Family Cultivator: I Sell Storage Bags to Support You

The cover directly dissuades people from wanting to read it.

Ah, this new cover style is really "distinctive". Looking at the introduction, is the male protagonist a soft-boiled guy? Although the problem is not big, in the world of cultivation, I feel that the male protagonist is a bit too useless. According to the current general trend, the male protagonist can eat soft rice, or even do nothing, and can watch movies, but the male protagonist must have the capital and strength to eat soft rice. In the context of cultivating immortals, relying only on emotion and kindness to eat soft rice will not work after all. The above are some minor problems that I felt after reading the introduction. They are just personal feelings.

The first point is the title of the book. The title of the book is very important. The first thing readers can see is the title of your book. They will click in because they think your title is interesting. Therefore, an attractive title is very important. However, the title of the book is not chosen casually. It must not only be interesting, but also fit the story and setting of the book, such as "Global High Martial Arts". ", At first glance, it is the background story of urban + high martial arts. In this way, readers who like martial arts and urban genres will click in and read it. Although your book title can be seen as a fairy tale, it is nothing more, and it only has four words, which is not attractive enough. For example, the name: Immortality begins with taking a wife, or My fairy wife is too strong, is it more interesting? Second, introduction. Readers find the title of the book interesting. The second step is to read the introduction. What is the role of the introduction? To put it bluntly, it is advertising. If the advertisement is good, readers will buy it. If the introduction is not well written, readers may leave after reading the introduction and will not continue to click to read. Therefore, the introduction is also very important. So the question is, how to write the introduction? There are many ways to do it. Just open the ranking list and imitate it. Bring out your interesting plot or golden fingers to let readers feel the charm of your novel. Don't write something that is not there, which will affect the reader's mood. He reads novels for happiness, not to see you introduce your creative process. Third, content. The content of the novel is also the most important part. This part contains a lot of content and the workload is the largest. It must be divided into multiple steps. The first is the outline. It is very important to make a good outline. With the outline, you can ensure that you do not deviate from the main line as much as possible, and you can also sort out your own ideas. It is also a guarantee of updates and reduces the occurrence of stalls. The second is At the beginning, there are three golden chapters at the beginning. Although this theory is wrong, the core is correct. An attractive beginning can retain readers. I read part of your first chapter. The first five or six pages are all narration and background introduction. There is no dialogue and no character introduction. It is all foreshadowing and missing. It is too slow to enter the theme, and it still uses a useless opening, which is very routine. The characters seem interesting, but with so many problems and the fact that you don't have many words, the book is dead on the first step. So, what questions do you have?

Your name is not attractive This: The family cultivates immortality, starting from selling sacks and tattered gowns

It made me laugh. Isn't it inappropriate to put it on the shelf after writing so few words? It's a harvest novel?

Don't subscriptions have to be put on the shelves?😠

Your AI-generated cover would be better than this

You are suitable to be a vase, I wonder if you have the capital!

The topic is too shocking (I keep getting married and I get stronger). It is easy for people to misunderstand this topic as a pornographic article.

What on earth are you recommending and specifying the number of words? I have never seen any author say that too many updates are not enough. . . .

There is a problem with your introduction. It can be changed to the ancient inheritance ability obtained by traveling through the world of cultivating immortals, which is to make storage bags or modify storage bags. Or it turns out that I am a second-generation cultivator, or it can be a golden finger to make storage bags. Men don't really like your introduction, which is dry and smells like dog licking. Men like to read mindless and cool articles, so don't worry too much about the logic. Just pass it.

This book is awesome! Why are there only seven people?

I just saw your complaint about not being able to sign a contract, and then I saw that you signed a contract, which is awesome! Come on!

How can I put it? It is better for the author to write according to his own opinions. The comments can be used as reference. If you write according to the comments, you will be like a headless fly with no goals. After all, everyone has his own ideas and hobbies.

Writing is difficult, I hope you can work hard! Full subscription support. If possible, can you look through the fanart cards I voted for? Thank you so much, I appreciate you💕💕💕

Let me leave you a comment, but this cover directly persuades me to quit 😏. I always have a weird feeling

How come the whole picture of the original god is used as the cover of Xiuxian?

Before writing, you'd better know what types of stories most readers like, rather than writing based on your own preferences. Your hobbies are not equal to everyone's hobbies. You have to remember that the author must start by satisfying the majority of readers. Instead of letting most readers adapt to their own preferences. This is unrealistic, this is internet writing.

There should be a female supporting role of Emperor Ruyan🤓🤓🤓