Why Can't the Monster Eat It?

After following the latest chapter, I feel that the advantages are as follows: 1. The writing style is good, not a novice novel suitable for retirement 2. It is not depressing or holy, the protagonist is close to invincibility throughout the whole process 3. There is a system, but the more function of the system is the farm that comes with it, and it can be upgraded, which is more exciting 4. The supporting characters are well portrayed, and Zhang Yunshan, the orange cat, is very interesting There are actually some shortcomings: 1. The pace of the farming novel is really not fast, and it is not recommended for those who like fast pace 2. It is actually difficult to combine food and farming, but the author combines it well, but there is not much food (currently) 3. Same as above, don't write about fighting, farming is farming, and the fighting can be brushed off. Are we here to see how the protagonist fights? We're here to see how to cook and upgrade your farm!

Write more about food and less about battle scenes. I feel that the battle is very smooth but the focus is on food and running that shabby farm.

It's a very interesting novel. It combines various elements and the plot is also very full. However, it is a bit lacking and it feels like it lacks a sense of three-dimensionality. Have you ever considered writing some inner drama?

Write more about food! Isn't the author a cook? It seemed to me that I was hungry in the middle of the night. Don't worry about the rest of you who are stupid, try to eat more, I like to watch.

It's well written. I'm optimistic about you. Don't be anxious and write well.

The plot of the novel is quite novel, and there are still relatively few male videos in this genre. Especially the combination with monsters and beasts and the inclusion of some cultivation of immortality is really good.

Introduction: That little lamb is quite cute. He won't eat it.

Well written. Come on!

1: The strategic plan of the protagonist [Clear the situation]. At the beginning of the crisis, the protagonist needs to go through an analysis process (i. E., Predict the crisis) 2: When playing against the villain, depict the psychological contrast [mockery and suppress the protagonist] (the bloody battle with Zhang Qi, it was too bland) [The information here is poor, the protagonist's golden finger and the villain's contempt] 3: After defeating the villain, you must gain benefits and complete the original accumulation! ! ! [If there is no relic, why are you writing about him? 4: The psychological contrast of the supporting characters [Character interaction] When you wrote about the Great Zhou Tianjing before, no one came. The protagonist arrived with Golden Finger, so you can write about the shock of the supporting characters [This contrast can highlight the sense of satisfaction] [Personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it] (Stacked Armor) 🥺

Okay, it's rare to find a book that suits your taste during a book shortage.

There's a lot more fighting than food

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Well, in the first few chapters, the protagonist was still 17 years old when he killed the pig demon. In the next chapter, he will be 19 years old. How can he change so fast? He has aged two years in less than one night.