Red Mansion: Starting from Saving Xue Baochai

I finally saw the heroine Baochai. It's so rare. They are basically matching. You must order it.

I only have one suggestion, don't accept a married woman like Qing Xifeng. Now I'm scared of the Red Mansions from Qidian.

I'm actually quite puzzled. The first female protagonist in this book is Baochai. For some reason, Daiyu doesn't even appear, yet the character is still the most popular. There may be many people who hate Baochai, and there are also many people who dislike Baochai in other Red Mansions novels. I suggest you watch Zhang Zhihao's talk about the Dream of Red Mansions, so that you can understand the perspective of each golden hairpin in the Red Mansions. The story is very profound! Actually, Baochai is helpless and feels bitter...

Compared with the Red Mansions fanfiction, this one is definitely accessible. The author also has ink in his belly, his writing style is good, and he also has logic. It's just that the garden drama is not an H drama. You are driving so fast, you are not afraid of entering a small dark room.

It's best not to have too many original girls, just enough golden hairpins

This book is considered to be very good among the Red Mansion novels currently being serialized One: There is no originality and a bunch of princesses, princesses, saints and oirans are disgusting Two: Not to be the dog licker and nanny of the giant babies in the Jia family Three: Not to be a stallion, drag all the dirty and smelly things into the house Four: The plot design is reasonable and has no obvious poisonous points, and the writing is also good, especially the driving plot I don't know why it is not popular

Those beauties want it🥵🥵🥵🥵 Don't listen to what they say

The ceiling of the fat world

The problem is that the stones are too small to break the city wall, and the basket under the hot air balloon is not big. How much can be loaded with big stones? Not counting the weight of the stones. If there are only a few people, you may not be able to move the stones. There really is no limit to the weight of a hot air balloon. If it is loaded too much, you will not be able to fly up. It is not a modern hot air balloon. You might as well throw fuel or something like that.

The writing is quite good, and the beginning is relatively compact. I wonder what the rhythm will be like later on? It is recommended that the heroine control no more than five, Chai Daiyun Yuan Tan is fine, and the others should be matched. If there are too many, she will easily become a paper character. It will be difficult to write if the harem is too big. Come on, author!

Red Mansions Romance is much better than a simple stallion. It's pretty good, but it's better to have less political opinions. It's too immature.

The writing is quite good, but I think it would be better to focus on the garden drama and the heroine's daily life. After all, those who come to see Red Mansion are only here for Chai Dai. If the battle in the court is not written well, it will be very difficult to score points. Of course, if it's well written, just pretend I didn't say it

It would be nothing without the protagonist Baochai. I don't like this kind of fanfic... The protagonist is a variable in the original work. If there is no protagonist, it should not change...

Yes, the fanfic is no longer from the Jia family. I can't stand it when I see the concubines, servants or princes in the Jia family.

I collected it two weeks ago and finished reading it today. I feel that the overall pace is very tight and not draggy. It is better than most Red Mansions fan fiction. I personally judge it to be more than a grain of food. I can keep writing.

They all talk about advantages, let me talk about some disadvantages. The other plots are very good, but I don't like the length of the martial arts test because there is too much foreshadowing in the early stage. As a result, the readers already have a premonition that the protagonist will crush and win before the exam starts, so there is no sense of surprise. It seems that the author is not good at writing about officialdom. The characters with official positions now appearing, including the positive characters including the emperor, all trust the protagonist unconditionally, as if everyone knows that the protagonist is the protagonist, and the villain's attempts to make things difficult for the protagonist are too superficial. Either Mrs. Wang casually said a few words to disgust the protagonist, or Jia Yucun killed the protagonist directly, without any room for change. If this were any other official novel, you could say that the villain is decisive in killing, and either doesn't do it or does it absolutely. But this is a Red Mansions fan. If you know a little bit about the Dream of Red Mansions, you will naturally think deeper. If you, the author, write without intrigue, there will be a sense of fragmentation.

Can you stop having so many female protagonists? Can one person really like so many women? 5.6 Is enough for the top day. There are too many Facebook posts, especially Ning Mansion 3. You Jia Qin feels disgusting. What does it have to do with you? You still have Cao Cao in the house. Not everyone likes it. I hope those brothers who like it won't have that day with their wives.

The skill of writing is sophisticated. It depends on how the protagonist guards against the emperor in the later period. He should control a state and then go overseas to develop, or he should attack Japan directly, colonize and enslave them, and use them as a private territory.

I will build a dedicated building to thank all the readers who voted for this book and gave rewards. Thank you for your support or2

Very good, it's been a long time since I've looked forward to a book like this, keep up the good work💪

I suggest the author reveal Jia Baoyu's birth with jade in order to shatter his sense of superiority. It is very likely that Mrs. Wang did it for Jia Baoyu's inheritance.

Brother, be careful. What a great book, don't drive in there

Author, you should consider a way out, shouldn't the protagonist leave no way out?

I might get better grades if I change my name.

It's particularly incomprehensible. It stands to reason that when people mention Red Mansions, their first reaction, regardless of whether they have read it or not, is a similar image of classical literature and traditional culture. But what's strange is that so many fan fictions are all about exploring technology and writing pornographic books. Not one of them has really written towards the core of Red Mansion. How on earth can people who have read Red Mansions be willing to regard Sister Lin as one of the harem troupes? To be one of those harem troupes who write harem stories on the surface but actually write pornographic stories, it would be better to die in tears. In that case, in the end, it is better to be clean than to be clean. To become the heroine of these books is really to fall into a ditch.

Come on brother, this is what I like, it looks good 😍

Love to watch 🙂

Douyin=April

Is this book useless? One book a day?

How can a qualified book friend circle not have idiom solitaire? I will do whatever I want first.