What? Have My Civil Servants and Generals Come True?

1. There are serious typos and the author doesn't even check his chapter? During the simulation, the villain on the other side called him not the name of the simulated character, but the direct name of the protagonist, not once or twice. There are also repeated passages in the chapters. 2. The character creation is a bit strange. To give a few examples of supporting characters that should be considered important, ① King Lao Yan, in the past few chapters, he was supposed to be a wise leader, a powerful vassal king who divided one side of the country, but then he left his box lunch inexplicably, leaving a mess. Logically speaking, a border vassal king (prince) should have military and strategist talents, but as a result, most of the protagonists left are untrustworthy court politicians. ② Prime Minister Xie of the Great Zhou Dynasty felt that he should be positioned as a top political official with strong skills, loyal or not. At first, he thought he should be a powerful official. At first, he expected to compete with the likes of Huo Guang and Zhang Juzheng, but in the end he was not even as good as He Jin. ③ Daxing Wang and Huang Jiao were positioned as the leaders of the rebel army. At first, they thought they were Chen Sheng and Zhang Jiao, but it turned out that they had three talents (force, courage or charisma, and faith). The peasant uprising must have the feeling of sweeping the world. Even if it becomes corrupt later, the early leaders should be wiser and have a preliminary team. As a result, an old country farmer inexplicably became the leader without relying on anyone. ④The old Northern Barbarian King was positioned as a ruthless and merciless leader. He poisoned and killed wounded soldiers, but even left a witch doctor and his whole family behind. The human flesh incident had just been exposed the day before, and this still didn't stop him. There are also people who go out to rob and fight, and bring the queen's favorite concubines and maids with them. This is an outing, and no one in the royal court is in charge. ⑤ General Li of Taiyuan did not deserve a name even after fighting the barbarians for so long. 3. The political situation is a bit inconsistent. It feels like the kings of Yan and Shu were both vassal kings, and then they became vassal states. There is still a big difference between feudal society and slave society. Also, in terms of titles, everyone is called "sir", either as an individual or as an individual. There is no compatibility between superiors and subordinates. The title of the Northern Barbarians is also very strange. It feels like the system is like the Xiongnu or something like that, but why is he the king and the prince at the same time?

After reading almost 200 chapters, I have some ideas. The infinite rebirth setting is okay, but it has a bit more of an invincible atmosphere. If you can add some restrictions to the premise of later resurrection, such as how many points will be lost after a failure, how many points will be lost after a resurrection, etc. Moreover, there are also novels at Seven Points that use reality as the main line to supplement and advance unit by unit, such as "Crisis Management Game". That book focuses quite a bit on growth, the so-called next step from the information gained through rebirth. In this case, the polishing may be better, and the image of the protagonist may be more profound. Anyway, come on! 😃

First of all, I have never been an author, but I want to say, is it difficult to write 100 chapters a day? It's not that I am being unreasonable. After all, I said at the beginning that I have never been an author.

Talk about having fun. The author has been banned. I want to usurp the throne and establish myself. It's up to me to do the next thing today. I'm going to do it now. Who dares to disobey?

It's just so-so, I can't say it's good, I can only say it's a waste of time.

In the ancient plot, the eldest son of the late emperor must immediately ascend the throne. Whether it is the transfer of power or political needs, it can never be delayed until now. This loophole is too big, and it is enough to destroy the country.

The quality of the content has declined sharply. It was fine in the past, but it started to go downhill after 120. It was watered down, and existing information was ignored. It was clearly a cross-platform operation with various backward versions. One thing to say is that the content is useless, and the force settings are as if they are gone. He cannot defeat a small soldier guarding the courtyard and is assigned to be a member of the Royal Guards; the protagonists in time travel do not know how to sell luxury goods; it is a root-seeking story, but the ending cannot be connected, thinking that there is some hidden story, but it turns out to be childish, and there is no inevitable connection between changing the monument and pretending to be a person; a little eunuch asked him to read the memorial, and he delayed it for a long time, so what? Approving memorials requires vision and education. When did the literacy rate become so high that even young eunuchs can understand memorials? Last but not least, I like The Riddler. It writes about a battle of wits, but it doesn't have much wit at all. It's all about shooting the arrow first and then setting the target, so it's absolutely accurate.

