King of Edges: Start from Full Speed

To be honest, I only read three chapters, but there are too many questions. First, you were just verbally expelled from the National Youth Team, and you flew directly to Germany before the club contract was settled? Is the second embassy opened by your family? The visa is issued in seconds. On the first day, the scout discovered that you were on a plane to Germany the next day. Third, when the protagonist does not speak German and has language barriers, he meets Klopp, and Klopp responds to you with lip reading. No, buddy, you are writing a football novel, not a fantasy novel. Author, you may not be good at writing, but you can't even write basic common sense correctly.

Nowadays, when writing about sports and not dealing with national brands, do we no longer know how to write stories? Very strange.

The protagonist only stays with each team for half a season, which is such a loser.

I can't stand it anymore. I jumped from Atletico Madrid to Manchester City to win a championship and then to Real Madrid. I really make readers look like fools.

Football mercenaries, right? Changing teams half a season is disgusting.

Chapter 2: Mr. Scout is talking down to you, but you refuse the test on your own without even participating in the test? If you insist on writing this plot, would it be better to change it in another way? For example, you test very well, and then you are filmed. This video is seen by other club scouts and invites you.

I don't understand why Mao wanted to write about Zhang Tianai

National football team. I don't deserve to watch the national football team. Hey, what a pity.

On the Internet in 2018, how could the Bundesliga reverse and Dortmund be blocked domestically? Various marketing accounts and small websites have already reported it all over the sky. Is it to attract girls, or is it just to write this kind of old-fashioned plot? .

The more the author writes, the more he writes. The reward for playing Villarreal in La Liga has been replaced by the reward for the Champions League. And what follows is all competition, with no daily transition at all. What are you doing, author?

Why don't you travel through time and hit Yoxi earlier?

The previous five golden chapters are basically negative feedback. How to retain readers? I saw Chapter 6 and started flipping through the table of contents.

The name should be changed to the king of assists. The king of forwards is a bit unworthy of the name.

No, buddy, the A-level card has two full-level attributes, the S-level card has one temporary full-level attribute, and there is only one fragment of the Grandmaster box and nothing else. Are you serious?

It's disgusting. Strength speaks for itself in sports competitions. You are so embarrassed to use cheats to pretend to be awesome. Chinese football is like shit. Change it if you can. If you can't change it, shut up. Why are you pretending? I'm not licking foreigners. China is awesome. If you say something that is not awesome, won't you be embarrassed if you say it? Just like NBA and football novels, if foreigners don't laugh out loud when they read them, I can say in foreign countries that China's table tennis is number one in the world, but I can't say that Chinese football is great. You use cheats to embarrass people, that's awesome, the national football team is like this, I never give up hope.

You said you have watched football for more than 20 years, I really don't believe it

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Strange, I read Chapter 30, and I remember that after the patrol system was turned on earlier, the gift package gave two attributes, but why didn't you mention it? The author forgot?

Author, the Football Association is bad, not stupid. What kind of joke you wrote in the first place could not lead to such a blatant expulsion! Besides, such an outstanding player is an important asset of the club and the club is unlikely to fire him.

Brother, will Dortmund's head coach still be Klopp in 2018?

The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! Recommend a book that is decisive in killing, sharp and joyful. "Old Man in Time Travel Picks Up Rags and Survives by Making Bad Movies" is hilarious...

Not bad, not bad! It's rare to find a good book