I Create Monsters in Tokyo

Why is the protagonist who is bound to become a god in the future afraid that his male partner is better than him at picking up girls?

How can I put it, the plot is okay, but the transition is too uncomfortable. The last chapter is still a killing spree, and the next chapter is a campus romance, and the timeline is also messed up.

In the first ten chapters, the protagonist didn't make a deep impression, and then a supporting character continued to write more than ten chapters. I wonder if I thought the protagonist was changed?

Chapters 40-50 suddenly become campus daily life, and then the whole process has nothing to do with the main plot, just campus love. Does the author know what theme he is writing about? 😅, you are a behind-the-scenes group portrait stream, not a campus love story, and other people's occasional love affairs are interspersed with daily life. You can just write 10 chapters in a row. According to your update speed, readers are required to read 5-6 days of campus love daily life. If you are following up, you will probably run away early when you see this.

Obviously the title and introduction of the book are behind the scenes to create the monster, but you have to use Japanese light novel writing method to write about campus youth love. Why don't you know how to write when you don't have a relationship or a woman? Or what?

I came to see the protagonist do things and fool the world, not to see the daily life of love. I don't distinguish between priorities. I didn't notice the indifferent nature of the protagonist mentioned in the article. If you really want to create a BOSS-type protagonist, I suggest you refer to Dior and Aizen. Socializing with those classmates is completely unnecessary. Firstly, it does not advance the plot; secondly, it does not fit the character. The protagonist's character is indifferent, not enthusiastic. There is a serious sense of separation between the previous and later plots. As long as you design a plot in which the protagonist watches others gradually die without being touched, I will consider you to be suitable for the character.

I saw everyone complaining and the author didn't explain it. I am 80% certain that this is a book written by AI. It started out logically and then changed direction. The reason is that the author wrote about daily love on campus with pig's feet in AI, so AI wrote about campus love and it directly derailed the plot.

Let's have less campus time. There will be fighting and daily school life, no matter the priority.

The focus is still on the conflict between monsters and humans, and it is not recommended to upgrade beyond the scope of RB. It can be used as an intermediate adjustment for daily use. If it is too long, readers will lose patience. Human careerists with animal hearts and human faces, monsters with animal faces and human hearts, and reformers who are not human beings.

Have you turned into a person who has no idea about campus love? Just change the title of the book.

It seems to be copied from a book. That book also has the same opening, but the monster is a fishman.

I feel that if there was no part about drinking drugs, the weirdo transformation would be really Japanese, with strong obsessions but still retaining humanity, it would be Aoife Enoch.

Many female character names have a sense of familiarity

"I am the mastermind in Tokyo"

I couldn't see clearly when I yawned, so I thought it was a toy with the male partner.

Refrigerator, motorcycle, little gangster girl = runaway motorcycle snow girl