Journey to the West: My Path to Obtain Scriptures Is Too Weird!

I thought it was interesting when I saw the title, and it was a bit of a surprise. At the same time, I also find it difficult because this subject matter is difficult to write about. Looking at the back, sure enough, the inexplicable little girl has the plot baggage revealed in advance. The further you go, the more difficult it becomes to write. Weird and weird subjects are inherently difficult to write about, and Journey to the West requires a large amount of knowledge. It's not easy

The opening chapter is very interesting, and the plot is also very novel. There are three steps to reward bookshelf recommendation tickets. Come on, author!

The writing is quite interesting. I just thought about it. Greed, ignorance and anger represent the three disciples. The soul of the original body should be transformed into a white dragon horse? It is related to the three corpses, but because the broken body is already blind, and then there is the ego that permeates the entire character, I have reason to suspect that the protagonist who traveled through time has been affected by the ego the moment he came to this body.

It's a bit interesting, but I feel a little dragged down by the title of the book. I can crowdfund a bunch of titles.

Sun Wukong is madness, representing ignorance and the obsession to become a Buddha; Zhu Bajie is greed, greedy for food, money, etc., And he is greedy for good times and takes excessive demands; Monk Sha is anger, representing killing, and is angry at adversity, often acting on his own terms and ignoring them. Wisdom; Because they are all three corpses separated from the original owner (the demon monk). After the original owner failed to kill the three corpses, the soul was integrated into them. Therefore, in addition to the main tone of greed, anger and ignorance, there will be other things.

It's so well written, it feels like a weird fairy. But the subject matter is different and very interesting.

Like the title, I personally think the author's ideas and creative themes are very good, with depth and reasonable structure of conflicts, but... The writing is really not very good. I have been reading books for more than ten years (this account is not my first account, and all physical books were included in the past). Yours is the only novel in which I feel that the outline is dragged down by the writing. It is an Adelman alloy skeleton with paper muscle skin. I don't know whether what I write is a compliment to you or not. I'm scolding you. Anyway, I don't think I meant to be "sarcastic". I hope that when your writing skills improve and you can master the huge world view in the future, you can use the current skeleton outline and throw away those bloated and shredded paper skins and write again. My personal feeling is that it is a pity. It is really a pity.

Tang San was buried, Sun Xingzhe punished the eight realms, and the killings were all over

Monk Tang traveled westward, and there was indeed only one person in history. In Journey to the West, he practiced in the Eighty-one Difficulties: subduing his mind, abstaining from greed and anger, and eradicating ignorance, and finally realizing the emptiness, energy, and purity—learning from the scriptures and becoming a Buddha.

The image of the Dharma was too bad and not strong enough at all. A crazy monk sometimes rubbed his clothes into a stick, sometimes turned his five fingers into a rake, and used his palm as a shovel to kill all the monsters. He also muttered that God has the virtue of good life, Amitabha, Wukong, please don't be rude, isn't it more touching? And the Dharma can be written at the back. How can I write the Endless God of War at the back?

The Yishi ruler of the Ming Dynasty is about 32cm Tang Sanzang is about 1.8 Meters Sun Wukong is about 1.3 Meters Zhu Bajie is about 3.6 Meters Sha Wujing is about 3.9 Meters

It's too crazy to understand, and it's kind of holy mother-in-law

The protagonist is an enhanced version of Tang Seng. He is still easily deceived about right and wrong, but he will fight to the death for himself or others. The image of the monkey resembles the situation without being under a tight spell. Bajie represents pure lust and appetite. Drifting monk Cheng Shaseng may be the one with the highest combat power among the three. Xiaobai is independent and has some problems. It is very readable, and the protagonist is also pseudo-invincible. The world view is not small, and it has dug a lot of holes. There may be problems with the foreshadowing. If it works normally and there are no problems, then the book is really good. If it makes readers sick and makes them sick, then I will send this book.

