Offer Abstraction to a Bad World

Why are there so many abstract articles in Qidian recently? One: The more they object, the more it means I am doing something right Two: Abstract card making Three: The saint did not pay when she came Four: I am the prison boss, not the boss Five: Love in Tokyo, add three experience

First of all, I have never been an author, but I want to say, is it difficult to write a hundred chapters a day ? It's not that I'm being unreasonable. After all, I said at the beginning that I've never been an author.

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I came here for the abstract at the beginning, and I was not disappointed. The latter part is not as abstract as the previous one, but it is still very funny. Along with the laughter, the protagonist has created a legendary story. I can only say more, platinum posture. It's just a little less excessive. Basically, the dungeons are seamlessly connected, as well as the emotional line. I hope it will end well no matter what, and don't shed tears if the hero bleeds.

The core of abstraction is an epic story, which is great

One penny is spent in two months, and if you stay on the latest chapter for 20 seconds every day, it will count as a follow-up reading Whether it can be ranked in the recommended pk upgrade depends on the follow-up reading. If you have many monthly passes and recommendations you can also throw it to this book, which can help to hit the new book list. The above is stolen😋 So good brothers, please read hard, meow, and read quickly, meow The more you read, the more enjoyable the book will be, and the more enjoyable the book will be, the more you will read, so please read, thank you meow!

I want to ask, author, after you finish this book, will you still write the last one? The eunuch testimonials you said you were going to publish are also eunuchs.

，🧊，😭         ，，Hajime originally clicked on it for fun, but I didn't expect it to be so pure🧊, but the ending of the first volume was just like my goddess's batch. The batch that looked like Xiang Xiang actually smelled bad. It was written too hastily. Of course, I don't want to give you advice on how to write, how you want to write, but I am talking about a normal plot. Under such circumstances, it is normal to make a living after a bad job. What if you can live a wonderful life, right? It is normal for some people to say good things and others bad things about online articles, but you have to make it more enjoyable before more people can read it. Don't just write what you haven't finished. It's best to go step by step, volume by volume, and don't learn from others (what should be said about work) It's you) Updates intermittently, when the time comes when you are addicted to laziness and really can't be saved, absolutely praise Si, and you should save some manuscripts for emergencies. If you don't have inspiration, you can go to other books for inspiration🧊Finally, I wish you a good night and a good dream😇 (I will give you a golden alliance in my dream)

The early stage was abstract enough and nice to look at, and the middle and later stages were actually okay. However, halfway through the second world, it was quite uncomfortable to watch, and the abstraction ratio was greatly reduced. Personally, I cannot accept that after the heroine gained strength with the help of the protagonist, she actually used this power to force the hero to achieve her goal of possessing him, and she also took it upon herself to manipulate the body created by the hero? Although I know that these plots are a little flirtation arranged by the author, I still can't accept it. In addition, the heroine has changed a lot before and after the second world. She liked the dull heroine in the early stage. But in the later period, after genetic evolution, she felt that she was completely different from before. She became more willful in her relationship with the hero, and abandoned the influence of the heroine's appearance. The weak performance in this relationship personally feels a bit irritating, because the image of the dashing male protagonist in the previous world was too deeply rooted in the hearts of the people. This world suddenly turned into a willful female protagonist who suppressed the protagonist with strength. The protagonist's feeling of "you can do whatever you want, I am invincible" instantly collapsed. Of course, it may be that I am more sensitive, and maybe this is not a problem in the eyes of others. The above only represents my personal views. Different opinions are accepted and please do not criticize them.

I really can't figure out how to play Mirror Lotus in Laoyuan Abyss. You can't say that the power of willpower in martial arts is unlimited for these veterans who feel that they can't touch the abyss at several stages of development, right?

Although I don't think it's necessary, if you have any spoilers, tell me and I'll watch it.

