of the truth. Otherwise, it will be like being taken over by the truth, which will greatly affect the perception. There is also a problem with the introduction of being a teacher in Teyvat. Instead, the protagonist takes the initiative to spread knowledge and thereby reach a deal with the Knights, instead of having the Knights propose it when borrowing money.

Sorry, the first sentence of this time travel is to persuade me to quit. Don't you even read the book yourself?

The protagonist's name is Lin Yun. What the hell is Ladio?

The character of the protagonist is abstract. It is better to write a character directly and jump around repeatedly. If you want to have some fun, you will feel that you are not having fun.

I still suggest the author change the beginning, it's too discouraging.

The character of the protagonist is abstract. It is better to write a character directly and jump around repeatedly. If you want to have some fun, you will feel that you are not having fun.

Byd After reading books for so many years, I have never seen an author give a personal name to the protagonist. All naming is useless.

All I can say is that when Truth is the protagonist, it would be better to go to Honkai Impact. Not only is it easier to write, but it's also more professional and relatable.

The two personalities are so different, and the psychological activities of the protagonist... I can tolerate it if I write less about the psychological activities.

The author has a good attitude, and he can still update it even though he is scolding 🤭

A suggestion that the author does not have to adopt. I think it is better to become a fireworks time travel instead of becoming a doctor of truth. After all, you have already written Aha, and the protagonist Leziren is a very convenient character design for novices, which can effectively avoid the problems of inconsistent character design and weak plot driving force. The sissy single You can also avoid emotional dramas, make men and women equal. Play with each of the self-contained characters. When writing the outline, you can arrange the order. With so many self-contained characters, you can write a lot of content and focus on making things happen. Just like Hanabi promotes all forces in Pinocon, Happy Life is also convenient for making jokes.

The plot of Mondstadt was handled well, but the current plot of Liyue felt very boring. I replayed the plot of the game again. When I was the nanny of the protagonist of the game, I said that it would follow the development of the plot of the game and I had no intention of reading it...

In fact, this book would be really disappointing if it weren't for the protagonist's bad behavior at the beginning. The results will definitely increase several times. If you write poorly in the first place, others won't read it later. The beginning is very important.

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?

Naughty little grass baby, so cute

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁

Okay, does the author have any new books?

Fun

Why can't I find the extra chapter in the directory? I can see the extra chapter is updated when it is updated.