Reborn as a Baby, My Pet Beast and I Evolve Together

It's too watery. You have to write several chapters for each battle. It takes several days to finish a battle.

Why do so many people start from babies recently?

Don't be like other novels whose protagonists are young children and write rubbish. It's all written from a template, and you can already know the plot behind it.

To be honest, if the author doesn't write emotional scenes, the overall rating of the novel will definitely be higher.

Um, would it be a bit weird for an adult to get full marks in a kindergarten exam and then show off everywhere with a certificate? Besides, the heroine was only a few years old at the time. Isn't it inappropriate for the protagonist to have thoughts about her? Generally speaking, she should be treated more like a younger sister.

Overall, it looks okay, but are you serious about the guitar part? Let's forget it. He's only four years old. It's a bit unreasonable to choose to say goodbye.

Isn't the protagonist a time traveler? How come he doesn't know all kinds of myths? Like Xiaobai, it's obvious that there are elements of Journey to the West, Catholicism, and Ke mythology. How come it's like Xiao Bai who doesn't understand anything? Mao Dun before and after, it's impossible for a time traveler to have never heard of these myths. Is this a loophole?

The writing is okay, but the expressiveness of a primary school student is like this, and you, a college student, can directly destroy the world? The professor reopens the universe? Then will there be a few more games for junior high school, high school and college?

That little girl was fucked to pieces by me right after she came on stage, come on

No, buddy, what era are you in?

I started singing when I was a few years old. It's so embarrassing.

I'm not here to badmouth you. The first one is too high. Once the second one is lowered, the impression will be much worse. The scene where the elementary school students fight is too exaggerated.

The writing is very good, but brother, don't stress about the level. The protagonist is so cheating that he almost overturned in the game. Now I have no interest in starting to watch it. It is more Boruto than Boruto! ! ! ! Delete it or ban it. Love will not be confined!

Pretty boy, if you don't know how to write about love, don't write about it. You really make me feel embarrassed! Don't get involved in entertainment!

So far, I don't see any bad points. However, a common problem with beast-controlling novels is that they need to describe training, skills, competitions, and exploration of secret realms. Once you read them, they seem to be watery. It feels like you haven't read them yet. The plot advances slowly. This is determined by the characteristics of the article. Especially this kind of beast-controlling novels about academy battles. It would be better if it is a fantasy type.

I would like to give the author a suggestion: don't make any totems in the world of beast control. You must understand the meaning of totems. Totems are essentially the embodiment of spiritual beliefs, just like gods and believers. If you make a Chinese totem and end up turning it into a little kid's pet beast, isn't this a believer controlling a god? On the contrary, Tiangang has changed.

How can I put it, it would be okay if the background is not substituted, but when I think about the protagonist still being in elementary school, it makes me laugh.

Why does it feel like the protagonist is the pet animal? If the protagonist and the monkey were replaced, it would be a completely different animal story.

It's quite interesting, but I always feel suppressed. The system is okay, but there is too little liver.

"A boy from this world, a cruel dark corpse king appeared in the elf world. He sat on a luxurious toilet made of gold. He often robbed the elves on the way and asked them: Do you think I look like a human being? If the answer is yes, he will sit back on the toilet with satisfaction. If If you answer no, he will become furious and send out his minions to destroy everything. The beautiful elven world is suffering from a great crisis. Please sign a contract with us and become an invincible warrior to resist the Dark Corpse Emperor! " A cute blue bird-shaped elf in the subspace shouted. "I will give you love and tolerance!" A brown and green fat little elf said, blinking his mung bean eyes. "I will give you courage and strength!" A red elf with two horns on his head said, waving his cute little sword. "I will give you happiness and patience!" A purple elf said, swinging his crab hands and tentacles. "And I will give you wisdom and magic!" The cute blue bird-shaped elf stretched out his colorful wings and said. "Who do you want to choose for the contract?" "As a child, I can't tell, I want to try them one by one!" The bald boy said eagerly. As a result, the bald boy named Walkerma von Hindenstein gained unparalleled piety and power. His love was so strong that he claimed to be the spiritual descendant of the God-Emperor and a living saint. He even made up rumors that he was a descendant of the God-Emperor's illegitimate son... His courage was so strong that he would ride into the battlefield in a chariot, shouting spells while wielding a hammer to kill any dirty scum who dared to touch his luxurious carriage with dirty hands. His happiness is so simple. Apart from whipping himself every day, you don't know what he did to the statue of the God Emperor while hiding in his room... His wisdom is so outstanding. He reads ancient scrolls and scripture files in the Imperial Library every day, and from the treasure house of forbidden knowledge, he understands a great truth: justice will defeat evil, otherwise it will be defeated by evil. "After so many years, what is your choice?" The four elves asked in the dark. "Only children make choices, and I, the greatest gentleman in the empire, the invincible pastor, the light of civilization, the holy Archbishop Walkerma, want them all!" The bald middle-aged man stretched out his big hand and shook it tightly. As a result, his body turned into a skeleton, and he was forced to put on the Bone King's armor and the crown of witchcraft. He cut off his right hand and forcibly attached it to a bone melon. His body was repeatedly pierced inside and outside by the black tentacles ejected until it was completely wrapped. Became Nagash, the Corpse King. "What a greedy guy. I've run out of ideas. Let's find the next person to seduce." The four elves named Nurgle, Khorne, Slaanesh, and Tzeentch discussed this. "Young man from this world, a cruel dark corpse king has appeared in the elf world..." Before the cute blue bird-shaped elf finished speaking, the bard who was stopped said: "Lovely elf, do you think I look like a human being?" "Um... You do!" The bird-shaped elf seemed to have a strange association and replied tremblingly. "The answer is correct! Have you heard of Cathay? I have a long narrative poem of 600,000 words. Please give me some time and listen to my details."

