Coiling Dragon, Crossing Magnus, Awakening Golden Finger

Traveling through Magnus, I was satisfied and was about to show off my talents Suddenly received news: The Warmaster was assassinated

As long as Magnus doesn't take action against Linley, Linley's four-line mutation will be abolished!

If Beirut becomes the main god, it is not suitable to go to the Magnolia Continent. After all, no one wants to have mice in the house, right?

Is this story about Lin Lei or about Magurus? Who is the protagonist? Can we distinguish the priorities? Writing like this, I might as well just watch Panlong again. The more I watch, the more disgusting I feel, so I gave up.

The setting of your book is not good. It is full of meaningless words. The protagonist has no sense of existence, no opinion, no goal, no motivation, no sense of satisfaction, and there is no main line. Chun Chun is just a low word count. Chun Chun is Lin Lei's nanny tool. The key point is, does Lin Lei need you to be a nanny? The second one is this golden finger. If this kind of unearned golden finger is not written well, it will very clearly show that the protagonist is a waste. There is a reward for defeating Lin Lei. Obviously the protagonist can defeat it on his own, but for the sake of a large number of words, it takes a long time to train people to defeat him. I am speechless. Later, a patch was added to lower the level to defeat him so that the reward would be higher. I was also convinced. There is another thing that I can't figure out. Why do so many people always use this kind of brainless gold finger? Can't I just think of something more reasonable? Is this kind of gold finger that has no logic at all and gets something for nothing really good? Hey, what's wrong with such a good writing style?

The fan novel is almost forty chapters long, and it doesn't even have a climax.

It's much worse than the previous one, so I stopped reading it. It has so many advantages over Linley, but it turns out that it's just a dog-licking job, like a slave. It's better not to write this one, so that I can maintain the greatness of the previous one

It's a bit too much to cut it just for the shelves

Coiling Dragon, crossing Magnus, I worked as a nanny for Lin Lei in the Magnolia Continent. This is the title of the book.

It doesn't matter if you find someone to beat Lin Lei, but you also arrange to keep a pet? And what kind of pet experience pills are you going to draw? What are the uses of pets in this world? Magnus has lived for who knows how many billions of years. His strength is only inferior to that of the Lord God, and he doesn't even know how many billions he has under his command. What do you mean by writing a pet and raising it from scratch? Are there not enough servants or are the servants of the higher God not strong enough? Can you help the protagonist break through to the Lord God? Or can you cheat it and get it to perfection? But even Dzogchen is useless. Linley and Beibei grew up together. Would it be interesting for you to imitate the original novel and create a whole pet? Pure water word count.

Traveling through Magnus, full of ambition... "Stop him quickly, don't let Magnus escape from Warhammer Fortress!" The King of Resistance - Magnus

I'm speechless. Why don't you just accept a disciple? It's so troublesome.

I thought it was a red one-eyed Ogryn

After looking at Magnus, I thought he was the primarch who ascended to demons. 😅

My Panlong fans don't even have 30% of your collection, and I haven't even cut them, so why are you cutting them?

I checked and found that your initial order of 600 is not low, right? Why cut it?

This data is so bleak that the author cut it off immediately after putting it on the shelves!

Hey, I still invested in you. Why do you have such good results? I also failed in my investment.

This book is good, why would I want to cut it?