Da Qin: I Have Repeatedly Offered Poisonous Strategies, but Zulong Advised Me to Calm Down

It's so long-winded, a time-traveler is too involved in the drama, talking to himself is embarrassing! The plot is extremely unreasonable. The crown prince and the princes all know that you are talented, so how can you be driven away by the institutions under their jurisdiction? Moreover, the protagonist's dialogue sounds like a second-grade online novel from twenty years ago, which is extremely embarrassing!

If the author writes the novel yourself, take a look and read it yourself. Why do you want to harm me.

The writing is very verbose, and some of the emotional descriptions are too exaggerated. The more than twenty chapters are just about the various effects of the protagonist's chat, which is very special.

I haven't read it yet. Are there any golden fingers?

Why don't you find a class? I won't do this job of writing books.

When I read the second chapter, I couldn't stand it. Let's not talk about the plot. As soon as the protagonist spoke, what was this random weather special effect?

One story per chapter, no continuity, space, too jumpy, toxic,

No wonder I can't go on writing. I just wrote about your various powerful ideas. After reading all the free ones, I didn't see you implementing a plan to kill someone who was ruining the country. Even though you said you were powerful, you felt inexplicable grief for the people. Pooh