It's September, let's end it quickly. Open the next book soon

Update your grandma's legs, where's your update?

"To live or to die, that is the question." Archaon was born in the Nordland of the Empire. On the first day after he was born, his mother drowned him in the sea... Stop! A man shouted from the shadows. Destiny is changed. ------- There was no death in infancy, and there was no sea. He was just abandoned. He appeared in the church and was adopted by the priest. He had grown into a pious, brave and righteous little boy at the age of eight. However, one nameless night, because of his adoptive father's taboo research, a terrible plague came to him. His skin turned into scabs, and his body was full of ulcers. He died of illness... Stop! A man in the shadow shouted angrily. Destiny was changed again. -------- At the age of thirteen, Archaon, who was not sick, stayed away from the church, and grew up healthy, became the squire of the local lord's knight. However, the irritable lord drunkenly beat up the cowardly knight, and the loyal squire who protected the lord hit the lord with a sledgehammer. However, due to the following offense, the lord and the knight jointly captured him and was kicked to death by the horse... Stop! A man in the shadow shouted angrily. Destiny was changed again. -------- The lord beat the knight and did not stop him. The two were drunk and fell into a goblin trap while hunting, and they were all killed. Archaon, who killed the goblins and retrieved their corpses, was adopted by the lord's wife, inherited the family, and became a noble. When he grew up, he was brave, upright and strong. However, after defeating a tribe of beastmen and saving the love of his life, Sister Giselle, he was seriously injured and his right eye was pierced by a rune stone. "The stones need to be smashed, the corpses need to be burned, and warnings need to be issued. Our empire is not a place for their chaos!" As soon as Archaon finished his heroic words and took the initiative to cut off the rear, he was crushed to death by the tauren... Stop! A man in the shadow shouted angrily. Destiny was changed again. ------- The hero saves the beauty, successfully escapes, and robs a forbidden magic book guarded by the beastman. In order to expose the devil's conspiracy, he, godfather Dagbert, and nun Giselle rush to the imperial capital Altdorf to report to the high priest of the Sigma Temple. However, halfway through, a group of Knights of the Temple of Sigmar blocked their way. After asking for their names, they killed Godfather Dagbert and Sister Giselle, snatched the Forbidden Grimoire, and stabbed Archaon to death... Stop! There was a man in the shadows who smashed all the cups in front of him. Destiny is changed again and again. ------ Everyone survived. They escaped the pursuit and returned to their hometown castle. What they saw was that the citizens in the castle were slaughtered by the knights of the Temple of Sigmar. The adoptive mother was hanged like a leaning scarecrow on the top of the city. There was a big word at the gate of the city---heresy! He did not cry, only endless sadness. He looked at the scars left when he fought against the devil, and then looked at the faith pendant in his hand, and his faith began to collapse. The adoptive father told him that he saw the reason in the Forbidden Grimoire: "The Forbidden Grimoire revealed the end of the world, and the person who destroyed the world was named Archaon. And that person is you." Archaon did not want to admit such a fate, but he had to believe his adoptive father's words. In order not to bring darkness to the world, he chose to commit suicide by throwing himself into a well. Stop! There was a manly man in the shadows, cursing and modifying the timeline. Destiny was changed again. --------- The adoptive father, lover, adoptive mother, and subjects were all killed by the temple knights. The angry Archaon swore revenge and broke into the Great Temple of Altdorf. He caught the high priest and asked him sharply why he did this! "The Forbidden Grimoire reveals the end of the world. The person who destroyed the world is named Archaon. And that person is you." The great priest said. "Just because of this ridiculous prophecy, you are going to kill my whole family?" Archaon turned dark, full of disgust for Sigma's hypocritical light, and vowed to destroy everything about Sigma and make him pay the price. He broke through the Garden of Nurgle, walked through the Demon Palace of Tzeentch, withstood the temptation of Slaanesh, killed the Great Demon of Khorne, dragged his scarred body to a place of shadow, and was crowned by the Eternal Chosen One. "Stop!" The man in the shadow stood up and said happily: "My name is Bilak! I am your father! Everything you have is given by me, now it's time to give your body back to me!" --------- I am Archaon, the Lord of Doom, the Three-Eyed King, the favorite of the Chaos Gods, the last High King of Norsca, the 13th Eternal Chosen God, the Commander-in-Chief of Chaos, and the boss of the bad guys. I killed Beelak who was playing tricks on me all my life, and I beat Sigma so hard that he cowered in the Kingdom of God and did not dare to go out. Faced with a life that has cycled countless times, how should I choose? "To live or to die, that is the question."

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁

It's been 5 months It's probably been cut.

A fake corpse? Why was it updated suddenly? Or did it suddenly occur to you that you still have an unfinished book?

Your surname is Chu? Chongmei, right?