Naruto: One Golden Finger Every Month

Okay, there is already Tobirama to protect Uchiha, and now there is Hashirama to protect Uchiha.

Your Shisui is the younger brother. In the beginning, Uchiha and Senju are very similar to each other in the body.

I've read a few chapters and it's okay. Will the number of golden fingers be increased by one every month? It won't be cancelled. It feels like there will be nothing to write about in terms of combat power soon. Is Ino the heroine?

The pace is slow and the story is simple. After taking the grandfather, the protagonist has 70% of the grandfather's thinking. So what should the grandfather do? The protagonist is very assertive from the beginning and succeeds in everything, so the old man with the ring might as well become Chiyo's mother-in-law

Your dialogue is very entertaining. The Chinese flavor is too strong. It doesn't mean that writing a Japanese comic book has to have a big flavor. It's just that you can't immerse yourself in the world of the novel at all. You seem to be immersed in it. For such a short period, you can't feel any state at all. It's an instant drama. You don't have to be so particular. What a good boy. You can't be so abrupt as a narrator. Who talks like this in Naruto???

To be honest, I have already read several novels about time-traveling into the Uchiha clan. I originally planned to read them, but now that I saw the three characters of Uchiha, I just didn't want to read them. After all, I wanted to find a novel to read at the beginning. It turned out that eight of the ten Naruto books were about time-traveling into the Uchiha clan, and the remaining two were either about the Hyuga clan.

What are you writing about? Such a good subject matter is useless. I suggest you cut it and rewrite it.

This is not reflected in the characteristics of the original characters at all, especially the dialogue. To be honest, if you change the names, it will be the dialogue of a traditional fantasy novel.

This introduction, I remember Hashirama is a talented player, are you sure you want Hashirama to teach you? Think about Naruto teaching Konohamaru, are you sure you can learn it?

Today you ignore me, Chiyo, but tomorrow I, Chiyo, will make you unable to reach your heights😍