Rebirth: Starting from Saving Bai Yueguang

I also felt poisonous when I saw the thirteenth picture. The harem is not a problem, but I personally feel that there is a problem with what you wrote. You directly wrote that the male protagonist is still a little conscious, and then she takes the initiative.

This beginning is so pretentious. Also designed to sing. You can't even see what they are really going to do, and you are still singing without any reason Although the real Qiong Yao drama looks disgusting, at least it is a human reaction If you were in that situation, would you still sing? When you don't know the other person's situation at this time, don't you shout quickly, express your feelings, and even threaten him, if you want to jump down, I will die with you, etc. Are you still singing? You save the person first, and then sing to him quietly. I think it's a pretty good plot.

Good guy, with your word count, how long do you have to wait to invest 😥

The title is very misleading. The content is just a harem story. If you want to see a single female protagonist, you can leave it. It looks like it's basically the evil version of Nobita from Doraemon.

I was so embarrassed when I read it. From the moment the girl was about to jump off the building, there was no explanation as to why the girl was jumping off the building. In the first few chapters, it seemed inexplicable that she wanted to jump off the building, and then the male protagonist went to save her without giving any explanation. There was no explanation before. I was a little embarrassed when I saw it. It felt like she was jumping off the building for no reason. Can't you explain it in the previous chapter and then save her, or write another plot of her jumping off the building?

It's bullshit to start poisoning after writing Chapter 13

The harem is not poisonous. People nowadays have been brainwashed by capital. Look at the capital that lasts forever... And those reality stars should write less, they are all rags...

What happened to some people? When reading entertainment articles, two things must be understood. First, there are single female protagonists and multiple female protagonists. Second, is the timeline. Some people post comments under books with multiple female protagonists, requesting a single female protagonist; or requesting a millennium timeline in a timeline book 10 years later. These two things are related to the outline and cannot be compatible. You don't like to go straight to find books that suit your taste, insist on finding books that don't suit your taste, and then become a keyboard warrior and tell poison? What's the difference between going to McDonald's and insisting on ordering a KFC? You shouldn't enter this door! How can a person be so mean?

Collected it, it's a fine product at first glance