Immortality Begins with Horizontal Training Mutation

Come on, Shen Nong! 😭😭After reading the comment section, I was hesitant whether to read it or not.

Mutations! Why doesn't the protagonist pull out his own spine and make a sword? Dig out your own intestines and use them to make ropes (binding fairy ropes), and use your nails and fingers to spray long-range attacks (yiyangzhi).

The writing is average, but so many people say it's not well written. Then I have to say something good. First of all, it is not an AI, and it can be seen that it is a newcomer. Finally, the writing style is acceptable. In fact, the problem is nothing more than abruptness, as many people said. But in fact it is not a problem of turning, but a problem of description. The biggest characteristic of newcomers is that they are not good at writing. Because they don't know how to write well, they are anxious to turn drafting into typing and explain things clearly before they are forgotten. I don't have the energy to pour water, which leads to the suddenness. It actually lacks moisture. But it's not impossible to criticize, after all, we are consumers. But back to the beginning, if someone can criticize, someone can criticize. If someone is not talented, they like to sing the opposite. If no one said it, I might just say a few words about the first two chapters. But everyone is criticizing the author, so I have to say the opposite. It saves the author from really thinking that the world is full of bad people.

I suggest you don't mark it as having no heroine, I don't know who is being disgusted here, write it openly and honestly that the lead character is a woman, I can respect you, but the standard mark has no heroine, but the lead character is in heat everywhere

Shennong comes to test the poison 1. Since it is a system of killing + horizontal refining + adding points, don't mess with the broken pets. Low-level skills can be synthesized later after you practice them. Giving pets is a waste of resources, and the protagonist will quickly eliminate the blood corpses. 2. Although there are various variations in ghost martial arts, the Yakuza style is like this. If you don't practice it, you won't understand. The fighting form is not like a human being, which is a bonus. As long as there are techniques to maintain the normal human form. 3. Again, the upgrading of Dianzhongdian reduces experience gain. You are not a game. The result of this is that it is better to save life points at card levels, and then rush to the full level after breaking through the realm.

A novel without a heroine opens dozens of pages and then a heroine pops up on the page? Are you going to write endlessly about the supporting female characters and their ambiguous harems?

The writing is very fragmented and cannot convey a sense of crisis.

Hanging sheep's heads and selling dog meat. No heroine means stallion. Shen, Shen Nong was poisoned to death here after tasting hundreds of herbs.

Why do you have no heroine?

I have never come in without a heroine. When I came in, I saw a label of heroine.

Please tell me in the introduction that this is a mock article. I clicked in with great interest and was fed a lot of shit.

Help me manage this chapter and QQ group. I will give you red envelopes after the first order and after finishing the book. Thank you.

The sense of immersion is so bad that I can't watch it.

I'll give you 5 words, the plot is very abrupt, the taste is very embarrassing

Regarding the character card, it is an important female character, so the classification is set as the heroine of this book, but not the protagonist's spouse.

First of all, this book is mindless. The author writes in bits and pieces, whatever comes to mind, and he does it first without considering the consequences. When he is about to die, the skills and golden fingers suddenly appear, and then he hits this and that without any target. Second, the plot and characterization are not good. The plot is weird. The characters are all mentally retarded except for the protagonist. The protagonist is also stupid.

I won't delete the book reviews. You can speak freely, whether you are a black man or a book lover, I am too lazy.

Doesn't the introduction of this book say there is no heroine? Why is there a female protagonist in the later title?

It's not really a horizontal exercise, at most it's hard Qigong or something like that.

The subject matter is okay, the setting is bad, and the writing is average. To sum up, this book is wonderful and inexplicable~

This book has the appearance of becoming a god, come on ✊✊✊

A lot of people will be discouraged if she doesn't have the label of being a heroine.

The first chapter is easy to put people off. I feel that the protagonist is silly and virginal, and doesn't understand the dangers of human nature.

The starting points are written in the introduction, and they are the same as those written by AI It is not like those written by individuals.

No heroine label and heroine color card

The first chapter is unattractive

The first three chapters can persuade most people away

As soon as I read the introduction, I knew this book would be great for learning various sword techniques.

Then when he added some points, he could still fight a dragon, but he was seriously injured and dying. Then he got into a fight with a dog and ran away without even breaking his defense, leaving the villagers alone. What's even more funny is that when you don't have the ability, you directly make bad remarks in front of the devil's face, which makes you laugh to death. The second point is that it is an iron cloth shirt. You can cut it with a knife and leave blood. When a dog hits you, it will only be a little red. The donkey's head is wrong to the horse's mouth

In fact, it would be better if all those villagers died. It was a fitting death for being so stupid in such a dangerous world.