Douluo Jueshi: I Really Don't Have the Physique of a Prosperous Wife

I finally understand why so many authors don't write about family members. These five or six chapters made me feel numb all over, so embarrassing. I feel like it's a thankless job, so I don't write about my relatives.

Since we are going to write about little Huo Niang, let's just use Huo Dongxiao as the female protagonist 😏

Little Huo Niang

At the beginning of the chapter, he is useless and has zero soul power🌚Can you give me a half level or a first level? 🙄It's enough to feel uncomfortable while reading a novel

I was persuaded to quit in the first chapter. When writing about twin martial souls, you have to have zero innate soul power. Even if you have seven or eight levels, you can accept it.

Forget about being a master and a rebel, sisters, mother and daughter. Gu Yuena, Snow Emperor, Zhang Lexuan, Han Ruoruo, Meng Hongchen, these five girls are enough, especially Gu Yuena, who is a master and a disciple, come on.

Sex change is so disgusting. Obviously a person is a man in the reader's mind. You changed his gender. Then go play the love game with him. Then penetrate him. So disgusting 🤢

In the future, don't write these touching stories about the characters' families and their relationships. You won't write the preface and the like, and you won't really make people feel embarrassed. Moreover, the original purpose of reading the novel is to feel comfortable and refreshed. When you describe how bad the protagonist and Huo Yuhao's family environment is, it really makes people uncomfortable. In your novels, you often lose the desire to read after reading the first five chapters. You can't even attract people from the front, so how can you let people see the back? How do you get people to subscribe? No matter how good your writing is at the back, your front is unreasonable and looks like a desire. Brother, please listen to me. Don't write this kind of beginning in the future. You are not suitable for this kind of writing.

Little Huo Niang

Qidian still owes me a dislike for the author. It's not enough to just block a novel, but just block the author. One novel written by an author can tell the level of his other novels. If you really hate one book, don't read anything else.

Yan Shaozhe and Xuanzi are so disgusting. When can we kill him?

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The plot is not good, the characters of the original work have collapsed, and the description of daily emotions is both serious and upright. As a time traveler, looking at his words and deeds, it gives people the feeling of being upright and upright at the same time.

I hope the author won't make too many mistakes. The early stage of the last book was too discouraging, and I felt invincible at the beginning. Moreover, the club in the early stage was a bit awkward. In the second month, the failure was even stronger than the dark blue points. The failure was too big. However, the travel between two worlds in the later part of the last book was very imaginative. Unfortunately, many people may not be able to see the later part. In short, I hope the author can write more and more people will subscribe.

If Xuanzi is disabled this time, he should stop doing sit-ups and simply let him be taken out for treatment. When he met an evil soul master on the road, he died of serious injuries due to Yan Shaozhe's carelessness. Let's experience the feeling of those who were killed by him.

Ma Xiaotao, Xiaoxiao, Tang Ya, Han Ruoruo, Ling Luochen, Ye Guyi, Nana, Meng Hongchen, do you want to accept them?

Gu Yuena

It feels good at the beginning, but why does the plot become so exaggerated later on? And it's a bit pornographic, I can't understand it.

Does the heroine have the Ice Emperor Xiao Xiao Rui Beast?

If it were to be completed in one month, the number of words would be too short.

Does carving a magic circle require mental strength?

Anyone in Dou Er can touch him, but Wang Dong must not be touched. He can easily be targeted by Tang San. Think of Huo Yuhao's fate.