The Winner Takes All, Rebirth 2009

The introduction of this book should be: Half a year after starting a business, you will be listed on the market, one year after starting a business, you will become the world's richest man, two years after starting a business, you will rule the world, and three years after starting a business, you will occupy the galaxy. The protagonist's day is calculated as 480 hours.

It's outrageous to have accomplished in a few months what others have been doing for more than 10 years. Also, mark the author of Little Pink and suggest that the next book will be about me digging oil for my motherland.

The author is a bit greedy, wanting to do everything and want everything. This is an ancient way of writing. You can definitely focus on one or two industries (for example, takeout and Duoduo), and other investments will be fine. But after seeing what you wrote, I want to do this and take the lead in that. It's chaotic.

In fact, the plot at the beginning is okay, but why is it so greedy? Not to mention the timeline, the biggest problem. I see that many people in the comments gave you feedback about too many timelines and routes. Does the author think those readers who gave feedback are stupid? If many readers give you feedback on the same problem, I still hope that the author can think carefully about whose mistake it is. You could have changed this rhythm a long time ago, if you didn't want to. This timeline is really too dramatic. I don't think any readers will agree with your way of writing this time even if their heads are wet. I don't know what the author is disdainful of

To be honest, I felt pretty good at first, but the more I read, the more I felt something was wrong. After reading through it briefly, I found that you have written hundreds of chapters and done a lot of things. Has it been a year? The writing is so fake that I have no interest in pursuing it. To be honest, urban writing still needs to pay attention to logic. After reading it, There are so many comments, let me make a suggestion. Even if you reorganize the timeline, you will not be as good as you are now. To be honest, what you write is too dense, and you are still a loser in daily life. The key is that what you write is not good-looking. There is too little about life, and it is like a startup machine. To be honest, it's hard to write business articles now, and readers have more channels to learn about them. Especially when they don't understand, they like to search. If you write too fake, people will abandon you. How can you do so many things in the past few months? It's outrageous without thinking. You can completely intersperse daily writing and extend the timeline. Don't think that writing daily subscriptions will be less. To be honest, if you write like this, more people will abandon it. Besides, is it necessary to write business articles on a daily basis?

I finished reading the free part in a few hours and would like to give my own opinions The first one is the treatment of the enemy in the past life. The colleague was disgusted with the protagonist in the past life and the present life. The protagonist actually wants to help him and let him cut off his flesh early, which is very disgusting. They keep talking about repaying a favor. What kind of favor did Uncle Yan do to you? Why is the protagonist still bringing him with him when he makes money by trading in the stock market? This is raising enemies, right? The third one is that the protagonist wants to do everything and do everything. Your takeout and express delivery idea is a good one, but the time is too short, and the protagonist is given unlimited money. What money? They all come from the stock market, with millions and tens of millions at every turn, including express delivery, takeout, and water drop chips. Later, I heard that they were going to start Xixi again, which is quite outrageous. The mobile Internet did not come in 2009, and there are no conditions at all. Do you really want to finish everything in 2009?

How can I put it this way? This book does not grasp the essence of business writing. It is a business upgrade plus harem writing. What is the essence of business? It depends on your perseverance in poverty, instead of just speculating in individual stocks and opening a company to play with women. In business literature, women are always supporting roles, and strong women in the workplace are always lovable characters. Silly white and sweet people will eventually be abandoned. Just like if you want to start writing about food delivery, you can write about the protagonist delivering food to gain experience, or you can write about someone deliberately looking for trouble and how the protagonist responds tactfully. When the company encounters a crisis and urgently needs money, the protagonist goes to the bank for a loan, but others will not lend it to you. The protagonist is indomitable and blocks outside the bank. , If you get a minor illness in the afternoon, the protagonist's image will immediately rise. You can also write that a friend of the protagonist's side has an accident and needs money, and the protagonist helped him. It is affectionate and righteous. You can also write about going home to celebrate the New Year, bringing fellow villagers to Shanghai for development, or even writing about an additional lady coming to the protagonist's company to experience it. Biological creature, and fell in love with the protagonist, and started to pursue it crazily. However, the protagonist is devoted to industry, and there are women who are having affairs all around him. Business war stories are just business wars, not where you have a harem and have an affair. If you really want to read such stories, entertainment stories, or even pornographic stories are not as good as yours. It's good to read, and there are also business wars. Remember to engage in monopoly, because the more novels of this type become more and more monopolized, the more industries they monopolize, and the more they give people a sense of emptiness. Especially when it comes to crushing those Internet giants, readers will be more incompatible with reality.

