Cat Taoist Priest

This is the protagonist, right?

Is it the cat that complains at Zushiye every day?

Enlightenment

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Who dares to provoke

I feel like no one is following me, and the author doesn't want to write anymore 😭

This book is a bit special, it looks like a cartoon, a bit like a fairy tale

It's well written, but some places give it the feel of an ancient imaginative composition.

It's too easy to ascend to immortality. This world actually doesn't follow the rules

I specially subscribed to a chapter to give the author some advice. I have a good idea. There are too many pressures, angers, and grievances in life. Cute pet articles are good. But it is recommended not to add too many other elements and focus on daily warm interactions with the owner (or breeder?) You can refer to "I Am the King of Cats". This book has unparalleled daily warm interactions. The biggest flaw is the addition of a female protagonist who plays an emotional line. The author himself knows the bad things. I failed, so I tried my best to downplay the role. I didn't even mention it until the finale, and I barely made up for it. It's a pity for a good book If you have to write about extraordinary things, you can refer to "I Can Summon the Historical Meow", and go for a light-hearted comedy without adding an emotional heroine.

There are few typos, wrong punctuation, and unclear sentences 😵😵😵

Meow meow meow? I haven't read it yet. What does the title "The Finale" mean? Anyone seen it?

Can there be fewer typos 😅

Come to think of it, the scene of Mao Mao doing the railing to cultivate immortality has always been very graphic. It was the Druid's element-devouring beast that I had seen before. But there is not much about kitten practice in the back of the book, it's all about eating and eating. So I hope the author will grasp the key points of cute cultivation and write better!

The writing is good, but there are probably too many typos and punctuation errors. You can find several of them in any chapter. Sometimes there are several typos in a paragraph.

It's a very interesting book, with a sense of narration and pictures.

It's so watery, why is the update so slow?

It's so beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ but so few people see it

? Is this the end of the chase? The ending is a bit sloppy

Why haven't you updated it yet? Come on 🙂🙂

The author's new book has been released, Cultivation of Immortality: My Cultivation can be uploaded