The subject matter of the book is good, and it is interesting Tang Seng, the four masters and disciples, did not understand what the monkey represents, but judging from the current performance, he knows the most. Bajie is obviously greedy and easy to understand. Sha Seng kills. Judging from the description of killing, it is not a problem for him to kill two, and then the point comes What does this white dragon horse represent? From the protagonist Tang Seng, this is the only friendly way to get close to his apprentice. The other three apprentices fight each other from time to time, but none of them take action against the White Dragon Horse The actions of the other three towards the White Dragon Horse, the monkey moves freely to mount the horse, and Sha Monk Bajie holds the reins. I wonder if the White Dragon Horse is the true body, right?

How can I put it, it suddenly felt boring. I was not afraid that other immortal cultivators would deliberately create things to cater to the protagonist, but I was afraid that the author would end up giving the protagonist a halo of wisdom. Even if the little girl at the beginning did not tell the truth, I finally met a female ghost cultivator with cultivation skills, but in the end, she turned into a ghost by mistake. In this way, it will be difficult to criticize in the eyes of readers. Hey, I hope you will write well later.

Most of the book reviews I read were positive, but after reading more than 40 chapters, I just felt full of frustration. It was a relaxing and happy book that suited me.

I personally like this novel very much and am still reading it, but it does have some rather toxic points. 1. A woman was added to the Westbound team. A woman sneaked into the team of Journey to the West, and then the author's emotional drama was not very good.... (It can be said to be quite uncomfortable. If you don't know how to write emotional drama, don't write it) 2. There is no outline, and the world view is constantly changing. From the beginning of the orthodox Xianxia to the professional playing system of the Lord of Mysteries... It can only be said that the span is quite large. Different people have different opinions. Personally, I think it's just because I didn't write an outline. Of course, it may also be a supplement to the world view. 3. It can be seen from the details that the author is too hesitant. First, the protagonist gets a Zen stick, and then the Zen stick has side effects and makes the whole body itchy, but the author later solved this part of the problem. I think this part of the setting is very good. The second is the protagonist gaining abilities. In my opinion, the author has always wanted the protagonist to be a mortal. In order to cater to book lovers, he also needs to let the protagonist gain abilities, so the overall look is weird. There was also the book in the hands of the protagonist in the early stage, which was then destroyed. (For this part, I hope the author can write an outline and sort it out as a whole, so that there will not be many problems of looking forward and backward) In fact, I highly recommend this novel. The writing and plot are all good. I have been reading it, but at the same time, there are some things that are really uncomfortable to read.

The writing is quite good and the subject matter is novel. I enjoyed reading it. It can also be regarded as a different kind of invincible literature.

The creativity is great and the ideas are novel. It's just that the writing style is too jumpy and a bit immature. ...... This book can become a god just for its creativity and ideas. The result was added joy, teasing, Holy Mother... It just dropped to the point where I could barely watch it.

If this is the case, how should the six-eared macaque solve the problem? This difficult metaphor is to get rid of the second mind, but now Sun Wukong is one of the three corpses, not the Taoist mind. Could it be that Liu Er replaced Wukong?

The book is very good, but I don't know why it's so difficult to write about women.

It's obviously a good idea, but I don't know why, but it just feels boring when I look at it.

The idea is good, but it's a pity that it's in the wrong direction It's either a serious joke, or it's weird and scary Now it's a bad idea, but it's a pity that the idea

It's a pity that the ending was so hasty. What's the follow-up for You An and others? Especially the paper kite. The paper kite is still in the painting.

Can this be considered bad? The ending is the same as Xiao Baitian's in previous years.

The author cuts it too fast. If you make more updates and take advantage of a wave of Black Myth Wukong's bonus, your results will skyrocket.

This book is really good, but it's not very popular. Please find someone to promote it.

The male protagonist has ideas, can think, and slanders the "three disciples" and others; he is easy to believe and understand, and is very similar to the other people he slanders, Luo Sheng. Sometimes I'm a little bit crazy. It's very sudden, and there are a lot of dark things. It's not oppressive and confusing to read. I want to hack Journey to the West but I can't. Overall, it seems to be very average. Maybe I didn't get it right.

It's a pity. It's a pity. It's a bad ending, but it's acceptable. The emotions of the characters feel a little rushed. It's a pity that the pitfalls were not solved.

The more I read, the less I understand. I'm probably crazy.