The protagonist of this book has 480 hours in a day

I came across this book again. I abandoned it as soon as I saw it on the shelves last time. The company's equity division is so confusing that it made me dizzy.

How should I put it, this book feels so retro! When starting a business, you must pretend that you are a worker! Forget it if you play innocently! The key is that we are kidney transplant recipients! There are so many women, don't talk about relationships! We are just talking about money!

What is your core? To the east and to the west. Human energy is limited and it is impossible to do everything

Compact writing. After watching half of it, the timeline has only passed three months. . . It's amazing how much can be accomplished. It seems like everything can be done in 2009, and the sense of isolation is particularly severe. The daily line should be appropriately extended. Nothing happens, there are dramas every day. .

I have written more than 150 chapters, and it is still three months after it was founded. There are only a few part-time employees in a company with thousands of people. I really don't use my time as time at all. The writing is too tight, and the pretentiousness is too stiff, although the reality will only become more serious... In the front, the stock market, capital allocation, and interpersonal relationships, in the back, start-up companies, food delivery, electric vehicles, and express delivery. The plot is compressed too hard and too fast, and it can be completely detailed.

You are so nice to Dongzi. Your company gives Dongzi a veto power. You can't control Dongzi, so how can you play?

Author, please list all the assets of the protagonist in detail, how many companies, how many shares, how much money is owed, and the structure of so many companies. Please explain in detail. I can look at the pictures if I see something I don't understand. It is best if you issue a diagram every time there is any change in the company, and you can add or subtract it at any time. It is too messy for you to change the name of the company.

To be honest, I couldn't watch it after chapter 150. I felt like a cow was flying in the sky.

It's messy, very messy, and the writing behind it is messy.

You are not for normal people to see, it is for those extreme little pinkies. I like to read cool articles, but not this cool article, it's a mess. Learn from experience. Well, the logic of your business model is okay, but the timeline is fake.

Chapter 147 is so disgusting. A woman can knock on Pin Xixi's financing door with her body. How cheap is your protagonist! Today this woman can do it, and tomorrow other women can do it, so why does your protagonist start a business? And for this kind of thing, other people who invest in it will look down on you. What kind of career can a person who can be bribed with beauty achieve? There is nothing wrong with being nostalgic for beauty, but it can only be used as a sweetener after the negotiation is concluded, and cannot be the key to knock on the door! Moreover, if you received an investment from a powerful person today because of your beauty, and tomorrow another powerful person sends a beauty, will you also accept it? If you don't accept it, you are the enemy! Alas, why does a good book disgust readers so much?

The timeline goes by too slowly, and the company's market price is billions of dollars before it's even been here for half a year. That's awesome.

I want to ask, how long has it been in the timeline of the book now? I don't really like the kind of business articles with millions of words written only two or three years ago. After all, the objective development of things takes time.

The writing is really good, and the layout is very grand. If I were reborn, I would definitely do this. Unfortunately, I lack the ability, and it is difficult to make the first pot of gold. As long as I can survive to the mobile Internet, it will really be a good thing for the benefit of the country and the people. This is the career that a man should do.

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I read dozens of chapters. There is a lack of life, life is not necessarily about feelings, there are also all kinds of other messy things, pure business seems boring, and the timeline is too slow.

I have been a bookworm for eight years and have always loved reading about time travel and rebirth. This novel is relatively good, not so outrageous or exaggerated, and is close to the current social situation at that time! The author's writing is quite good! Worth reading!

What can I say? This book is like a piece of chicken, it is tasteless and it is a pity to discard it. It is like boiled water without taste. As long as the protagonist wants to do business, it will always be smooth sailing. The scenes of confrontation with opponents are too young or too few. I recommend the author to read the book next door. You call this entrepreneurship. Go check it out.

Running for the heroine of this book😎😎

It's really well written and has a big picture. If you are reborn and have the ability, you have to work hard. This is the best book on rebirth and entrepreneurship right now!

If you are too courageous, you will not be afraid of losing the book

No, brother, are you really just doing business and not mentioning a single thing about your life? I haven't mastered the elements of business writing at all.