Dragon Clan: My Speaking Spirit Is Too Shabby

Why is the timeline written wrong? Lu Mingfei and Chu Zihang were in junior high school when Chu Tianjiao's accident happened, and they went to Kassel in junior high school, right? Didn't Lu Mingfei's original novel clearly state that the time he got caught in the rain was in junior high school, and he and Chu Zihang were only one grade apart?

The most puzzling thing about the Dragon Clan is that a group of lizards who can't even leave the planet can play with time and cause and effect, which is even more magical than the natives of the Xingyue planet next door. Each native has a double immortality (Xingyue originated from reincarnation, and when awakening the origin, it will recall all past lives of the same origin. Xingyue also has the concept of heroic spirits. As long as you have great achievements, you can become a heroic spirit. This makes it possible for Xingyue to meet in the past life and this life.)

Do you think your setting is humorous? . . . .

Come on, author

The latest chapter is too violent. Cassell is an elite noble. I think it is more likely that he will shoot people with a calm face and will not chirp. He even mocks and curses. According to the setting, they are elites and students. It is really against the rules.

It doesn't have the feeling of Chu Zihang, the characters are not vivid, and the shaping feeling is a bit poor.

I found that my colleagues like to support Lu Mingfei as a nanny Tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk

Why does Zhao Menghua waste so much writing? The old-fashioned way of pretending to be slapped in the face is not popular nowadays.

Who knows who can offend Li Xiaobai, who has unlimited skills? Is this the depth of the invincible novel?

Ha, the subject matter is good. The plot is written like something written by my twelve-year-old cousin. Overall, the author has great potential for improvement.

We don't need to ruin our character just to show off. It was fine in Tokyo earlier. Once we arrived in China, it was just like the return of the Dragon King, the descent of the Taoist Mountain, and the return of the God of War. We can see ridicule and the same show-off everywhere. Let's talk about Zhao Menghua first. People are just like before. Just like Lu Mingfei and I were married, we just didn't like each other, and we were not arrogant upstarts. Then there were all kinds of confusing timelines. Of course, I haven't watched the new version of Dragons, and I haven't watched the old version since the third season. It's very inconsistent to show off. , If you don't have those forced pretensions, don't have the halo of wisdom, and don't have characters who are too emotionally rigid, I can't stand the embarrassment just from Chu Tianjiao's words. If you can describe more of the environment, how nervous you were at the time, and how Chu Tianjiao was feeling. How heavy it is is enough to express Chu Tianjiao's love for Chu Zihang's mother and son. In order to prevent them from getting involved, isn't it very simple? I have watched too many poisonous points, and the overall feeling is actually good. If you really want to watch it, the premise is that you have to deceive yourself.

There is a protagonist in Chu Zihang whose father was killed by the plot. Are you going to write it according to the original work?

What's going on with the new chapters? Changed? 🤔Why does it feel so awkward to watch?

I want to read this author🙂🙂🙂

It's a bit interesting, but when I look at it, it turns into an urban pretentious slap in the face.

The author's words seem funny, but when you put them together, you will find that they can actually be inserted into the traditional Chinese mythology scene-the underworld. Everyone has an "Equal Field" on the Huangquan Road to the underworld. The Wangxiang Tower and Sansheng Stone after the Huangquan Road can realize the "Summoning of Heroic Spirits" to express people's thoughts. The reincarnation of the six reincarnations at the terminal is actually a kind of "covering". Through the various roads traveled before, the blank memories can be continuously "covered" until the memory is completely washed away, and reincarnation can be achieved. Those who cannot cleanse their memories will be punished by the Ten Palaces of Yama or go to various hells. Those punishments and hell effects should be the embodiment of those funny words and spirits. For example, the Sword Mountain Hell is [100% chance of being caught with bare hands], and those who cannot catch it are the hell of being beheaded. [Dad, hit me! ], [Pika Pika] and [Silence] should be the manifestation of the Tongue Pulling Hell after the tongue is pulled out (part of the right to speak is lost). [Dark Invisibility] This should be the scene seen by people in the underworld after accidentally entering the underworld. Ghosts themselves are transparent, while the underworld itself is only black when there are no punishments. For ghosts, this is [dark invisibility].

How can the protagonist have so many family scenes? Does he really think he is an indigenous person?

Why do I feel that the skills overlap with those of the Dream Master of All Realms too much, and the number is unlimited. The few skills before the official start are useless, but many of them are magical skills. For example, if an unlimited weapon is 100% used by designated enemies on the other side of the earth, most of the dragons will not be able to withstand it, even Odin will be embarrassed. Let's do something new! There has to be something new to imitate the Dream Master of All Realms, right?

Are the skills in this introduction really not copied from the Dream Master of All Realms?

Chu Tianjiao is the uncle of the protagonist, but the protagonist does not have dragon blood?

Can the author Angers not let Angers die

Written by Aha, no wonder this name is a bit crazy

But the routine looks like a book from ten years ago

Until the rainy night, I felt pretty good. Even in the timeline, I could be a second creation, but this little devil character made me a little confused...

The front is fine, but why are the plots at the back so inexplicable?

Can someone tell me in detail, what is the identity of the protagonist?

Reading and writing feel quite comfortable, not bad

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.