Starting point, witness every cyber tombstone

When I woke up, I clicked on the forum and found that the recommended post on the homepage was actually about practicing current push. I thought it was a commemorative video for a new martial artist. I clicked on it just to show off my talents and encourage the newbies, but the comments below were all "Boss, how did you do that!" "Take me, I can wear black silk!" I thought it was a mocking comment from a fun person, but I didn't expect that I saw it. Comments from my favorite bar owner Bai He: "hxd, give me a tutorial. I almost passed it. Electricity came out several times, but it quickly went out." I was suddenly startled, followed by a burst of ecstasy. With my O Qingzhao strength, I can become famous now. Bai He happened to be live broadcasting too. The barrage immediately exclaimed: "As expected of the god of war, he can easily evoke the pulsating electric current. How many people can do it!" "That's right, if this continues, you will soon be able to master [Current Push]. This progress is probably the second in the world." "I didn't expect that we can also witness the birth of the second in the world." Seeing this, I felt a burst of pride in my heart, and then I pressed the key on the keyboard. Typing "Shirakawa is good at playing, but not very skilled" As soon as the barrage was sent out, there was a burst of rebuttal "Who are you, show your strength" "Wanyuan played" Seeing so many people scolding me, I didn't panic at all. After all, although I am not very powerful, I can do the high-level [Magnetic Field Rotation]. This little [Current Push] is just my plaything. With this confidence, I made a barrage on the computer, "If you don't believe it, come to my live broadcast room and have a look, it will start broadcasting soon" "Come on, let's watch the clown" "I want to see if he has the strength" Martial God Baihe ended up when the current went out, and he also saw the barrage, but he didn't say anything, just said, "Let's take a look. Maybe there really is something, after all, the martial arts master Shirakawa Wakasha who pioneered [Current Push] was not very famous before." I quickly turned on my phone, started the live broadcast, found my martial arts uniform, and put it on... I saw that my chest was clean, except for a newbie martial arts registration medal. Have the other career medals been lost? I didn't care, and went directly to the courtyard, chatting by the way, "Don't look at the career medals, I probably lost them all by accident in the laundry, so just go ahead and prove your strength, don't worry." "That's it, I guess he's a clown." "The master medal was washed away, but the rookie medal was not, right? It's really yours." I took my time, casually put my posture in, and aimed at the old tree not far away. I went up with full confidence, but found that my mind suddenly went blank, I raised my hands in the air and waved around, but I saw only the wind blowing the fallen leaves silently, and in the end not even a single electric current was produced. "Sure enough, I just want to play with the source." "As expected of a cowhide brother, a real shrimp head" Just like that, amidst the clowns, I felt dizzy. It turned out that my martial arts level also dropped by 99%.

After reading it, I feel that the narrative is still a bit fragmented, and the integration of various memes is not very smooth. On the one hand, there are abstract and fun words, on the other hand, there are high-level gram dungeons and a very good protagonist. Moreover, the Tieba system has a sense of presence like a normal system. It is responsible for lighting up achievements and posting things. There is almost no 8U critical review section, and it plays a strategy role at the beginning. But there are still plenty of ideas and fun. I hope the author will write more smoothly and happily when his narrative ability matures.

There are a lot of bad jokes mixed with very little sense of humor. I don't recommend jumping into it, but if you're good with this bad joke, you can just rush through it without thinking.

It was too abstract and kept playing bad jokes, so that when the protagonist of the first dungeon finally became serious, I felt more unsettled than when he was abstract. The author may be trying to say that he has a 100% erosion rate and there is actually a cognitive gap between him and ordinary people, and he is hidden madness. There is always noise in Mu Su's head, which makes him crazy and irrational at ordinary times, but he is also very handsome when he is serious. The Internet memes in this book made me feel that it is too close to reality, so that it makes people feel a bit disconnected when carrying out the plot with extraordinary elements that are not in reality.

I just spent more than ten yuan to read the latest episode, and you told me you were a eunuch?

It's been cut, don't wait any longer

Ai, Ph. D. How come you died after only raising me for a month?

Lao Nuo, don't die! 😭

No, brother, why do you look like this 😭