Lord of the Mysteries: The Witch Who Emerged from the Knowledge Moor

If you want to watch the plot, you can leave. There is almost no description of the plot. The whole story is a meaningless interaction between the protagonist, Melissa and her doppelgänger. The protagonist doesn't care about improving his strength at all. All he thinks about is the relationship between himself and others. It's completely written like a light novel romance novel.

After seeing your comments, I thought about it and came up with a plan overnight. In combination with the developing plot, a direction has been determined. This is the direction and it will not change back. Baihewen, it remains the same and will not change. However, after using this design, I modified it later, and it may lead to the appearance of the clone of the Immortal Lord, which is the emergence of the Mad Hatter. This is a male. It cannot be repaired or removed, otherwise the outline will be changed. It can be regarded as feeding the male body directly to the immortal. The next time, the direction was determined, and I began to focus on the plot.

The plot is protracted, and most chapters are still the popular science author's own personal invention. At the same time, it is useless in itself, and there are too many roles in the protagonist's split personality, making the protagonist himself very powerless.           Daily writing is not like daily writing. After all, there are so many ability settings. But it happened to be updated to now, either the interaction between the protagonist and his personality clone, or the daily life of Klein and Melissa. There are many riddles, and some abilities just give you a very bluffing name, and then there is no more.

Alice in blacksouls is the incarnation of Nyarlathotep, the true ruler of the outer gods.

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It has no other use than to fill up the word count. It might as well be set as an incarnation evolved from out-of-control power. The incarnation disappears every time a part of the power is recovered.

So far, it's all boring. It can be said that there is no plot. It has been dragging on for a long time. It's like a light novel, but it's watery. It has a bunch of inexplicable interactions and a lot of descriptions and settings. It doesn't seem to have a sense of substitution at all. It's obviously a huge world view, but it's written in a very petty style.

There are too many inner scenes and the plot is too slow. In one sentence, it's like the sea, the sea, you are all water. I hope it gets better.

There is a bug. The main countries are all in the northern continent, and the southern continent is a colony...

First of all, it is obvious that this book is a light novel with a mysterious world view. Then the problem is, most of the mystery audience does not read light novels, and readers who read light novels also have better choices. After all, the mystery worldview is not suitable for writing light novels. As far as this book is concerned, the plot progress is too slow, and most of the space is filled with meaningless posts and long paragraphs of popular science about the author's settings, which to a certain extent even affects the logic and coherence of the plot. I read in the book review section that the author said that the follow-up would focus on the plot, but the problem is that this book already has hundreds of thousands of words, and most people will definitely not be able to read the follow-up. Currently, I hope that the author can reduce the large-scale interaction between posts, and give priority to the plot. Add posts after the main line is written, and don't eat the seasonings as a meal. Ah Hun Dan (beat the table) If the author wrote this book purely for his own pleasure, then treat it as if I didn't say it