Immortality in Martial Arts Begins with Tiangang Disha

I almost finished reading it, but I still feel that these 108 magical powers are so weak. It feels like a low-end version. It is purely an online game skill. For example, the magical power Hu Tian, which is one of the best in 72 Earth Fiends, is simply used to create a storage space. This magical power can directly point to the earthly immortal road. His supreme magical power can open up secluded worlds, become the master of the blessed land of the Immortal Family, and can also develop the powerful magical power of the universe in his sleeves. I hope the author can expand it later, otherwise the later period will be boring and become mediocre. After all, they are all attracted by you, Tiangang Earth Demon.

There are a total of 108 Tiangang Disha, and now one is rewarded for rising to a major realm in cultivation. The author doesn't really want to divide it into 108 major realms, right?

You have a pot of heaven, so why not create a space in your teeth, take out the elixir in one thought, and swallow it in your belly, so that the poison that others force to eat can be directly stored in it.

There is no way to see it. One magical power is enough for you to use. You can't use it at all. It's very dull! 😰

It's okay. The good news is that the logic is better than other Shuangwen (finally there is a normal sect), but some plots are a bit deliberate and I don't know why the protagonist is always invincible at the same level. There is no special skill, and the increase in combat power is not very big. The result is not about instant kill, but the protagonist of the same level can basically beat him. Moreover, Xiantian had been using the Black Tiger Fist to enter a large sect before, and he did not change to a more powerful boxing method.

Dip, touch the fish card!

Beautiful, the only immortal martial artist in the world! Tiangang Earth Evil Spell, don't have a female protagonist! Keep growing! ! ! ! Come on! ! ! !

I always feel that the dialogue between the characters is weird, and there are often many typos. I still need to work on it.

It's okay, but the last few chapters from 308 to 315 are a bit of a waste of romance. I don't want to read Xue Ning at all. It's up to you. You don't have many readers, but I think you are almost losing me, who has been voting for you for several months. 😅😥😜

But the writing is okay. Although there is no big break point, it is still stable. However, the text description is a bit bland and makes me sleepy.

Author, write a little more smoothly

I finished watching it for free, except for a few flaws at the beginning, but the rest is pretty good.

I have almost caught up to the latest chapter. The writing is not bad and the plot could be optimized. There are too many similar plots and they are too clichéd. It doesn't mean that clichés can't be used, but it means that you need to change a few more routines. For example: the plot of treating a disease and providing opportunities is a bit boring.

Most of the comments are AI pictures posted by someone, you ancient style nicher.

Author, you are so persistent. Please give me a monthly vote!