A master at writing short stories, especially the latest chapter, which is amazing

As long as the protagonist wants to help his subordinates thoughtfully, he can become a master of employment that surpasses Liu Bei. For example, help Gu Quan find exercises that can improve his health and increase his longevity, or help him start a new family. Loyalty 100 is also different, and the subjective initiative of your subordinates is very different. Who doesn't want to have a boss who understands himself so well and thinks about himself?

The writing style is too rubbish, and the gap between it and that city is too big, so I won't mention the name, so as not to say it's an advertisement.

It looked good before it was put on the shelves, but it was 💩 after it was put on the shelves.

I don't understand why it must be called Little Emperor? No matter how young the emperor is, only ministers or princes can say it. The emperor is the emperor. Don't make a little emperor.

This golden finger is too big, and I have no desire to read it. The previous simulations are okay, at least the logic of the characters themselves is there. It is really difficult to directly simulate the enemy generals later. In this case, why not just let the protagonist kill them all? The author's description of the small theater is okay. The main plot is just a mess, relying entirely on the simulated deus ex machina to advance. I am not optimistic about it and have a high probability of writing it down. I retreated xdm

Unless you are a master at mobilizing emotions, the story can attract the reader's attention wave after wave, so that the reader can follow your rhythm and ignore the bugs in the work. Otherwise, you'd better think about your worldview carefully, at least it won't collapse in the early stage. In other words, either learn from potatoes or learn from squid. Just like you wrote about the feudal system dynasty where Superman exists. Either the upper limit of Superman is very small, or the emperor and high officials are all top-notch Superman. If you are not satisfied with the above and still focus on the description of power struggle, it will be very ridiculous and ugly. I can wipe out your whole family with one punch, so why should I follow the rules and play politics with you? I, the military attache, am an army alone. Why should your civilian officials be equal to me? You, the emperor, are weak and weak. Why can't I enter the palace and be free? Either avoid the officialdom and just use it as a background, or sort it out carefully, at least the official position and the force are symmetrical. Humans and ants do not respect each other.

The plot is getting more and more confusing, and the difference between simulation and reality is no longer clear. Look at the eggs.

I feel like the characters in the back are a bit messed up, and if this simulation is from the future, why not try to change some things in it, such as saving the old King Yan?

To be honest, it's not enough to be cool. It feels like the author is putting pressure on the development of the protagonist. It's completely unreasonable. A game of achievements can only be over 100 points no matter how many, and a simulation costs more than 160... Although the card-drawing cow simulation you wrote is great, the protagonist is still a garbage person. At least the protagonist must have good abilities, right? I hope the protagonist template can be based on Li Shimin and Erfeng, otherwise I will feel aggrieved for those simulated characters who want to be loyal to the protagonist. If you want to write a niche article and entertain yourself, don't worry about the other protagonists themselves. Just imitate how you want and write your story, but it is important to make it popular and enjoyable. You must control the points of story simulation and the development of the protagonist himself. This is all, author, come on

Is it written by someone else now? Starting in July, there were typos and the context couldn't be connected. When the protagonist was simulating, other people would not call the protagonist by his tacit identity, but would directly call the protagonist by his real name. Accidents often occurred. If you can't continue writing, cut it as soon as possible, don't waste everyone's time

The first 10 chapters and the last 10 chapters are on the shelves, just like a lump

This golden finger is a recruitment order

The protagonist is busy working here and there without getting any benefits. Every time, the essence is not enough and he can't afford it. It's really disgusting.

What happened after Chapter 200? Why does it feel like the context suddenly doesn't fit?

Ready to change the cover. Any comments?

I can't stand it anymore after reaching chapter 200. . . . Messy

The author of 238 is different from the Shu king I wrote about before. Is it the same author?

What a mess. . . In the first chapter, Yingcheng was obviously captured, and in the next chapter, he went to fight Zhao Guo. This was not the first time. At first, the writing was quite good, but then the timing became more and more confusing. At first, I thought I had skipped it, but after re-reading, I found that there was no clear explanation. It feels like the author himself has messed up the writing. From expectations to disappointment. . .

I wish this novel would be two million words long when I wake up

After reading it, overall it is well written, and there are some flaws in some small details.

I basically wrote random words on the back, it's so messy

Well written, good luck to the author🙂